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Post by Deleted on Sept 27, 2003 23:55:33 GMT -5
Yes, the next Gem Sword including all you forest characters is here! I've been redrawing the comics more detailed--I'll post something later on how you're characters look, but I haven't gotten to drawing it.  I've gotten the story going fine right now, though. The detailed Shadow Lord looks awesome--Jan looks too young--Mai looks too... good  --Clay and Whitney look to crazy--and what have I done to OBRAI! Slap a gem and a robe on Orlando Bloom, and you've got the Legolas of Gem Sword! Well, if it ever becomes a movie... I've already sold it to the girls. Now I need to get it good for the other guys. Hilary Duff stars as Mai... When Jan and the others left through the door, it took them to the Spirit of the Gem King. He told them all gems ever in the presence of Haroo must be purified--And little good can come if they're not. And without knowing it, each one of you (or your characters, if it's not you) has been in the presence of Haroo--near death, too. Spooky, eh? When the Spirit of the Gem King left them, they were at a spooky industrial site outside of the forest. They got the Gem on Inisibility--That will help Jan. Now they're journeying back into the forest. (at midnight) "This is every bit freaky," said Mai, "Jan, what made you think we should come at night?" "Well, would you rather stay back there with those freaks?" "Point taken." "We're getting near the lake," said Clay. Suddenly, a dark figure whering a robe on a black horse came close. Jan pushed the others behind a nearby rock. "Quiet!" he whispered, "I can sense much evil... We need to find those others. Quick. The Dark figure took a glimpse of the rock, his horse neighed, and they jolted off. "W-Who was that?" asked Clay, shaky. "I'm not sure," said Jan, "But I know no good will come from him." |
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Post by irishdragonlord on Sept 28, 2003 6:35:15 GMT -5
Yes, the next Gem Sword including all you forest characters is here! I've been redrawing the comics more detailed--I'll post something later on how you're characters look, but I haven't gotten to drawing it. I've gotten the story going fine right now, though. The detailed Shadow Lord looks awesome--Jan looks too young--Mai looks too... good --Clay and Whitney look to crazy--and what have I done to OBRAI! Slap a gem and a robe on Orlando Bloom, and you've got the Legolas of Gem Sword! Well, if it ever becomes a movie... I've already sold it to the girls. Now I need to get it good for the other guys. Hilary Duff stars as Mai... When Jan and the others left through the door, it took them to the Spirit of the Gem King. He told them all gems ever in the presence of Haroo must be purified--And little good can come if they're not. And without knowing it, each one of you (or your characters, if it's not you) has been in the presence of Haroo--near death, too. Spooky, eh? When the Spirit of the Gem King left them, they were at a spooky industrial site outside of the forest. They got the Gem on Inisibility--That will help Jan. Now they're journeying back into the forest. (at midnight) "This is every bit freaky," said Mai, "Jan, what made you think we should come at night?" "Well, would you rather stay back there with those freaks?" "Point taken." "We're getting near the lake," said Clay. Suddenly, a dark figure whering a robe on a black horse came close. Jan pushed the others behind a nearby rock. "Quiet!" he whispered, "I can sense much evil... We need to find those others. Quick. The Dark figure took a glimpse of the rock, his horse neighed, and they jolted off. "W-Who was that?" asked Clay, shaky. "I'm not sure," said Jan, "But I know no good will come from him." { So.... how do I get back? } |
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Post by misslynx on Sept 28, 2003 7:15:35 GMT -5
{ So.... how do I get back? } ((Uh...yeah...I'm kind of confused here...we're still at the cascades, right? Or are we someplace else?)) |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 28, 2003 10:21:54 GMT -5
Sorry. I had to go. I DO believe Misslynx lives near the side of Farenly Lake... And Brandon and the others are somewhere in the King Forest. Oh, and for the Black Night think about the beginning on LOTR: The Fellowship of the Ring. Shady character wearing a cloak on a black horse... It's supposed to be spooky.      "Jan," said Whitney, "It's gone, we can leave now." "Okay," said Jan, "But quietly." They walked down quietly at the edge on Farenly Lake, but still in the trees, so they couldn't be seen. "Look!" whispered Whitney, "It's Jade's house!" "That's all the way across the lake, Jan," said Mai, "It'll take all night to get there." "And we'll be found," he replied, worried and confused of what to do." "Easy!" said Clay. He dived in to the lake, splashed Whitney, and tredded in the spot. "EEK!" screamed Whitney, covering her mouth as soon as she had figured she shouted, "Clay, you got my tail wet." "Sorry," he said, still tredding water, "I can swim faster and hold my breath longer then the average human! You guys find a place to hide!" The group found a nearby cave, and Clay went underwater. ((No, not doing the doggy pattle!)) Down deep in the lake, he found something big and white. It's tooo dark, he thought, I can't see! As he approached the giant white object, he noticed it was none other then some sort of sea (or lake) creature, resting. It looked somewhat like a dragon--no, it looked a lot like a dragon. I've got to get out of here, he thought, And see if Jade knows what's happening here! When he arrived at shore, he saw the dark figure coming again. It still seemed to be looking for something. He his in the outside storage that Jade had, and it quickly past by. He then rushed to the door. ((That should start us off... Brandon and everyone else, will come somehow)) |
