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Post by PFA on Mar 24, 2007 12:30:52 GMT -5
Pointless Nonsense- Games Room- I found this rather enjoyable, since I'd been wondering the same thing myself! XD Very clever! *shakes fist at evil AAA* Pointless Nonsense - Games RoomA good joke, and nice art; that pixelated coloring is pretty interesting. Can't say that I'm too fond of the round mouths though, they give a somewhat shocked impression. And in the second panel the Aisha could've looked more towards the Kacheek. As for the door in the last panel, it should probably have gone across the colorful floor, otherwise it kills the perspective. But I liked it ^^ Nice and colorful. Just... why oh why must people always stick the footnotes down there? T___T They're usually very, very redundant. Unless the comic really calls for an explanation -- which should be avoided anyway -- footnotes are a big no-no. The key to good comic-making is keeping it short, simple and relevant. *sage nod* But still, good work ^^ Thanks for the reviews!  Hunty- I tried having the wall go across the floor, but it looked weird. >_> And I guess I should do something about those pointless footnotes... |
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Post by kittygirl on Mar 24, 2007 12:32:02 GMT -5
Super Chel: Part Three by KittyAw... That pretty much sums up my feelings about the entire series. The last line was so cute! ^_^ Thanks. ^_^ |
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Post by Nut on Mar 24, 2007 12:48:37 GMT -5
Protectors: Shared Dreams by NutI really enjoyed reading this story, as it was quite well-written and entertaining. I don't know what to say of the ending, but, well, it came upon me suddenly and there seems to be more to tell. Is there, perhaps? Anyways, you did a good job with this, and the custom looks really awesome. I'm really happy you liked it. ^_^ Yeah, this isn't the end of the story. It's actually the second in a series of short stories that started nearly a year ago with The Sleeper. Hopefully it won't take me as long to get the other ten stories published. (Yep, one for each protector.  ) This is the first time I've ever written a sequel, so I'm glad it worked out. Even though it's not very obvious that it's a sequel, since it uses different characters and the first story didn't have Protectors in its title. And I'm glad you like the pic; it was fun to draw. :3 |
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Post by kittygirl on Mar 24, 2007 12:49:27 GMT -5
Why Some Neopians Don't Make... by Ginz and Fairynotes
I love the joke and the art. Very nice.
Pointless Nonsense - Games Room by PFA
This was good. XD My only complaint is that the door in the last panel doesn't look like it extends all the way. It looks they could just walk around it.
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Post by kittygirl on Mar 24, 2007 13:05:12 GMT -5
The Truth About the Talisman by Ethan_Redshaw and Gliderames
But I want to drool now! >_> Sorry. This article was very good. It was very helpful with entertaining bits in it too. Personally I hate the idea of the Lutari Talisman, but that is not your fault. This article told me things I didn't know before.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 24, 2007 13:30:12 GMT -5
Thor's Tales: The Rainbow Pearl by Hunty
this was just a wonderful story, Huntress. I hate those hot, windless days of the summer...and I feel there'll be plenty this year...and you really captured the same feel of them. Anyways, the way you told Thor's tale within the other one was awesomely done, and executed very nicely. The ending was just incredible, too. I definitely have to agree, on days like those, cheesecakes are worth much more than rainbow pearls. ^_^ Not that I wouldn't want both.
On a mechanical note, though, when you make a quote inside another quote, you're supposed to use single quotation marks, like this: "So she told me, 'blah blah blah,' and expected me to care." See? lol. Anyways, I still really enjoyed your story.
Glacia by Dream
I was instantly drawn into this story. And then, I couldn't look away from it.
I suspected how it might end fairly early on. And I suspected right.
But...I still couldn't look away. And I still felt the emotions of everything going a as it went on. I felt the pain of the world melting. I felt the pain of Frozen staying behind. I felt the loneliness he felt. I felt it all, and that was amazing. The images you were able to make me see...were incredible, and moving, flawlessly painted in words that shall rest eternally in my mind, I am sure.
This was a perfect story, I think, and it was truly amazing and one of a kind.
