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Post by Goosh on Nov 4, 2009 18:57:40 GMT -5
But I had never had a dinner in my honour, unless you counted birthday parties, which I didn’t, seeing as you have to pay for the food yourself.
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Post by PFA on Nov 4, 2009 19:28:34 GMT -5
Turn of events~
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Post by Butterfly on Nov 4, 2009 19:36:28 GMT -5
The girls stretched and continued down the long and winding tunnel.
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Post by Sq on Nov 4, 2009 20:12:00 GMT -5
His knees bumped together as he tried to create warmth; it seemed since first arriving the temperature had taken a substantial dip.
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Hahhhaah idkay if that even makes sense. My writing is really weird right now. My brain isn't working very well. XD *just woke up from a nap*
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Post by ♥ Rain on Nov 4, 2009 20:33:18 GMT -5
"Her heart-rate monitor flatlined."
HO HO HO YEAH. Killing! .........I mean, oh, she died. >____> ...actually, I wonder who she was. Ah, well. I dunno.
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Post by Shadaras on Nov 4, 2009 21:04:30 GMT -5
My very being was a reminder of that in some ways, admittedly, but I was so used to the constant mix of light and dark within me that I never noticed anymore.
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Post by Zylaa on Nov 4, 2009 21:08:59 GMT -5
If he had known the real reason why the Families killed their illegitimate children, he would have been much more worried.
And thus the prologue ends! =D
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Post by Craig on Nov 4, 2009 21:09:53 GMT -5
So I hide it in darkness, in silence, where I know it will be safe, where it can’t drift away, where everyone will forget about it except for the person who put it there.
(End of Chapter 2!)
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Post by Deleted on Nov 4, 2009 21:59:10 GMT -5
Marcus' latest HTML misadventure has him writing the <head> tag, with punny and slightly morbid results.  Not that it fits in with the story at all.... I just came up with it and stuck it before chapter 1. |
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Post by Kathleen on Nov 5, 2009 0:23:05 GMT -5
I'm not sure if this is very meaningful, or just very not.
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Post by Shadaras on Nov 5, 2009 0:34:01 GMT -5
It hurt in the same way Cyrus’s departure this morning had.
I really don't know what's going on in my NaNo anymore. xD
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Post by Zylaa on Nov 5, 2009 1:24:30 GMT -5
What's a better adjective for "tan"?
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Post by Tam on Nov 5, 2009 1:49:22 GMT -5
What's a better adjective for "tan"? Bronzed? ^^; I dunno, there aren't a huge amount of options, are there? You could always dip into the specific colours, though -- beige, light brown, etc. -- but a lot of those suggest something darker than a tan. |
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Post by Amneiger on Nov 5, 2009 2:11:02 GMT -5
“ROBOT SYMPATHIZER!”
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Post by Sq on Nov 5, 2009 11:26:43 GMT -5
And as she led him by the hand through the darkness, he knew light would be coming soon.
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Not that it fits in with the story at all.... I just came up with it and stuck it before chapter 1.
