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Post by Deleted on May 8, 2007 16:26:38 GMT -5
Thanks so much! Yeah, the vocabulary was a little out of place. I just can't always bring myself to use a simple word when I know a better one. Larry...Laurence...hmmm. *vacillates between the two* ^^ Larry would have probably been better, hehe.
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Post by Deleted on May 8, 2007 18:54:45 GMT -5
Wow, thank you, Wolf! =D I totally know what you mean about the paragraphs, too, sometimes I forget how long I let them become. XD And now that I'm thinking about it, not everyone knows what Hesperus looks like, which I completely forgot. XD Just one of those things I do sometimes, I assume that everyone -else- also knows my character, so then when they're like "Wait, what colour is he?" I'm like "Um, hi, shouldn't you -know- that?" XD I should get working on another story, I'm so utterly pleased that everyone enjoyed it. I thought it would be too simple, since I don't have a really good grasp on -short- stories yet, but so far everyone seems to like it. Yay! =D *warm fuzzy feeling* XD
And I just found out I had the quote of the week yesterday...someone Neomailed me asking me how to get it, and I was like um, why are you asking me? Then I went and looked at the quote, and it was mine. XD This I am proud of. x3
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Post by myrtale on May 9, 2007 9:02:35 GMT -5
Wow! Thank you to everyonewho reviewed my story. I wasnt expecting really any to do so. It was my first story, and to be all honest, I had worked on it in a mere 20 minutes. I felt there were many things to improve on but I figured I'd let it go see how far it went. I guess I should have fixed them anyways as already it was good enough for entry! Ahaha, ever since the crazy janitor in the Altador plot, I've found Yurbles do, infact win. My second story is coming up I believe in the next issue or so. I got the letter last week about it (Yay 2x champion. lawl.) It's got a couple erros I'm aware of but I cherish it a lot. I hope some will enjoy it I've been meaning to write more, of course, but currently I'm working on a continuing story about a couple of Angelpuss. Ehehe. Anyways, I also have been meaning to write a indepth review for this issue, but I either find my time distracted by writing (Of course I not only write Neopets stories ) or none at all. But I'll be sure to write for everyone's entries, and I must say, a few of the comics were darn good. Enough babbling, I should go write said reviews! Thankyou again!
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Post by puffydude on May 9, 2007 10:02:35 GMT -5
Wow, thanks Wolf! I never expected such high praise, so it was great to see how much you liked it. I'm glad I was able to entertain (and, even better, amuse) you so much. Thanks once again!
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Post by Tashni on May 9, 2007 16:09:57 GMT -5
GAH SO MANY REVIEWS LEFT TO DO!!!!
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Post by Nut on May 9, 2007 16:34:37 GMT -5
GAH SO MANY REVIEWS LEFT TO DO!!!! Same here. I'm about three weeks behind now. *scurries*
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Post by Deleted on May 9, 2007 17:20:06 GMT -5
Thank you, Nimras, puffydude, pretzel, and Jason. I guess there were too many characters. I'm trying to work with multiple-character scenes and make them flow correctly. That may be better suited for a longer work. Need a better copy editor too. At least the jokes went over well.
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Post by Tashni on May 9, 2007 17:26:19 GMT -5
Revenge & Resistance: Part 5 by Dan - Ooh, really good chapter! I kept getting this Darth Vader vibe from Sloth. And when Sprax thought, "This would be all too easy," I just started busting up. You know, when Darth Vader's about to blow up some plane he says, "All too easy." Erm . . . yeah.
ANYWAY. I really like the development you're giving some of the characters. You have so many of them, though, that I feel like I'm not getting to know any of them very well. You start to show me their personalities, then you jump to a new one. For instance, I really want to get to know Cylara better. It looks like she and Gormos have a good relationship, I just want to see more of it.
So really, that's a good complaint to have. ^_^ I want to see MORE of your characters!! (Not less because they're boring. ;P)
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Post by jockylocky on May 9, 2007 17:30:29 GMT -5
Could it be possible if anyone could review my article The Altador Cup? That way i can improve on more articles and possibly short stories. Thanks
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Post by Dan on May 9, 2007 17:36:50 GMT -5
Revenge & Resistance: Part 5 by Dan - Ooh, really good chapter! I kept getting this Darth Vader vibe from Sloth. And when Sprax thought, "This would be all too easy," I just started busting up. You know, when Darth Vader's about to blow up some plane he says, "All too easy." Erm . . . yeah. ANYWAY. I really like the development you're giving some of the characters. You have so many of them, though, that I feel like I'm not getting to know any of them very well. You start to show me their personalities, then you jump to a new one. For instance, I really want to get to know Cylara better. It looks like she and Gormos have a good relationship, I just want to see more of it. So really, that's a good complaint to have. ^_^ I want to see MORE of your characters!! (Not less because they're boring. ;P) Ah, that was a struggle for me, since it's such a plot-driven story. ^^;; Unfortunately, Cylara doesn't get much more time in the foreground, so I'm afraid you might not see much of her here. Though you might have given me an idea for a short story as a companion. XD Anyways--thanks for reading. ^^
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Post by Tashni on May 9, 2007 20:14:23 GMT -5
Could it be possible if anyone could review my article The Altador Cup? That way i can improve on more articles and possibly short stories. Thanks I WILL do that, seriously. I have at least three more things I must read. Tonight maybe? Probably tomorrow.
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Post by jockylocky on May 9, 2007 21:32:36 GMT -5
Could it be possible if anyone could review my article The Altador Cup? That way i can improve on more articles and possibly short stories. Thanks I WILL do that, seriously. I have at least three more things I must read. Tonight maybe? Probably tomorrow. Great! Thanks
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Post by Nimras on May 9, 2007 22:09:53 GMT -5
Could it be possible if anyone could review my article The Altador Cup? That way i can improve on more articles and possibly short stories. Thanks Jocky, the fastest way to get a review, is to do some yourself. We've all got real lives here to juggle, so every one chipping in helps.
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Post by Serene on May 10, 2007 15:31:49 GMT -5
Welcome to my Life I enjoyed this comic, it was funny. I enjoyed the ending, it made me laugh.
Down for Maintenance I got a real kick out of this. The irony is just hilarious. I also enjoyed the artistry, it was clear.
COMIKAZE II Pretty funny. Good artistry for paint, I believe that is what you used.
Why some Petpets don't have Petpetpets. I had to rewatch this one a few times, because I thought it was so hilarious. I like how well thought out the who comic seems to be.
Amikarashui #3 This comic was extremely hilarious. It shows us how a pet would react if it changed Species. I don't think this comic could have been any better. It was great, and the punchline at the end was great. I certainly did not see it coming personally.
Random Something This was a great comic. Some of the text wasn't inside the bubbles, but it didn't hurt the story in the least. I think it was a great comic.
I would like to say that my comic was in Issue 290, and I am fully aware of why that is. But the comics that I have just rated were great. I loved all of them. I do not want to pick favorites, but Amikarashui #3's punchline caught me off guard which is probably why it stands out most in my mind. All of the comics were good, and there is nothing bad I can say about any of them.
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Post by Deleted on May 11, 2007 9:17:54 GMT -5
Thanks for the review, Serene.
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