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Post by Gav on Feb 3, 2006 23:15:02 GMT -5
Blah.
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Post by Kushbi on Feb 3, 2006 23:18:42 GMT -5
It's out? Neo is down for me. =/ I'll do short story reviews, and perhaps a series or two.
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Post by joecool2 on Feb 3, 2006 23:19:39 GMT -5
I would love for anyone to review Walking the Plank, but it's way too overdescriptive, so if anyone cannot bear their eyes on the horrific sight of my short story, please, you do not have to review it.
It is a first work after all, though.
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Post by Kat on Feb 3, 2006 23:39:34 GMT -5
Awesome! ;D Reviews for the short story collab with Sia entitled, "Venturing into Jhudora's Cloud" and AHJ pt. 5 would be appreciated.
Heh, hopefully Kat can finally do reviews. ^^;;; *goes to read*
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Post by ohmandoh on Feb 4, 2006 0:23:56 GMT -5
 I'd appreciate reviews for 'He Promised Her Orange'. www.neopets.com/ntimes/index.phtml?section=180077&issue=226I'll start. *kicks self* How in the world did I forget to finish panel number *counts* 12. Too pixelized. I think by the time I got to the sponge part I was getting weary of drawing and just rushed through it. Thanks |
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Post by Dan on Feb 4, 2006 0:48:42 GMT -5
I'd like reviews for the article Jhudora: Naughty or Nice? and the short story Awakening please!
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Post by Nut on Feb 4, 2006 1:20:28 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Feb 4, 2006 2:58:31 GMT -5
I would really appreciate some reviews for the first short story I've had published - The Weaver  Also, how can I tell for sure that it is/isn't a custom image? *hopes it is* Reviews will be coming up later today =) |
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Post by Patjade on Feb 4, 2006 5:27:37 GMT -5
Hey, Kiddo! Nice name for your story. LOL!
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Post by fipples~ on Feb 4, 2006 6:11:59 GMT -5
I would really appreciate some reviews for the first short story I've had published - The Weaver Also, how can I tell for sure that it is/isn't a custom image? *hopes it is* Reviews will be coming up later today =) Yours isn't, sorry.  You can check from the properties of the image... it shows there where it comes from. If the URL has "ntimages" in it, and the number (for example, yours is 178_royal_aisha - so the number is 178) is the same number as the issue you were published in, then it's a custom. The picture you got is a a custom picture from someone else's story... but it's a cute picture!  |
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Post by silentbutterfly on Feb 4, 2006 6:33:49 GMT -5
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Post by nttryingtogetin on Feb 4, 2006 6:43:16 GMT -5
Wow, so many requests for this issue of the NT... I'll try and review all of 'em! -writes them all down and goes off to read-
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Post by Kushbi on Feb 4, 2006 6:47:19 GMT -5
Venturing into Jhudora's Cloud
Yay, action + humour + unexpected twist = great story. The pace is good, I didn't sense that the story was lagging anywhere. Jhudora was written very well. All those little gestures like squirming, touching her hair, etc were very good characterization. The funniest bit was:
Rofl XD Although the story was rather informal - switching perspective back and forth between Jhudora and the Xweetok - it worked for me because it wasn't confusing. However, the sheer amount of "......" was a bit overwhelming. A period could have replaced a couple of dots. Save the dots. Conservation. =p
He Promised Her Orange
Ah, I was a bit slow on this one, had to stare at the last panel and look at the title before getting the joke. But when it hit, I laughed. The art is really cute, especially the last three panels. Is there a reason for the line "A bow is placed upon a string..."?
Jhudora: Naughty or Nice?
Interesting article, the faeries' vanity was shown very well. The part when Jhudora tried to convince you that she is evil was funny. Your witty remark made me laugh:
In all, the interview portion was very entertaining but could have been longer. I noticed that you included a significant chunk of GoE write-up about Jhudora and it helped to make the word count. I'd advise writing more on the interview/original content part to beef up your article. The article (apart from the personal account) is in present tense, so your last line should have been "Maybe she is evil after all". Good effort though. =)
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Post by Deleted on Feb 4, 2006 8:40:09 GMT -5
Venturing into Jhudora's CloudYay, action + humour + unexpected twist = great story. The pace is good, I didn't sense that the story was lagging anywhere. Jhudora was written very well. All those little gestures like squirming, touching her hair, etc were very good characterization. The funniest bit was: Rofl XD Although the story was rather informal - switching perspective back and forth between Jhudora and the Xweetok - it worked for me because it wasn't confusing. However, the sheer amount of "......" was a bit overwhelming. A period could have replaced a couple of dots. Save the dots. Conservation. =p My fault. I think it's because I wanted to create this mysterious air that I used so many ellipses. On the other hand, the story ended up a bit differently, though. Thanks for the review, Millie! *will need to work on that* |
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Post by nttryingtogetin on Feb 4, 2006 8:42:27 GMT -5
Kadoatery Denial: A nicely brought together article, which I could relate too, since I too am feeding Kadoaties, aiming for the avatar! This is a great article for which Kad feeders could relate to for checking if they are completley and utterly addicted or not. xDD I can't really say much more, but good job! More on the way. B)
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Furgo 
Michael. 
I'd appreciate reviews for 'He Promised Her Orange'.
neo username - dan4884 
It's at the very bottom of the short stories list. 
Here's the link: 
You can check from the properties of the image... it shows there where it comes from. If the URL has "ntimages" in it, and the number (for example, yours is 178_royal_aisha - so the number is 178) is the same number as the issue you were published in, then it's a custom. The picture you got is a a custom picture from someone else's story... but it's a cute picture! 
