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Post by ethan on May 12, 2006 23:27:03 GMT -5
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Post by zebraxas on May 13, 2006 1:12:13 GMT -5
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Post by ohmandoh on May 13, 2006 2:03:39 GMT -5
Woo hoo! I almost forgot I got something in. :3 Yay for crazyness in plot updates  I would love a review of my collabed comic. kalfeer wrote the first two panels but suggested a different ending. So the art and the last two panels are my doing. Harsh reviews welcome. Thanks! |
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Post by ethan on May 13, 2006 4:46:17 GMT -5
Woo hoo! I almost forgot I got something in. :3 Yay for crazyness in plot updates ;D Lol, ours are right next to each other. Awesome comic... I especially like the last frame with the ice and I like the expression of the doctor in the 2nd frame. I really enjoyed that comic, well done! Nice artwork.  |
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Post by zebraxas on May 13, 2006 10:24:59 GMT -5
Ethan: I love the pile of gold, and the LDP reference. The fact that it was dubloon disaster made me laugh because my friend is very good at that game, while I am not. I guess I would recommend that since you have a shadow falling from the coral/anemone/seaweed, you should have a shadow falling from the pile of gold as well. ^^ Manda: I really loved the last panel. That expression being frozen is priceless. ^^ I also like how the last panel's lighting is much darker to signify the passage of time. The only thing I would recommend is to make sure that the berry bush stays in relative size throughout the panel. In the first panel the bush is HUGE compared to the Doctor, but shrinks for the remaining panels. ^^ |
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Post by Patjade on May 13, 2006 10:33:16 GMT -5
Neopian Coffee Shop, Part 3 by mindsend and Patjade Yuck! Now I'm going to take a double take every time I see coffee. I'd never even thought of that pun. >.< I love the expressions in this comic, they convey the expression very well. Thanks! Mindsend did a good job on this one, and it is the third joke I have come up using the coffee shop. |
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Post by Deleted on May 13, 2006 11:49:31 GMT -5
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Post by Dan on May 13, 2006 14:38:08 GMT -5
I think I'll make the list because it's easier that way. If I miss anyone, let me know as I don't know everyone's usernames and there was no preview board to look at this week. Wow, you're right! I completely forgot about the Previews board! |
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Post by velveteen on May 13, 2006 15:02:20 GMT -5
Thanks for putting my comic up any thoughts on it are appreciated, as ever! |
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Post by Star on May 13, 2006 15:46:43 GMT -5
Could you please put up A New Day by me? I did say on the first page but you must've missed it. |
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Post by kinohi on May 13, 2006 16:51:50 GMT -5
I haven't been around in awhile, but since I have a comic in, I figure I'll do comic reviews. I see a lot of new faces here, and way more requests for reviews than people actually taking the time to post reviews. There was a time when the opposite was true. o0 Well, I just hope that everyone who wants reviews will post reviews. And here goes my contribution:
Hidden Talent by sharkies
Wasn't this in the last issue? Well the art is good and the joke is ok. As for the layout, the second panel should maybe be flipped so that the question is actually read first. Otherwise the text on the question should be raised above the answer.
Flustered Custard by glowing_banana
I think the art is great! The joke is a little cheesey, but it was handled well so I enjoyed it.
Secret Weapon? by yummysamwich
The art is cute and the premise is cute as well. I thought this was well done.
Simple Sketches by purpleplayingpenguin
The art appears to be done in basic Paint and for that I am impressed with their results. It's a charming ad for the Altador Plot. Good job.
Muffiminies by dragonmasster23
Nice work on the art, it has a very soft colorful look to it. The joke is cute. I enjoyed this one.
The Pixel Platter by zebraxas
The joke was really good. I just think the whole thing should have been flipped horizontally so that the fountain faerie's dialogue came first, before the reactions. This reads backwards as it is, so the tendancy is to read it incorrectly, then go back and read it as it should be which takes away some of the charm.
The Best Way to Get a Coconut by ximerika
The art is excellent! The joke is cute. I'm not sure, but I think the punchline was supposed to be... "Actually, that was the ONLY palm tree around..." instead of... "Actually, that was ONLY 1 palm tree around..."
Shoyru Squadron: Agents of Faerie by the_darkjedi
It's great to see a classic like Shoyru Squadron in the Times. Great are with a great story!
The Randomness of Skarl by velveteen
Great job on this. I like the illustrative style and the joke was a good one. ^_^
Razzle Dazzle by khestrel
The art is excellent! I'm not sure I understand how the joke was handled... or maybe I just didn't understand the joke.
Thoughts from the OLDPD: Life After Neopets
by extemporal
Cute art and joke. I enjoyed this one. ^_^
Lesson 271: Take Your Pet to the Groomers by _mauwie_
lol! The art is as fun as the joke is. Good job! ^_^ I really like this style of soft yet edgy art.