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Post by crazywriter on Sept 28, 2003 10:26:36 GMT -5
{Er... what happened to me?}
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Post by misslynx on Sept 28, 2003 10:34:27 GMT -5
Sorry. I had to go. I DO believe Misslynx lives near the side of Farenly Lake... And Brandon and the others are somewhere in the King Forest. Oh, and for the Black Night think about the beginning on LOTR: The Fellowship of the Ring. Shady character wearing a cloak on a black horse... It's supposed to be spooky. "Jan," said Whitney, "It's gone, we can leave now." "Okay," said Jan, "But quietly." They walked down quietly at the edge on Farenly Lake, but still in the trees, so they couldn't be seen. "Look!" whispered Whitney, "It's Jade's house!" "That's all the way across the lake, Jan," said Mai, "It'll take all night to get there." "And we'll be found," he replied, worried and confused of what to do." "Easy!" said Clay. He dived in to the lake, splashed Whitney, and tredded in the spot. "EEK!" screamed Whitney, covering her mouth as soon as she had figured she shouted, "Clay, you got my tail wet." "Sorry," he said, still tredding water, "I can swim faster and hold my breath longer then the average human! You guys find a place to hide!" The group found a nearby cave, and Clay went underwater. ((No, not doing the doggy pattle!)) Down deep in the lake, he found something big and white. It's tooo dark, he thought, I can't see! As he approached the giant white object, he noticed it was none other then some sort of sea (or lake) creature, resting. It looked somewhat like a dragon--no, it looked a lot like a dragon. I've got to get out of here, he thought, And see if Jade knows what's happening here! When he arrived at shore, he saw the dark figure coming again. It still seemed to be looking for something. He his in the outside storage that Jade had, and it quickly past by. He then rushed to the door. ((That should start us off... Brandon and everyone else, will come somehow)) ((Err...did you knock at the door or something? Let's just pretend you did, since there's no reason Jade would be up at midnight, anyway...)) Jade heard someone knocking at her door, and she slowly got out of bed. She went to the door, and opened it, rubbing her eyes. "Clay?! What in the world are you doing here in the middle of the night? And you're soaking wet too!" she exclaimed after having fully awaken. |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 28, 2003 10:58:17 GMT -5
{Er... what happened to me?} You were hurt, and after they left, you were bandaged up at Jade's place. The story only goes that far up to the part for you guys. You're most likely somewhere in the King Forest--maybe staying at the Clearbrook Village. For everyone else, there was a lot of editing, and there wasn't a whole lot of story left with you guys, so you can choose your path. After we left through the door, most had to get bandaged up. OOC: "I'm so sorry I have to wake you up at this time," Clay whispers, right before he flashes his Gem Rod and he is dry, "Blame Jan. He sent me. But you must keep a low profile... A mysterious figure on a horse has been lurking around, and Jan senses pure evil. Also, apparently, you've been in the presence of Haroo. Some of us have been as close as our necks to the tip of his sword. We couldn't see him, though. So we must purify your gem, but Jans on the other side of the lake, and the Gem Sword, or coarse, won't leave him. Also... I saw a white creature down there..." |
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Post by misslynx on Sept 28, 2003 11:22:19 GMT -5
You were hurt, and after they left, you were bandaged up at Jade's place. The story only goes that far up to the part for you guys. You're most likely somewhere in the King Forest--maybe staying at the Clearbrook Village. For everyone else, there was a lot of editing, and there wasn't a whole lot of story left with you guys, so you can choose your path. After we left through the door, most had to get bandaged up. OOC: "I'm so sorry I have to wake you up at this time," Clay whispers, right before he flashes his Gem Rod and he is dry, "Blame Jan. He sent me. But you must keep a low profile... A mysterious figure on a horse has been lurking around, and Jan senses pure evil. Also, apparently, you've been in the presence of Haroo. Some of us have been as close as our necks to the tip of his sword. We couldn't see him, though. So we must purify your gem, but Jans on the other side of the lake, and the Gem Sword, or coarse, won't leave him. Also... I saw a white creature down there..." "Don't worry about the dragon in the lake; he won't hurt you as long as I'm around." Jade replied. "Pure evil? Why would it be here? Do you have an idea?" she added after a while. |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 28, 2003 12:25:32 GMT -5
"Well, it must work for Haroo," whispered Clay, "That's why it's important your gem is purified." Suddenly, panic came upon Clay's face. The figure was coming back. He could here the horses feet stomping on the ground.
