Issue 239 Reviews

[Nimras]

star said:

ANY reviews for A New Day? Pretty please with a cherry on the top? Not many reviewers for this issue...

Well, I reviewed it on page one... I can't very well review it twice. *grin* Maybe if you do some reviews it will entice more over?

[Nimras]

The Dark Before the Dawn II: My Other Half - Part Three by jambammer

Eep! I read and reviewed this… then forgot to post the review. *headdesk* I’m so sorry! My favorite part of this chapter had to be how Clay kept messing up their names, Sugar to Sweet, Cream to Milk, and Adrianna to Adriane… Just close enough to be understandable. *grin* Now I wonder what Halo’s would have been. Though I do wish there was more of a consequence for Clay than simply walking away, I’m just that kind of a mean, vindictive person I guess. The twin’s compromise at the end was a cute touch – especially Dri’s dismay about it.

[Star]

nimras23 said:

star said:

ANY reviews for A New Day? Pretty please with a cherry on the top? Not many reviewers for this issue...

Well, I reviewed it on page one... I can't very well review it twice. *grin* Maybe if you do some reviews it will entice more over?

Heh, I've practically reviewed everything except series, but I can't review them. My attention span is too small. I'm not being ungrateful, just would like to see what other authors think of it.

[Kaljinyu]

Did anyone notice? MiaFaery is back! The ancient ones just keep on coming back! First Oddhatter, then Dark Jedi, now Kinohi!

Maybe Linny is next!

Or...

maybe...


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Stoneman???

[Dan]

kaljinyu said:

Did anyone notice? MiaFaery is back! The ancient ones just keep on coming back! First Oddhatter, then Dark Jedi, now Kinohi!

Maybe Linny is next!

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maybe...


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Stoneman???

Keep wishing.

[Linnen Malfoy]

kaljinyu said:

Did anyone notice? MiaFaery is back! The ancient ones just keep on coming back! First Oddhatter, then Dark Jedi, now Kinohi!

Maybe Linny is next!

Sorry, it's not happening. ^_~

[ohmandoh]

My comic is not on the list either. I requested it near the top of page two. Before the list.

Lol, ours are right next to each other.

Awesome comic... I especially like the last frame with the ice and I like the expression of the doctor in the 2nd frame. I really enjoyed that comic, well done!

Nice artwork.

I especially liked drawing the expressions. I used to have a hard time with that. What materials did you use to draw yours? I love the outlines around stuff, like the bubbles and the birds. And those are really nice thought boxes. I can't seem to hand draw or mouse draw decent quote or thought boxes.

Manda: I really loved the last panel. That expression being frozen is priceless. ^^ I also like how the last panel's lighting is much darker to signify the passage of time. The only thing I would recommend is to make sure that the berry bush stays in relative size throughout the panel. In the first panel the bush is HUGE compared to the Doctor, but shrinks for the remaining panels. ^^

Eh, I redid that background three times. Hehe. I don't know what I was thinking. Haha. They should make the faerie say something else... like wait for her to ask for a quest instead of it not working 'right now'. So many help board topics about that. Pfft.

Moooaaaaaannnnnnnn!!! by manda314
I like the illustrative style of the art, the comedic timing and effective layout, and the joke was funny indeed! Great job! ^_^

Ooooh, I have comedic timing. ^^ hehe. You got the very honered position of last comic on the list. That's a very interesting face on that petpet. I particularly like the eye brows. ^^

I'll do better reviews after I get over this flu/cold thing. Bleh.

[Nimras]

Moooaaaaaannnnnnnn!!! by manda314

Hee! I like the Snowager’s face in the second to last panel. He manages to pull off this ‘are you joshing me?’ look. *grin* About the only thing I’d change is giving the Wocky a bit more… windblown? appearance in the last panel to make it obvious that he’d been blasted by the Snowager’s icy breath. I love the doctors face in the third panel though! He’s just so proud of himself to have thought of such an ingenious idea.

[hmlanden]

Nimras, I just want to eat you! Treachery is going to be fantastic, I know it!!!!

[Nimras]

hmlanden said:

Nimras, I just want to eat you! Treachery is going to be fantastic, I know it!!!!

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Eep?

*grin* Thanks!

[JB]

nimras23 said:

The Dark Before the Dawn II: My Other Half - Part Three by jambammer

Eep! I read and reviewed this… then forgot to post the review. *headdesk* I’m so sorry! My favorite part of this chapter had to be how Clay kept messing up their names, Sugar to Sweet, Cream to Milk, and Adrianna to Adriane… Just close enough to be understandable. *grin* Now I wonder what Halo’s would have been. Though I do wish there was more of a consequence for Clay than simply walking away, I’m just that kind of a mean, vindictive person I guess. The twin’s compromise at the end was a cute touch – especially Dri’s dismay about it.

Thanks for reviewing it! ^_^ heheh, this has been my favourite story that I've wrtten (besides my fanfics) so far.