A Lutari Does His First Dailies by texastiki
lol! Great art, great joke! Gotta love the look of the bulging eyes and the pulled back lips.
Altachuck Adventures! by jono_vision
Awh, the art really expresses the frustration in the posture and expression and I understand part of the joke and that's great. However, the second half of the dialogue flew over my head.
Flight - #1 by dusket
The art is definitely adorable. Good expressions and lovely colors. The joke is funny, but it would have been funnier if the Lupe had been writing his dialogue on the pad.
A Day in the Life of Nellie... by tahleighja
I really enjoyed this one. The dialogue and the thoughts of the chias were spot on. ^_^
Random Stuff - Robotastic! by p0king
There's something about thick line weights and the painted look in the coloring that goes well together. The joke was cute as well. Good job.
Turnip-head SLOTH by virtualmetalclone
LOL! Ok, this one was hilarious! The art is well done, and the joke was awesome. ^_^
Insanity Sparx by flamefox12
The art was very suited to the joke. I thought this was a charming and funny comic. ^_^
Petpetpetpets by frost_faerie
I love the art and animation. The joke was handled in an entertaining way. Wonderful job on this! ^_^
Neotales by agent_t
Cuuute! The art is very well done and the joke was very relevant! lol
Pint Sized by lachtaube
LOL! I love this comic. The art and layout were fantastic! Good job!
Spooky by ghostkomorichu
This is a really cute comic. I like how the panels were laid out. The action unfolded smoothly. The art was done very well and the joke was cute. Good job!
It's Makeover Time! by iluvcheesecake02
Hmm... I'm not sure what to say about this except... poor Kiko? Overall, this comic has a cute look, though I'm not too sure about the joke.
Neopian Coffee Shop, Part 3 by mindsend
The art is very nice with good expressions and a lovely color scheme. The joke is great. Good job! ^_^
Cybunny Attack by azellica
LOL! I love the art style on this... dark and artsy, yet charming. The joke was made hilarious by the expression on Sloth's face.
Disastrous Dubloon by ethan_redshaw
Good job a this comic with a moral! The art suffered from the compression. It may have been better to save as a jpg due to the gradients used and/or saved at a higher quality. I enjoyed the cute art and relevant joke nonetheless. ^_^
Moooaaaaaannnnnnnn!!! by manda314
I like the illustrative style of the art, the comedic timing and effective layout, and the joke was funny indeed! Great job! ^_^
Thumbs Up by frayedknot
The art is just so cute. I think the layout was very effective in carrying the joke. Good job.
All in a Neopian Day by confuzerated
lol! Very cute. The layout and blurring effects in the last panel were excellent. The joke was charming. Good job.
Today in Neopia by eyeslikestars
lol! This will appeal to all us working stiffs who would love to pay our customers back for their poor attitudes. ^_^ The layout was quite effective and I really enjoyed this comic.
Court Of Ebil: Not So Devil by delaney000
This comic has a nice stylistic look to it. The joke was either dragged on, or I didn't get it. Or I just didn't think it was funny? I think the logo was the best part of it.
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Post by Nimras on May 13, 2006 16:57:23 GMT -5
The Pixel Platter by zebraxas Robo-Faerie.  Sloth has something to do with this, doesn’t he. I like the art in this comic. Especially how the Faerie really does look fake. I do wish there was more change of expression and/or position in the second panel from the first, it’s very obvious that it’s the same picture with just different text and it kind of detracts from the punch line. I really like the detail in the Ruki – his claws and the chitin lines on the chest. |
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Post by Nimras on May 13, 2006 17:07:43 GMT -5
Introducing the Lovely Lutari! by doughnut215
Aww, the Lutari is adorable. *grin* This was a really nice and easy read, nothing that I didn’t already know but enjoyable none the less. I love all the descriptive words you managed to use when covering all the colors. I have to admit that I liked the first half of the article better – the interviewer Q & A type is always harder for me to follow. It’s probably just personal preference though.
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Post by Nimras on May 13, 2006 17:11:01 GMT -5
Shoyru Squadron: Agents of Faerie by the_darkjedi
Confession time; I wasn’t around to read the beginning of this plot. Since only three of them have come where you can look them up in the index, it doesn’t make sense to me what’s going on. I do love the artwork style though, it’s very detailed and more like the professional comic books. There's a list of issues on your Shoyru's petpage that I'll try to get around to reading when I can.
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Post by ethan on May 13, 2006 17:11:05 GMT -5
Thanks everyone for reviewing. Yeah, when I changed my images to photoshop I did something wierd with changing it to gif and jpg and it came out all fuzzy. And I remember when I do shadows in my comic next time to include them in all places, lol. Not having a shadow underwater with the pile of coins was a mistake.  |
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neo username - dan4884 
Sloth has something to do with this, doesn’t he.