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Post by Deleted on Mar 31, 2007 at 5:47am
Thanks for the review, Birdy! Usually when I finish a story, I'm done with the characters. (Poor things, they're pooped. ) But it's entirely possible that I may get a great idea and write about them again.
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Post by Kat on Mar 31, 2007 at 3:58pm
[shadow=purple,left,300]Ta-da!
Vanity - Luau
Personally, I would have liked to know what happened to the dark faerie in the end. ^^; Still, it was nice that Sarah and Andrea had a happy ending...and so did Chastings. I bet he'll be around for a long, long time.
Super Chel - Kitty
The plan was cute. Chel and Eric are two smart cookies. XD At least the plan wasn't too good to be true - you know, those deux ex machinas and those plots that suddenly come true in the blink of an eye for some reason or another.
Illusen's Bad Hair Day - Ummagine3284
GASP. Jelly FTW! *ducks and runs* This was really entertaining. *watches a Meepit cosplaying as an Usuki pass by* The Illusen vs. Jhudora rivalry never dies - it just gets new twists.[/shadow]
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Post by Nut on Mar 31, 2007 at 4:40pm
The Faerie Wars plot is to blame for late reviews... I spent this morning lurking on the NeoBoards. Comics[glow=blue,2,300] Pointless Nonsense – Games Room[/glow] Heehee, I like the Kacheek’s comment about it being really bright. My thoughts exactly. x3 The art is cute, round and colorful. The Kacheek and Aisha could be a bit more expressive, but the characters are drawn cutely and I particularly like how you drew AAA. XD The joke was amusing and original. I have my own theories on what happened to those game pets, but I enjoyed seeing this take on it. XD As for the problematic door, maybe it would’ve helped if you’d made all the pets’ feet level with the top of the floor instead of letting the Lupe and Aisha sit under it. Then it would have seemed more like the door was dividing them. The author’s note wasn’t quite necessary, but nevertheless I enjoyed this comic; very cute. ^^ [glow=blue,2,300] Why Some Neopians Don’t Make…[/glow] Heehee, this was a really cute comic! ^^ A cute idea—I can just see the Tombola Man doing that. XD How did he get to be a teacher anyway? The art is cute and uncluttered. Like the others, I love how the Tiki Tack Man has an expression on his mask. x3 That little simple smiley face is just so endearing, and the sad face is really cute. I like how you put a board in the first panel despite leaving the backgrounds of the other panels blank. All in all, a really cute and funny comic. ^^ [glow=blue,2,300] The Bunker[/glow] This was a really nice comic. :3 Although the punchline didn’t really feel like a punchline (does that little guy in the background have anything to do with the plot, I wonder?), the little bonus doodle was great. Your bonuses are often the best parts of your comics. x3 I appreciate your including the part about “not deemed funny enough”, because I agreed with it and felt a little more at ease with the ending of the comic, knowing that I hadn’t missed a joke or anything. This isn’t to say, however, that the bonus doodle was the only funny part of the comic. I actually enjoyed the first two panels very much; they were practically a whole comic in themselves. The Shenkuu panel was great. x3 (Although I wouldn’t have included the “on vacation” note, as it distracts a bit.) It made me want to laugh right there. From there, things seemed to play out more like a story. I think the special effects of Aranane’s spell looked quite spiffy. I’m interested to see what’s going to happen in the next comic. ^^ [glow=blue,2,300] Razzle Dazzle – Episode X[/glow] Hmm… will this help break the ice between the new guest and the gloomy blue brute, or cause more tension? The art was, as always, really lovely, like something right out of an animation film. The gloomy blue brute comment made me grin. ^^ The expressions are great. ^^ The very last panel just looks so much like a professional image out of a cartoon. ^^ The second-to-last panel felt more like a punchline than the last one did, but I understand this is a continuing series, and I am interested to see what happens in the next comic. ^^ [glow=blue,2,300] Never Give Up!![/glow] Double exclamation points… ._. *has a phobia of multiple exclamation points* Oh, wow. Potato Meepits. I don’t know why it’s so amusing, but it is. I can just see it. I wonder if I could have an army of Watery MerPotato Meepit Dolls? *cough* This was a cute comic. ^^ The art’s very nice—I love that ray zapping the potato, and the last panel. Although the stacks of coins did look kind of odd. Maybe because the side view makes them just look like stacks of thin rectangles rather than coin shapes. I like Sloth’s pose with his arms spread wide. Are the Meepits really almost as big as him?
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Post by kittygirl on Mar 31, 2007 at 4:52pm
[shadow=purple,left,300] Super Chel - KittyThe plan was cute. Chel and Eric are two smart cookies. XD At least the plan wasn't too good to be true - you know, those deux ex machinas and those plots that suddenly come true in the blink of an eye for some reason or another. Nope no magical plan for me. This plan would still need a lot of luck to work, but we're going to ignore that. Thanks for the review.
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Post by Tashni on Mar 31, 2007 at 9:54pm
Note To Self- Enlist Tashni as Proofreader next time... LOL, I would be happy to edit for you anytime. ^_^ *snicker* Um, yeah. What a strange typo . . .