[Tashni]

A Thousand Words by ridergirl333 - That was so moving! I was so absorbed in Emerald's thoughts and feelings that nothing else really mattered. I loved the snatches of song, they really set everything off nicely. One little thing that bothers is me is that Sapphire was right there, in a place as large as Neopia Central. Some explanation would have been nice. Also, I was expecting a lot more anger and guilt and bitterness at the beginning of Emerald and Sapphire's conversation. That would have made a great climax, but there really isn't any.

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I've been trying to get a 'feeling' for reviewing before I started trying them myself. hehe. This being my first time, I'll likely do something wrong, but here's goes... Comic Review by Me. ;D lol.

The Pixel Platter
by zebraxas
This is verrrry funny.. Great Idea.. and I can't tell you how many times I've wondered if the fountain faerie were broken/a robot, or a broken record. hehe. Nice Artwork, the colors are soothing.. And great Ruki art.

Disastrous Dubloons
by ethan_redshaw
Ethanoober.. as I've mentioned.. I love this idea. Very clever.. And of course.. who doesn't love LDP flashbacks hehe. While it's a tiny bit fuzzy, I know from personal experience how easily that happens, so no worries. I can't wait to see your next comic in the NT. *hugs*

Moooaaaaaannnnnnnn!!!
by manda314
hehe.. very cute idea.. you have to wonder why the snowager is always so cranky, and, now we know. lol. The wocky art is great.. And Snowie's revenge to the bad dr advice is classic. Very nicely done. Doc's expression in panel two is funny.

Shoyru Squadron: Agents of Faerie
by the_darkjedi
Oh my gosh, what can you even say about these. -dies- lol. It goes without saying that the artwork is just.. astounding, and perfect. -sigh- lol. It reads more like a comicBOOK than a comic strip, and I occasionally have trouble following along with the plot, but I easily drool all over the artwork and shading with the rest of the readers. lol. I don't know how you do it, but I stand in awe. -cheers-

The Randomness of Skarl
by velveteen
Oh Man.. I love the ones I can relate too. They are my personal favorites, when I can say.. 'I've been there' lol. Very accurate, and very funny. Very good Idea. The artwork is loverly.. the expressions of Skarl are funny.. and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Nicely Done!

Spooky
by ghostkomorichu
Eeew, I so hate that game. hehe. Another one I can relate too. I can't seem to make my np the gamers way. lol. I loove the character artwork in this comic. The baby lupe and halloween mynci are awesome.. And the faceplant in the sand made me gigglesnort out loud. hehe. I liked this one very much. Three thumbs up. hehe. lol.

Neopian Coffee Shop, Part 3
by mindsend
I love the artwork of the shopkeeper, she looks so soft and squishy and huggable. I am sure that wasn't the desired effect, lol.. but she's very lovely. And of course, Miss Jade.. that pun/idea is hilarious, and of course, ...add me to the list of those who'da never thunk it, lol.. but twas very very funny.

Some very good comics this week.

Today in Neopia
by eyeslikestars
Love the blum art. And the idea is very funny. heh. I dont know why I never thought of that one, but for all those times I was grouchy about getting 28 np, I should have been grateful to not be out 5k buying a cup of medicine. hehe.. I love this idea. -nods-

Lesson 271: Take Your Pet to the Groomers
by _mauwie_
Very cute way to get across pet preference and personality in a comic, I liked the idea.. the art was good.. I love the pet featured.. Very cute idea.

Flight - #1
by dusket
ehehe.. I agree that it would have been funnier if the lupe's dialogue was on the notepad, but I liked this comic. The 'problem' dawning on the lupe was hilarious.. and I loved th artwork of the shoyru. Very nicely done.

Turnip-head SLOTH
by virtualmetalclone
I loved that the message boards finally got in a comic, I'm not used to seeing them. I would have thought it would have been hard to 'draw' that, but you did great. And of course, the turnip head sloth thing.. just.. hilarious. Very Nice. hehe.

Neotales
by agent_t
I loevd the lenny artwork, and of course, any meepit comic is usually pretty funny. heh. I remember this LC, and I think I can relate.. Well, I'll blame it on the meepits, even though really, I just can't do math, haha. I love the last frame. Very Funny! lol.

Pint Sized
by lachtaube
I find it awesome that you can answer reader questions by way of comic, and still be funny. hehe. I love the expression of chopking you were able to convey. Very very funny. hehe.

MiaFaery
by kinohi
The art and color is quite good on this one.. I think the idea of the idea.. is funny.. heh.. mis-thinking a mutantie petpet is 'hurt or mangled' is funny.. Dunno if I get the middle part.. but the end is funny. Very nicely done.

Okay, I tried to 'review' all the ones asked for in the previous pages.. and fill in on some that I THINK are members here, but, I'm too new to know yet, lol.. If I missed anyone's comic that wanted a review though, please let me know, and I will add it.

And.. of course, I am hoping to get in the practice of DOING reviews so you all will remember me when I'm in there and wanting reviews too. hehe.. please, please, pretty please. ;D lol.

Great Comics Everyone.
The comics are pretty much all I read, but I will try.. to start getting in the habit of reading the stories too.

Ame...

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omg that post is so long. eep. Sorry. hehe.

[Nimras]

gliderames said:

omg that post is so long. eep. Sorry. hehe.

That is NOTHING to apologize for. *grin*