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Post by zipperaward on Jun 3, 2006 18:42:01 GMT -5
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Post by Nimras on Jun 3, 2006 19:17:35 GMT -5
Court Rogue Part 4- I love your writing style. It's so simple, but it adds so much detail and humor. You truly have writing skills (or is it skillz?  ). I envy you. On a plot level, this episode added a lot. I'm so interested on why Jasagh would want Mareian! Also, I like the ring part, I'm guessing that might tie in with whether or not Skarl is the true king, but that's just me overanalyzing things. Can't wait for next week! Thank you Dan! Um... pretty much everything Jasagh said in his little speech is true, 'historically' (well, my version of Meridellian history that is). Intent wise however... *grin* And you're right, the ring is the key. As soon as I have some time where I'm not constantly being interrupted by my husband, I'll get to reviewing. Sadly, my weekends are far busier than my week days. |
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Post by Dan on Jun 3, 2006 21:40:13 GMT -5
Court Rogue Part 4- I love your writing style. It's so simple, but it adds so much detail and humor. You truly have writing skills (or is it skillz? ). I envy you. On a plot level, this episode added a lot. I'm so interested on why Jasagh would want Mareian! Also, I like the ring part, I'm guessing that might tie in with whether or not Skarl is the true king, but that's just me overanalyzing things. Can't wait for next week! Thank you Dan! Um... pretty much everything Jasagh said in his little speech is true, 'historically' (well, my version of Meridellian history that is). Intent wise however... *grin* And you're right, the ring is the key. As soon as I have some time where I'm not constantly being interrupted by my husband, I'll get to reviewing. Sadly, my weekends are far busier than my week days. Ah, so I was wrong. Like I said, it's just me overanalyzing.  |
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Post by estantia on Jun 4, 2006 7:53:19 GMT -5
I have my own theory on mareian, but I can wait to have it confirmed.
ccan someone review nothing is as it seems? thanks.
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Post by Nimras on Jun 4, 2006 9:35:18 GMT -5
I have my own theory on mareian, but I can wait to have it confirmed. ccan someone review nothing is as it seems? thanks. The Truth About Mareian: She's really Sloth's little sister who was genetically enhanced to take over the world one susceptible Lupe at a time...  Okay, not really. |
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Post by nikki on Jun 4, 2006 11:59:08 GMT -5
Swoot  Thanks for the review ^^ |
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Post by Retired Blub on Jun 4, 2006 15:44:20 GMT -5
Swoot Thanks for the review ^^ No problem. |
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Post by kinohi on Jun 4, 2006 17:25:51 GMT -5
Disadvantage by tristess
I really like the different textures used in the art for this comic. The joke is really funny too. Great job! ^_^
Nightmare by sunny_pet
I like the art, but I'm not sure about the joke. Maybe it's just over my head, but I just don't get it.
I Need WATER! by dark_exodia88
lol! This comic so reflects our fickle modern society! Gotta love it! ^_^
Random Stuff by p0king
I like the storybook type art. It's a cute welcome to the new petpet. ^_^
Kat's Daze by hanna_dc
This comic had a good layout and timing. It made the joke even better. Good job!
The Adventures of Leona and Kaa: Lunch anyone? by _ob1_kenobi_
I like the look of the art and the comedic timing and joke are great. Good job!
Flarisal's Comic Life: The Ear and Tail Problem by akress
lol! This is a great comic and nice art. Great job! ^_^
Leave it to Sproginess by worldbystorm
This is a cute comic. Nice layout.
Spyder Factory by wereninj
I love this gorgeous art! The joke is good. Great job! ^_^
Random Silliness by dragonanz
Very nice art. The layout could use some adjustment as it leads the eye in the opposite direction that the story unfolds.
The Professor's Log by allyson0226
Awh, this is cute! The art and joke are great. ^_^
Baby Lennies by animalluvor94
LOL! This is too funny! Great job! ^_^
Lost... Or Not by im_a_dudette
This is cute. There was a misspelling in the first panel, but it didn't detract from the comic.
MADNESS by bluefornmoon
Awh, the art and joke are so cute! Great job! ^_^
To Be Unnormal Or Not to Be Normal by danish_demon
Cute art, I like the layout and captions. I'll bet this situations pops up often in Neohomes throughout Neopia.