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Post by PFA on Apr 2, 2007 at 3:07pm
[glow=blue,2,300] Pointless Nonsense – Games Room[/glow] Heehee, I like the Kacheek’s comment about it being really bright. My thoughts exactly. x3 The art is cute, round and colorful. The Kacheek and Aisha could be a bit more expressive, but the characters are drawn cutely and I particularly like how you drew AAA. XD The joke was amusing and original. I have my own theories on what happened to those game pets, but I enjoyed seeing this take on it. XD As for the problematic door, maybe it would’ve helped if you’d made all the pets’ feet level with the top of the floor instead of letting the Lupe and Aisha sit under it. Then it would have seemed more like the door was dividing them. The author’s note wasn’t quite necessary, but nevertheless I enjoyed this comic; very cute. ^^ Thanks for the review! Hmm... next time I have to draw a door like that I'll try that. Whenever that would ever be... XD *also makes a mental note to do something about those useless author's notes*
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Post by Nut on Apr 7, 2007 at 1:29am
I fail at reviews this week. DX *is tired*
Continued Series
[glow=blue,2,300]Illusen’s Bad Hair Day: Part Two[/glow] Hehe, this was an amusing chapter. ^^ Those Blumaroos must be Neopia’s official reminder service…
*blink* Planning her bad hair day. This just strikes me as amusing, since bad hair days are known to be spontaneous happenings. XD
The use of pronouns here is kind of confusing; at first I wasn’t sure which “she” was Illusen or Jhudora.
“Problem” shouldn’t be plural here.
*imagines Jhudora tossing her head in slow motion* The image… XDD
The triviality of this whole episode amuses me, on both faeries’ parts. Of course, their rivalry is known to be petty, but still… stealing all the herbal shampoo from the whole of Neopia seems pretty extreme. XD
[glow=blue,2,300]Super Chel: Part Three[/glow] Yess, children, that’s how you do it. Let them accept you into their ranks, let them make you their friend, and while their guard is down, slowly turn them to your side… Ingenious plan, really. x3
I love how all the kids’ games sound like something I might’ve played when I was younger… Having a tea party where one of the guests gets kidnapped is very much like a game I would’ve played. Hehe, it gives the story that feel of realism.
It was really sweet how all the kids got in on the game. Ah, the memories. Overall a very cute story, and I love how Eric and Chel got their way. ^^
[glow=blue,2,300]Vanity: Part Four[/glow] Yikes, that was a sudden turn of events. It was really nice to see how the sisters interacted wit each other on the balcony, perfectly in character. I liked the details such as Sarah’s wanting to jump, and how she pushed away Andrea’s paw. It was also rather enjoyable to see the Dark Faerie say that Andrea was prettier than her sister.
Awww… Chastings is acting as gentlemanly as ever.
The sisters’ cauliflower-like heads sound quite unpleasant. What a shame that Andrea lost the Beauty Contest because of that fiasco. At least Chastings acted expectably sweet about it. ^^
I was a little surprised that the series ended so quickly, yet I’m satisfied overall. The series was not only an interesting look into Beauty Contest rituals applied to real Neopian life, but all of your characters are very well-defined and enjoyable to read about. Andrea is just so likeable and she and Chastings are so charming, they alone make the series worthwhile. ^^
[glow=blue,2,300]Catching Up: Part Seven[/glow] The chracters are, as always, very interesting to read about. I love seeing Evea analyze her students’ characters.
This event sounds interesting, and as always I love reading about your take on the faerie cloud racers and their academy.
Poor Patricia. If only she’d just talk to Miss Evea…
[glow=blue,2,300]The Mirror of Memories: Part Nine[/glow] Uh-oh, Aina’s caught now… At least she doesn’t have to keep up a lie anymore. It’ll probably help in the long run that Malin and Enzie are wise to her; it doesn’t look like they’ll be falling for any more fibs now.
A rather interesting chapter. I enjoyed seeing Aina tripped up over all her little mistakes; she’s had it coming to her for a while…
[glow=blue,2,300]Legend Seekers: Mysterious Magic – Part Ten[/glow] Aww, a happy ending to a beautiful series. And Pemero and Jen are finally together again, the reunion that we waited through the whole series for.
I am glad to see that Light Faerie punished and loose ends tied up. The ending winds down the series and finishes with the tried-and-true open-ended ending that leaves plenty of room for future stories.
This was a really gorgeous series, and the writing was excellent throughout. Lovely. ^^
[glow=blue,2,300]Another Hero’s Journey: Part Eleven[/glow] Aww, a very sweet chapter, what with everyone making alliances with each other. Wow, there were so many reunions here. :3 Of course, the one with Ruben came a bit suddenly, but I look forward to seeing more of him soon. I’m also very curious to know what’s in that letter.
The action in this chapter was a lot of fun to read, and it’s nice to see the characters finding each other again. This seems to be leadin up to a happy ending for all. :3
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