Post by Tay - Sock Eater on Nov 3, 2005 18:12:05 GMT -5
nut said:
Halloween: Treats and TricksVery nice story! I like your characters, particularly Ollie; she is very amusing to read about. It was funny when she was getting so panicked over her costume, when it really wasn't a big deal. The idea of a lipstick-wearing MSPP was funny, and I liked the fact that Carla is portrayed as a normal Neopet instead of as an evil plushie bent on terrorizing Neopia. The idea of tiny Cotton Candy Trees was interesting, and the yellow toothbrush was amusing. I don't know if it was quite necessary to list all of the pets' candy after they'd finished trick-or-treating, but that's all right. Oh, and the trick at the end was funny! Peanut butter spiders, indeed! I can just imagine what I would do if that happened to me. ^^ Oh, and the custom pic for this story was really nice. *huggles image*
Thanks for the review. This is my first review ever. =D I never even thought about making Carla seem evil or anything, actually. =) So yeah. And yes. Sometimes I get carried away with describing things. Like when I listed all of the candies. I need to overcome that habit. ;D Thanks again. =)