Off Track by klipsan
The art is so prettyful in this comic! I do not get the joke, though.
TrueBloo by imperial_drannian
I like the dynamic layout of this comic. The joke was told very well! Great job!
Simple Sketches by purpleplayingpenguin
The art and joke are cute. Good job.
High Voltage - Strange Meepits! by uslibra
Cute art and composition. Good job.
The Gallion Ranch by pacmanite
I really like the art and the joke was funny! Great job!
Hissi Fit by jv_4057
LOL! Hilarious joke! Great job! ^_^
Modern Marvels by flarethdragon
I like the art... the joke is ok. I guess the characters are rascals, but I don't see them coming out ahead after this.
Grundo: a PIN Problem by aquarocket
The art is really cute. I like the clean style to it. The joke really funny. Great job!
Neo Mania! Doctors by unis_lover200
This has a good premise. I think the punchline should have used "patience" instead of patients".
A Room With an Aisha by robbydude5
Well, the comic has a cute appearance. The joke is kinda... simplistic... but workable.
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Post by kinohi on Jun 4, 2006 20:33:40 GMT -5
Hug Me! by wsprite
The first five panels flowed at a good pace, with the Huggy looking ever so cute. In the last panel... I think Queen Fyora is missing part of her dress which really caught me by surprise... and maybe it'd be better to have the huggy higher up with it's head under her chin... and perhaps have her hair in disarray.
Trigger Happy by scarletspindle
I liked the art and the framing. The joke was also handled in a funny way. Good job!
OutOfWhack! by bluepen
Ok, true the joke is as old as dirt, but the layout and art breathed new life into it. Good job!
Underwater "Fishing" by gliderames
lol! Good job on the art. The joke was a predictable one, yet the last panel was very effective in pulling it off. Great job! ^_^
MiaFaery by kinohi
What is this old dusty comic title doing back in the Times?
Ways to Destroy a Pesky Owner by zipperaward
Heheh... nice composition. I'm not sure if it was accidental to have the house reminiscent of Norman Bates' house, but it added to the joke. Good job!
The Adventures of Zezzer! by peri0neo
The overall feel of this comic was a little stiff. I think adding some different angles or a greater variation of facial expressions would have helped. I do appreciate the work put into it, though.
Just Consider by sandozi
I really like the vibrant colors and the art in this comic. The joke is funny as well. Great job!
2537 Sakhmet Slums by l3luepheonix
The art is gorgeous. The joke was good. Great job! ^_^
The Esophagor, Quest-giver & Interior Designer by krychek2001
Very cute. I like the Draik's postures and expressions. Who knew the Esophagor had such cheery design tendancies? Even better since it's based on a true story. Great job! ^_^
Harry the Wadjet by queen_starshine
Awesome job on the animation. The joke was good, though if the last frame could have been held for a few more beats, it would have maximized the impact of it.
The Koustov Chronicles by whitelupe7227_232
Awesome art! The poor Lupe's expression made an old joke new again. ^_^
The Pixel Platter by zebraxas
Yikes! Break it off? And what an evil look! Well, I'm certainly interested to see what happens next. Good job!
The Slorg Named Button by rl337
LOL! I love the art and the joke was pulled off nicely. Great job! ^_^
UnNormal - Rooms Made of Clouds by cozygen
Very nice job on the art. Great color scheme. Good job!
Only A Name by sweetcheeks920
LOL! Nice art and funny joke, always a good combo. Great job! ^_^
That's Crazy! by heythats_rad
lol! Very cute. Gotta love the expressions. Good job!
Kadoatery Kaos #1: Picky eaters finish last by twiddl3d33
LOL! Love the art and the joke. Great job. ^_^
Nancy and Mancy by xxcoco_powderxx
LOL! I had to do a double take on this one. The look on the Cybunny's face is priceless. Great job! ^_^
A Petpet Life by _narnia_wolf_
The art is nice. I didn't find the comic funny, but it did remind me of how much I miss Snowflake!