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Post by PFA on Mar 24, 2007 14:53:52 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Mar 24, 2007 15:07:34 GMT -5
Never Give Up!! by Aiya and Tee
Those. look. scary. Great art, definitely, though it took me a moment to realize the shiny stuff in the first panel was neopoints. The joke, by the way, was really funny.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 24, 2007 16:30:31 GMT -5
Another Hero's Journey: Part Eleven by Kat
A wonderful part full of action and more action and even more action. I liked it. A lot. It was very well-written and quite a great part, though it still feels rather anticlimactic after the long stay in the cave.... Ruben's finding was a shock, though it almost blew over too quickly for me to really find it meaningful. And Reuben's last line of dialogue just didn't settle with me; I think it could have been left out entirely, to be honest.
That all said, I guess it's come to an end at last. I shall both await it and be saddened by it.
Legend Seekers: Mysterious Magic - Part Ten by Yuka
There's not much that I can say here, to be honest.
You ended this well. I hadn't quite expected it to end for another week or two, but now, it doesn't feel like it needs to go on any longer. Everything has been wrapped up. Certainly, some questions remain, but I'm sure those are for another series are just meant to remain unanswered. Everything that matters here, though, has been answered, and it feels complete.
I really loved this series. I had a great time reading it every week.
It was wonderful, and you did an awesome job writing it.
Catching Up: Part Seven by Fj0rd
Fj0rd, you amaze me. Few other writers, both famous and otherwise, are able to hold me as well as you do, and no matter how little of the scrollbar I see left at the bottom of the page, it's always a shock and it's always disappointing when I reach the end. And, that, definitely, is a compliment.
I enjoyed seeing Therisa have the pov for the first time, though the transition between her and Evea was somewhat confusing, I found. I really liked Patricia's part of this, as she's quickly becoming my favorite character, and it was just...amazing. But all of it is amazing. The praise you demand, however, far outweighs my vocabulary to give it.
Once again, I shall sit at the edge of my seat for a week till the next part comes out.
The Mirror of Memories: Part Nine by Sytra
This was an amazing part, Sytra--I had a great time reading it and the story's really progressing. I can't wait for the next part, I honestly can't. The way you described things, through Aina's eyes, they just seem so vivid and fresh, and that's really cool, and it definitely makes this story much more entertaining than if it were told with just a normal narrator.
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Post by Ginz ❤ on Mar 24, 2007 19:37:27 GMT -5
Let's see... I haven't reviewed in a very long time, so forgive me if my reviews aren't very good. I've lost practice. Shame on me! ^^; Pointless Nonsense - Games Room by PFANice comic! I miss the old Games Room. Poor trapped pets. XD The art is cute too. Your lineart looks so smooth! You did a good job on the expressions too. The Bunker by HubaIt was kind of confusing at first because it's the first comic I read from the series, but then I got what was going on. It looks interesting and promising, and I like the art (especially the magic effects. XD) Doing a bonus was creative and funny. XD Razzle Dazzle - Episode X by KhestrelThis comic was a bit confusing at first too because I didn't read the previous one and didn't know the characters or their personalities... but it was nice. ^^ The art was really awesome! So detailed. Why Some Neopians Don't Make...Hh, that's mine. I'll just reply to other reviews. XD Why Some Neopians Don't Make... by Ginz and FairynotesXD Yeah, I'd see why... this is a cute comic. The art is nice, too. Thanks, PFA! ^_^ Why Some Neopians Don't Make... by Ginz and FairynotesGreat art, great joke, what's not to like? I also enjoyed the fact that Mr. Tiki Tack Man's facial expressions change even though he wears a mask. Of wood. XD Thanks! You're right, technically that shouldn't be possible, but what's a comic without good facial expressions? I'm glad you liked it.  Why Some Neopians Don't Make... by Ginz and FairynotesThis is HILARIOUS!!! My sister's a teacher, and I work as a teacher's aid, so I find it only even greater because. ^_^ Thanks! It was my friend FN who came up with the idea, so I'll just say I agree with you. ^_^ I'll poke her so she comes and reads all these reviews too. Why Some Neopians Don't Make...- Loved it. That simple (I go to Tombola every day! I can't tell you how many times I've gotten that drink! XP Thank you! =D Lol, me too. That's why I chose to draw that one, among many choices of booby prizes. XD Why Some Neopians Don't Make...Hey, that's the kinda school I like x3 Love the joke, and the art. For some reason I really like the Tombola Man's expression in the second panel, must be the eyebrows x3 The background felt kinda bland, but it's once again me and my love for details speaking. Well done, both of you :3 What backgroud? It was almost nonexistent! Hunty, you're right. XD The artist promises not to slack off on those kind of details next time around. ^_^ Thanks! =D Why Some Neopians Don't Make... by Ginz and Fairynotes I love the joke and the art. Very nice. Thanks, Kitty! |
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Post by Ginz ❤ on Mar 24, 2007 19:43:04 GMT -5
Oops, missed one comic!
