242 Reviews

[Retired Blub]

Wow, it's been forever since I started one of these threads.

Anyway, I plan on reviewing some short stories later on.

[nikki]

Any reviews for my article "The Many Accomplishments of Fyora" would be appreciated

[peri]

Hello all! Reviews on my collab comic would be greatly appreciated I need to do reviews for 241 and then 242 when a list is up Thank you!

The Adventures of Zezzer!
www.neopets.com/ntimes/index.phtml?section=221102&issue=242

[Deleted]

Reviews of my extremely lengthy article, "The Valkenweig File: An Overview of the Yora Dynasty" would be very much appreciated. ;D

[Deleted]

I am totally gonna review tonight. -determined nod- lol.

Aaaannd.. if I could get some reviews on my comic..

Underwater "Fishing"

that would be super.

[Huntress]

Someone should really put that list up before the thread gets to page 2 *can't do it herself right now because of lack of time* One way or another, my new series starts this week, this time with my own custom *proud nod* Called "Shad and Saura: A week in Bogshot". All reviews very appreciated, etc :3

[Retired Blub]

The Cello by shadowcristal

I'm very impressed by how much your writing skills have grown, Shadow. This is one of my favorite stories that you've written to date. Your descriptions were amazing, with words that made images form effortlessely in my mind. The plot was original, and whenever I tried guessing what would happen next, I was wrong, which shows that you've broken through the cliches and have found our own voice. Cynthia was an interesting character and you developed her very well, while Ylanda's change of mind at the end seemed a little too abrupt for my liking. The ending was perfect, and I was surprised that she couldn't play the cello anymore. If this is in indication of your impressive writing skills, I can't wait to read your next story.

The Many Accomplishments of Fyora by lassie_nikki

I envy how polished and well-written your article was. You hit the Fyora Day theme right on target, and it was amusing reading the little tidbits about Fyora's fame. Both your introduction and conclusion introduced and summed up the article wonderfully, and your information was well-researched and presented. The article did sound a bit stilted at times, and a little bit of humour would have made the more article more enjoyable to read, but I still had a nice time reading it. It was a cute little article that's a great addition to a Fyora Day issue of the Neopian Times.

The Adventures of Zezzer! by peri0neo

Art: It was cute and it seemed like a good amount of effort was put into drawing it.
Joke: The joke was amusing and got a chuckle out of me. Overall, a nice, little comic.

Underwater "Fishing" by gliderames

Art: It was great, especially the last panel. The whirlpool in the fourth panel was drawn very well.
Joke: It took me awhile to get it, but when I did, I found the last comment underneath it to be very witty. Good job.

To Be Reviewed:

-The Valkenweig File: An Overview of the Yora Dynasty
-Shad and Saura: A week in Bogshot

[Belle]

After a looong time, I finally have something in. ^^ Reviews for my article Fyora Does the Editorial would be much appreciated.

www.neopets.com/ntimes/index.phtml?section=223948&issue=242

Also, here's the all NTWF list. Again, sorry if I missed some people. Just post and I'll add you. ^^;

Articles

Oh, Joy, I'm Unhappy by nut862
Popular Pet Frenzy by mygoodguild
Fyora Does the Editorial by ladyariel32 *
The Valkenweig File: An Overview of the Yora Dynasty by really_awesome_d00d *
The Many Accomplishments of Fyora by lassie_nikki *

Short Stories

The Cello by shadowcristal
The Treasure by dan4884 *
The Great Conspiracy by precious_katuch14 and humblely *
The Invisibility Game by undeadfortune
The Faerie Who Rebelled by star_29791 *
To Fly with Faerie Wings by laurelinden *

(Whoa a lot of stories beginning with "The" this week )

Comics

The Gallion Ranch by hakuryu_86 and pacmanite *
Underwater "Fishing" by gliderames and xpropugnator *
The Adventures of Zezzer by peri0neo and king_kino *
Shoyru Squadron: Agents of Faerie by the_darkjedi
The Adventures of Leona and Kaa: Lunch anyone? by _ob1_kenobi_ *
Ways to Destroy a Pesky Owner by zipperaward *
To be Unnormal or Not to be Normal by danish_demon *

New Series

Shad and Saura: A Week in Bogshot - Part One by ssjelitegirl *
Dusk in Tyrannia: Part One by alkuna_

Continued Series

Nothing is As it Seems: Part Four by estantia *
Chronicles of the Court Rogue: Treachery - Part Four by nimras23 *
A Weak Heart: Part Three by literalluau *
City Lupe on the Plains: Part Two by kindheartedfairy

More to be added as I browse the categories. ^^ All pieces linked to their rightful places in the NT.

* These people have specifically requested their pieces to be reviewed.

[Shadyy]

Whoosh, long time since I read anything in the NT, but I was tempted to this time.
Now, I’ve been away for a while, and these are the people I remember lurking on the forum or whose neopets usernames I remember.

The Cello by shadowcristal
A very nice story. I recognize here the frustration we must have all felt under the pressure of parents who force us to excell or achieve things we do not wish to do. How competition can take the fun and the passion out of what you like. But also how once you give up something, because you feel it is time to do so, you miss it dearly afterwards. I think many people can relate to this story.

The Great Conspiracy by precious_katuch14 & humblely
I laughed quite a few times when I read this story. It has a very light and entertaining tone. I did get a bit confused in the beginning with the different names and such, but that might just be me being tired. I love the dialogue's, very realistic and humorous, and the interaction between the two councellors is really great, especially when they come up with lies.

To Fly With Faerie Wings by laurelinden
Very nice descriptions and in-depth psychology of the character. A story many can recognize themselves in, being laughed at for our secret dreams and passions. Which is exactly why I keep those to myself. Very nice.

[ob1kenobi]

Could you review my comic:

The Adventures of Leona and Kaa: Lunch anyone?

I'm going to be making a series of comics about them.

[phoenixblessed]

aurelia said:

The Great Conspiracy by precious_katuch14 & humblely
I laughed quite a few times when I read this story. It has a very light and entertaining tone. I did get a bit confused in the beginning with the different names and such, but that might just be me being tired. I love the dialogue's, very realistic and humorous, and the interaction between the two councellors is really great, especially when they come up with lies.

Thanks for the review. ^_^ I didn't even know it got in...but oh well. ^^()

More reviews for The Great Conspiracy would be appreciated. I will be doing reviews for stories and comics in just a bit. I am a bit groggy this morning, so I need a shower.

[Dan]

I know Belle put my story up, but I'd still like to mention that I'd love some reviews for my story. Thanks!

[Star]

Thanks for putting my story up! Reviews for The Faerie who Rebelled would be appreciated.

[Dan]

Court Rogue Part 4-

I love your writing style. It's so simple, but it adds so much detail and humor. You truly have writing skills (or is it skillz? ). I envy you. On a plot level, this episode added a lot. I'm so interested on why Jasagh would want Mareian! Also, I like the ring part, I'm guessing that might tie in with whether or not Skarl is the true king, but that's just me overanalyzing things. Can't wait for next week!

[Deleted]

Will do reviews soon. I would love some reviews for A Weak Heart (it's done)!

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