101 Ways To Defeat Meuka by bulbabean
lol! Nice art and a good joke. Good job! ^_^
Sophie's Stew Turned Bad by mythical_creature_
lol! That meowclops is a bit twisted. Good one! ^_^
Peophin Problem by angelfish1985621
very cute. I know it's an old joke, but I still enjoyed it. ^_^
A Look Back by macleod22789
Ouch! Low blow! But funny nonetheless. Good job. ^_^
Shoyru Squadron: Agents of Faerie by the_darkjedi
As always, a pleasure to look at and read. I don't think most people realize how much time and effort goes into a comic of this quality. Awesome job! ^_^
Annoying- Happy Birthday Fyora!!!! by 900duckling
lol! Nice job on the art and the lead in for the punchline. Great job. ^_^
Fyora's Day Trouble by electricuted
I like the first two panels. I didn't really find the comic funny... perhaps it's just over my head.
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Post by Lau on Jun 4, 2006 20:48:50 GMT -5
Thanks for the story review! And thanks for sticking me in the list. |
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Post by Deleted on Jun 4, 2006 23:49:41 GMT -5
Oh, Joy, I'm UnhappyI'll direct her toward this when we see her again. We miss you, Nut! Yay for drawing your own picture! At least it looks like your handiwork. I like your use of the Neonip Critter throughout the piece and the rementioning of the Mootix. The subtle repetition makes the piece even more enjoyable than it would be without. It's so true that the "You don't play with me enough" random event would just make most of us shout out insults to Jacko or the Fountain Faerie. You hit that right on the head with a bit of humor. I could list specifics of this article that I thought were cute and funny all night, but I won't. Is this the one you were worried about? It came out fantastic. Just enough information, just enough humor. It never sounded preachy or mechanical, which is hard to do in an article like this. Now if someone on the Help Board asks me how to make their pet happy, I'll point them toward your article.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 4, 2006 23:58:00 GMT -5
Popular Pet FrenzyGreat idea to list the most popular pets. There's a place on the site that lists them, right? Well-researched. The tone of this piece sounds a little forced and mechanical. I think it may partly be the abundance pf exclamation points. I like the idea of battling for more popularity for the "less cute" pets and emphasizing that personality counts more than looks. I thought it was interesting that you mentioned how often species are used in NT stories because I was thinking about that the other day.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 5, 2006 0:05:29 GMT -5
Fyora Does the Editorial!*claps* Yay! This was so fun. Bug's brother certainly got his sibling in some trouble with her Majesty. You displayed Fyora in a fun light. She's still full of herself, but she's sarcastic and makes jokes which makes her seem more lifelike. Bug's brother also gave you a good way to end the article, which may have been hard to do well otherwise. Your questions aren't all the same or basic. You got creative with them and then got creative again with Fyora's answers. And you just had to stick in the Rainbow Fountain Faerie Dolls, which made me beam with pride.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 5, 2006 0:22:59 GMT -5
The Many Accomplishments of Fyora
Sweet Fyora, your articles are well-written. Heh. Bad pun. Although, like someone else mentioned, I'd like to see a little more humor in this article to get rid of some of the seriousness of this light-hearted topic, I appreciated how you didn't repeat anything (hard to do in articles), researched your topic well, and were creative enough to come up with different and explainable accomplishments of Fyora. I would have liked to have seen the Jhudora thing show up a few more times since you introduced it like it would have something to do with the article, but that's nitpicky. Nice idea for an article, again. (People never cease to surprise me with their good ideas.)
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Post by Deleted on Jun 5, 2006 14:44:47 GMT -5
To Fly With Faerie Wings
by laurelinden
I've been slacking as far as reviewing goes for several issues now... But I read this one and just wanted to say how much I enjoyed it It was beautifully written and I loved the descriptions of the run. It just seemed like such a sweet story to me, and I thought that the subtle touch of purple to indicate Fyora's involvement was perfect, especially since so many people go for the obvious. It was refreshing that it was so clear, and yet not actually spelt out for the reader. This isn't a very good review, since I don't really want to nitpick it to death Just wanted to let you know that I thought it was really beautiful and wonderfully written ^_^
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). I envy you. On a plot level, this episode added a lot. I'm so interested on why Jasagh would want Mareian! Also, I like the ring part, I'm guessing that might tie in with whether or not Skarl is the true king, but that's just me overanalyzing things. Can't wait for next week!
neo username - dan4884 
Okay, not really. 
Thanks for the review ^^
