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Post by nope on May 12, 2007 20:39:33 GMT -5
Oxymoron! by super_monty_python Y'know, I read that comic but didn't realise it was an NTWFer's and ergo didn't say anything, so this doesn't quite capture my initial response. Nevertheless, I liked your style of art; it was quite unique compared to most comics I've read. I also found the oxymoronic quality of the joke funny and amusing, though I didn't understand what made the scratch cards fake (the fact that I rarely buy scratch cards might have something to do with it though -_-). On neo there are sometimes scratchcard which are fake I also got invited to the NTWF after my comic was published
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Post by Nimras on May 14, 2007 19:57:26 GMT -5
Yes, I’m still reviewing this issue. Work and school have combined together to become a super eater of my free time. Gah. A Faerie Taleby themagpiesbanter Ohhh, spooky Haunted Woods story time. That’s a really long, complicated sentence. Maybe break things like that into two or three sentences in the future. It’s easier for the reader to follow, and you can create clearer images for the reader to picture. Hehehe, I like the idea of a Faerie who is afraid to fly. It creates mental images of little Faeries having to take flying lessons. You know, maybe it’s just me, but I hate being woken up by the scream of other people… *grin*
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Post by Nimras on May 14, 2007 20:13:43 GMT -5
Welcome To My Lifeby jambammer I think that explains something about one of my siblings as well. *shifty eyes* Not you Reasie! Stop hitting me! Erm, is it just me, or is his head on backwards. I love the expressions though, very nice. Down For Maintenanceby linnipooh *snerk* I’d believe that one… That Pteri is evil. The lack of the background normally would bother me, but it suits in this comic style, with all the screenshots. COMIKAZE IIby bird_brain312 Brains abound. There is only one solution; math Olympics. The Kacheek looks a little…unbalanced with that brain of his, but I adore the Brain Tree. Why Some Petpets Don't Have Petpetpetsby flutterflies There are no dogs in Neopia. That’s a Spardel. Comics must get a lot more leniency, I got “puppy” changed to “Puppyblew.” However, that’s so something I can see my Keebler doing -- he who must stick his nose into everything. Amikarashui #3by bluecloud300 *dies of laughter* I can so see a former Skeith character doing this… As a side note, I love her shirt. *admires* Random Somethingby silvermare200 Ewwww. That’s just so gross. Halarious, but gross. Love the expressions as they realize what the Floatsom is talking about.
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Post by Deleted on May 14, 2007 20:35:59 GMT -5
Thanks, Myrtale and Nimras. =D It's true, I use long-face paragraphs and complex sentences that run on forever. XD But sometimes I do intend them to be like that. To create a tone...or some junk like that. x3 Whether or not the example you provided fits that category, I have forgotten. XD But thank you again, I'm happy that so many people enjoyed it. :3
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Post by Jade on May 15, 2007 22:26:08 GMT -5
Amikarashui #3by bluecloud300 *dies of laughter* I can so see a former Skeith character doing this… As a side note, I love her shirt. *admires* Thanks I actually got the idea from when I had a lot of junk in my inventory, and I though "Oh, I can just feed Anveda; he'll eat anything." Then I remembered he got changed to a zafara by the lab ray, and could no longer eat all my trash I'm glad you like her shirt ;D I only have space to draw the top half of my pets, so I can't really draw her in a dress like she would normally wear; so I drew her an extra girly top to compensate On another note, since I've painted her Royal, in the next issue featuring her she'll be Pink XD.
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Post by Deleted on May 15, 2007 23:05:07 GMT -5
Thank-you I think everyone has a gross side that they need to let loose once in a while, eh? ^^
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Post by Deleted on Jun 14, 2007 14:23:24 GMT -5
Never Ever Forget Me by sonictheonlyhedgehogThis had an interesting start, one I didn't entirely agree with. It began speaking about the weather, which isn't always bad if something takes place outdoors, but then it cut directly to Kentari inside his shop, polishing his katanas, which made the entire first paragraph seem unnecessary. Nevertheless, cleaning always is an adventure, so I was intrigued to go on. Kentari's stumbling across the old doll seemed to be a turning point in the story, and it could have played a more crucial role earlier on, I think, had you moved that part up to the beginning and modified it only slightly. Still, though, it was quite nicely introduced, the doll and his old friend Mira. The memory scene was quite nicely done and it was a nice part to read. The small bits of present-Kentari speaking alongside the memory were really nice touches. The words "all day" and "that day" were said so many times in that paragraph, it felt rather choppy. Generally, to avoid using the same phrases so closely together. It makes it much more pleasing to read. That aside, though, the scene with Mira entering the shop to buy a grappling hook was nicely done. The scene afterwards, with the note, was quite touching as well and very nicely done, too. This was quite a wonderful story, and I really enjoyed reading it. It was very well-written throughout it, and I only saw two or three typos. You did a great job on this; congrats on your first piece in the NT.
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Post by Psycho on Jun 21, 2007 13:56:39 GMT -5
Why Some Petpets Don't Have PetpetpetsPuhaha. puhaahahahahaaa. HAAAAHAAAHAHAHAAA!!!
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