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Post by Thundy on Oct 14, 2005 15:31:05 GMT -5
Extra Extra! Get yer Neopian Times! Hot off the presses!
Correct folks! It's that time of the week again! ;D
Reviews of my Short Story would be appriciated.
Hmm...there seems to be a problem with a the link on the news page, its been anounced, but it hasn't loaded 212 when I clicked on. Strange.
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Post by Tiger on Oct 14, 2005 15:34:04 GMT -5
Yeah, I'm having that issue too...*Slaps it*
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Post by Yuka on Oct 14, 2005 15:35:44 GMT -5
Reviews for Legend Seekers: Destiny Discovered will be rewarded with many (Secret Ingredient flavour) cookies!  |
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Post by Thundy on Oct 14, 2005 15:42:37 GMT -5
Well I just looked (previewed) the front page of the times, and my story is under the "other Stories" thing. Teh awesome.
I've already got my Fanmail reponses ready. I'm such a paranoid weirdo. ;D
I hope the TNT relizes that there is no times issue before the weekend news blackout.
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Post by Tiger on Oct 14, 2005 15:56:34 GMT -5
How do you preview the NT? I can't get it to work...
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Post by Fj0rd on Oct 14, 2005 15:58:47 GMT -5
How do you preview the NT? I can't get it to work... Change the word "Issue" to "week" in all the stories/sections. To get to the main page, go under Archives and then change the issue number in the URL to 212. For what it's worth, reviews of "Roses in the Snow" would be greatly appreciated. ^^ |
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Post by Tiger on Oct 14, 2005 16:00:46 GMT -5
How do you preview the NT? I can't get it to work... Change the word "Issue" to "week" in all the stories/sections. To get to the main page, go under Archives and then change the issue number in the URL to 212. For what it's worth, reviews of "Roses in the Snow" would be greatly appreciated. ^^ Oh! Thanks!! |
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Post by Tiger on Oct 14, 2005 16:04:54 GMT -5
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Post by Thundy on Oct 14, 2005 16:11:22 GMT -5
I'm actually fearful that the times won't apppear until Monday. *shudders* Oh and Yuka, your series is excellent. I wonder what the bracelet is. Something tells me it has a big part to play in the series. Very nice writing style and use of descriptive words. The dialouge is top marks as well. Also, the link to my story: www.neopets.com/ntimes/index.phtml?section=137251&week=212 |
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Post by Star on Oct 14, 2005 16:25:49 GMT -5
This isn't good! I hope they get it fixed soon! Cos i feel like some reading!
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Post by Thundy on Oct 14, 2005 17:02:00 GMT -5
It's working now, thank goodness, that was scary.
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Post by Tiger on Oct 14, 2005 17:06:52 GMT -5
Always At Home- Ooo, good job! I love all the work you've done with the Neopets economy and such. Jobs are rarely mentioned in the NT, and this job gives a nice sense of realism to the story. I also liked the comparison to the family, although I was a little confused about the Lupe treat part.
There's also one thing I don't really get: It says Matrix has lost his sense of humor. But he uses sarcasm. Maybe it's just me, but isn't sarcasm a type of humor?
Well, anyway, great job on this story! I look forward to more!
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Post by Beanie Morton on Oct 14, 2005 17:37:43 GMT -5
Reviews for the comic Tomb Trouble are like, totally spiff. xD
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Post by monarchistknight on Oct 14, 2005 17:53:42 GMT -5
I'll be doing some article reviews. That's my favorite section of the Times. First, I'll review a piece by someone who I don't think is a member here but still did a top notch job.
Eyries: Good or Bad
by dragonlover8560
I was not intending to read this article but the introduction sucked me in. This proves that you can have an interesting, informative article that people will read without trying to throw in a million jokes. The article is essentially a profile is several Eyries to try to see whether Eyries are typically good or bad characters? I found it very interesting how some Eyries were not really good or bad either. I could really tell that the author spent some time researching. In some places, the sentence structure and writing style could've been better, as it sometimes sounded like the author was giving a school report instead of something for fun. However, those can be overlooked for the most part as this is the author's first piece and I know they will get better. A more serious article than what is typically read, but still very fun and interesting.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 14, 2005 18:18:09 GMT -5
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