Never Give Up!! by Aiya and Tee
XD I love the potato meepits! That was a creative idea, and the artwork looks nice too. ^^ The money and shinies on the first panel only look a bit weird because everything is outlined black, except for that, but that's a minor detail. I liked it!
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Post by ethan on Mar 24, 2007 20:31:38 GMT -5
COMIC REVIEWSPointless Nonsense - Games Room
by petfriendamyLovely art and very funny. I really like the artwork you used for the title banner, and AAA is drawn really well in the last frame. Great job! ;D Why Some Neopians Don't Make...
by imogenweasley, art by fairynotesAbsolutely beautifully drawn. It's simple and is very effective. The shading in the Tiki Man especially is very well done and I really love his expressions. The comic is funny, lol, the yellow Gelert's answer makes me laugh. This is one of my favourite comics this week.  The Bunker
by hubadawahaReally cute art. I like the frame with hobban in it, hehe. The speech from your characters is well put and extremely funny and I like the expression on the eyrie in the last frame. (I love how you drew the wings). Congrats! Razzle Dazzle - Episode X
by khestrelFirstly, I must say that you artwork is truly awesome. I really like how you drew all the characters, and the comic fits together nicely and is a pleasure to look at. The only problem I can see is that the text which the characters speak is a little to small for me, and I had to squint in parts to see what they were saying. I'm short sighted, so that's really not your fault, but the text underneath your title in the white box was much easier for me to read. Otherwise, it was excellent! ;D Never Give Up!!
by aiyakhiori, also by hello5346LOL! This is so funny. The art on the meepits is really awesome, and I love sloth in the ending frame. Nothing much more to say about this one, apart from the fact that is was great! *loves it* 
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Post by Deleted on Mar 25, 2007 0:39:08 GMT -5
I am sooooo excited a couple of you really liked our article on the lutari talisman. Thank You for the awesome compliments. I really appreciate them. (And I had no idea that people really didn't know what they could do for them). But every bit of it is true, promise, lol. Ethan and I have worked exstensively on our lutari mobile guide, (petpage Maniverus), and the article to help spread the word. And you don't have to have the game on your phone to get plenty of use and benefit out of the talisman. ThankYou again for the reviews, and I will get some reviewing done myself after the busy weekend is over. Ame. |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 25, 2007 1:06:21 GMT -5
Thank you to everyone who made a review on mine and Aiya's comic, I wasn't expecting it to get it actaully since she never told me she submitted it. xD
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Post by Kat on Mar 25, 2007 6:05:50 GMT -5
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Pointless Nonsense - PFA
Nailing the Blumaroo anatomy = brownie points from me. ^___^
Of course, you could've done better with the anatomies of the pets in general, but hey, they're already good as it is. And AAA just has a lousy' huge head. XD
Now that you think of it...AAA is mean. XDDDDD I like the coloring, btw.
The Bunker - Hubadawaha
Shiny magical effects = more brownie points from me. *gets shot by the rest of the artists*
Although it was quite hard to understand the comic without reading the previous one, I got the idea after a while. And the bonus was a nice touch. XDDDD
Razzle Dazzle - Khestrel
XDDDDD Ah, siblings. My only concern is that "glaring" is spelled with a single "R". Love the detail. And once again, Kat ducks flying objects for not reading previous installments of comics with continuing plotlines. XD
But hey, the art is pretty!
Why Some Neopians Don't Make... - Ginz and Fairynotes
...Mr. Tiki Tack Man is at it again. XDDDD Haha, I could really imagine him doing that if he really was a teacher...poor students. The art is simple, but it gets the point across.
Never Give Up - Aiya and Tee
OH NOES SLOTH IS AT IT AGAIN XDDDDDD Hilarious. Definitely a Sloth-thing. I like how you did the zapping effect. Bright and shiny.
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) This is the first time I've ever written a sequel, so I'm glad it worked out. Even though it's not very obvious that it's a sequel, since it uses different characters and the first story didn't have Protectors in its title.