"You stay inside!" whispered Clay, "My gems already purified, so I'll be fine." The door shut. As soon as the figure peaked around the corner of the house, Clay hid behind the other side of the house. He walked up on the other side, hoping to identify the figure. And then, when the figure almost turned around, a hand grabbed Clay's shoulder. He turned around, and saw nobody. Then he looked down. He couldn't even see himself.
"It's Jan," said the invisible one, "The sword brought me here. And used the power of invisibility, too." Then Clay started to appear again.
"So much for the sword!" Clay turned around, and ran. The horseman caught up with him, and slashed his side. As he went for another attack, Clay jumped into shallow water. He held his side. The man then looked down at the water, and the reflection of the moon. It then shined on him. He commanded his horse to gallop away. The invisible Jan rushed to the water.
"Clay, what happened?" he asked. Clay the fainted, most likely because loss of blood.
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Post by misslynx on Sept 28, 2003 14:56:46 GMT -5
((Sorry I wasn't on...I had some school work due for tomorrow... x.x))
Jade looked worriedly out the window. First Clay dissapeared, then he re-appeared, and then he got slashed on the side and threw himself in the water and fainted. She hoped he wasn't hurt badly, and she wanted to rush outside and try to help, but she knew it was safer if she stayed inside. Her gem wasn't purified yet, and she couldn't go out there with the horseman still nearby.
Suddenly, she noticed some bubbles coming out of the water. The white dragon Clay had mentionned before popped out of the water, pushing Clay with his head back to shore, though not very effectively. Thank goodness he was here, she thought, smiling. The dragon stopped for a while and looked up at her, wearing an open smile on it's face. It then continued pushing Clay back to shore.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 28, 2003 15:16:30 GMT -5
((The horseman is leaving... The clouds cleared and he has to stay away from moonlight))
Jan decided to use one of the tree techniques. A root appeared in his hand, and a vine on it. An arrow then appeared. It was a bow and arrow. He aimed it at the escaping horseman, and shot it. It went at amazing speed. The horseman stopped, and grabbed it out of the air at the speed of light. He then continued journeying away.
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Post by Digital_Eon on Sept 28, 2003 15:41:53 GMT -5
OOC: Anyone know where I am?
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Post by misslynx on Sept 28, 2003 16:02:42 GMT -5
OOC: Anyone know where I am? ((No idea, D_E. Probably somewhere in King Forest, or maybe Clearbrook village, like all the others.)) ((Is Jan still invisible? I'm not sure how to make Jade react until I know.)) |
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Post by irishdragonlord on Sept 28, 2003 16:15:45 GMT -5
{ Er... I'm at my house in the middle of King Forest now  } Brandon lay on top of the tree, in his hap-hazardly made treehouse. This was one of his multiple "homes", each one in a different locale - on in the mountains, on by the sea, and this one. He tussled in his sleep before hearing horse feet. Leaning out the window, he saw a creature riding a horse into the forest. "Ho!" he shouted, waving. "Who's are you? And what are you doing here?" The rider stopped and looked up. Slowly, he dismounted and came to the house, drawing a sword. "Hey, what're you doing?" he called down nervously. The rider made no response, but began climbing. "This cant be good..." Brandon hoped he had strength left in him for a simple summon - so he tried. Thankfully, the griffin came with great speed, and shrieked at the rider before letting Brandon mount him and take off. |
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Post by irishdragonlord on Sept 28, 2003 16:19:34 GMT -5
Brandon looked back to see the rider on waving his sword angrily at him.
"Yeesh, what's with him? The moonlight gonna hurt him or something? I'd thought he'd follow..."
Brandon whispered in the Griffin's ear.
"Come on, let's head to Jade's... maybe she knows what's going on."
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I've gotten the story going fine right now, though. The detailed Shadow Lord looks awesome--Jan looks too young--Mai looks too... good 
--Clay and Whitney look to crazy--and what have I done to OBRAI! Slap a gem and a robe on Orlando Bloom, and you've got the Legolas of Gem Sword! Well, if it ever becomes a movie... I've already sold it to the girls. Now I need to get it good for the other guys. 
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