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Post by myrtale on May 15, 2007 14:15:18 GMT -5
Thankyou for the kind review, Me (Sorry, I dont know your actual name) I appreciate it lots!
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Post by Deleted on May 15, 2007 20:52:32 GMT -5
So I Heard the Altador Cup is Coming Back by krychek2001
ARRRRR, I love this one! XD That was me during the cup, only for KI. XD Seriously, I stayed up all night the night before my math final playing Yooyuball. XD My pets probably wouldn't want me knowing about the next cup, either. "OH GOD, MAGPIE'S GOING TO BE SAYING THINGS LIKE 'SCURVY' FOR THE NEXT THREE MONTHS! HIDE THE PETPETS!" And I thought the art in this one was cute, too. =D
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Post by sarahleeadvent on May 15, 2007 23:26:33 GMT -5
Perfect
This one was absolutely beautiful. I love how innocent Layn is, and how diverse but believable the characters are. I'd been considering writing a story about a pound-lab pet, but I definitely couldn't have done it any better than you did. Awesome job- I hope to see more of your work soon.
Outside Within: Web of Deceit: Part Five
Very nicely done- that last part between Lord Darigan and D.A. spoke volumes about D.A.'s character, and really defined her, and I like how D.A. and Henka seemed to clear the air between them to some degree at the end. The battle scene was cool, with the way D.A. seemed almost casual in shredding Hadrak's plans. All in all, great series!
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Post by Serene on May 16, 2007 14:56:45 GMT -5
Oustider Within: Web of Deceit
I just read this whole series today and yesterday. I loved it, the suspense was built greatly. There isn't I can critique on that hasn't been brought up already, so I will just say that I am looking forward to your next entry.
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Post by Kals Spirit Avatar on May 17, 2007 15:00:44 GMT -5
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Post by Serene on May 17, 2007 16:28:16 GMT -5
That subject was covered earlier in this topic. I think it was stated that that word was acceptable, but only in moderations. However I doubt that many of the other writers thought that it was neccesary to use that word.
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Post by Deleted on May 18, 2007 7:04:43 GMT -5
The BunkerI love the argument in this comic. Truly hilarious. Though it turned out really well, I think it would have worked just as well without the first few panels and the last two. Just the argument would have done it for me.  Favourite line: I refuse to waste another second of my time arguing with a peanut!
Petpetpet WarsI saw this on Kami's collaboration thread. The concept is great and the art is very effective. I didn't even know petpetpets had wars... O.o Nice work. Doctor VisitI really like the way the lenny was drawn in this, especially his startled expression in the second panel and him cowering behind his wings in the third. The change of font in the first panel threw me off for a second though.
So I Heard the Altador Cup is Coming Back...WHERE? Where'd you hear that??! Eheh. I'm not a fanatic. Really. This did actually make me wonder if it might be coming back though. I love the last two panels and the crazed expression on the owner's face. Great work.
Smelly NellyBeautiful art in this. I love the different poses of the Usul. I suppose the only thing I'd like to mention is - I didn't actually realise Nelly was the Kacheek until the end, and when I read the little message under the title on the main comics page. Lovely job anyway.
And the Meepits OutgrabeI didn't really get the joke here either... is that a devil jellybean on the side there? The art was adorable though. ------------ I don't think she's an NTWFer, but I loved this comic and just had to mention it. neopets.com/ntimes/index.phtml?section=335019&issue=291The expressions, the art, the joke. I love it all.
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Post by Kals Spirit Avatar on May 18, 2007 11:20:15 GMT -5
That subject was covered earlier in this topic. I think it was stated that that word was acceptable, but only in moderations. However I doubt that many of the other writers thought that it was neccesary to use that word. Oh. Hadn't noticed. I'll go look for it. |
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Post by Kals Spirit Avatar on May 18, 2007 11:44:24 GMT -5
That subject was covered earlier in this topic. I think it was stated that that word was acceptable, but only in moderations. However I doubt that many of the other writers thought that it was neccesary to use that word. Oh. Hadn't noticed. I'll go look for it. Yup, there it is. It went pretty long, too, up to Page 4. How did I not notice that? Anyway, my chemistry professor doesn't let us say "suck" in his class, he's pretty sensitive. But this is not the place to discuss it, someone should make a thread in NT Staff Call to address what words we can't say, and what words we can say... |
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Post by Tashni on May 18, 2007 14:28:05 GMT -5
Outside Within: Web of Deceit: Part Five Very nicely done- that last part between Lord Darigan and D.A. spoke volumes about D.A.'s character, and really defined her, and I like how D.A. and Henka seemed to clear the air between them to some degree at the end. The battle scene was cool, with the way D.A. seemed almost casual in shredding Hadrak's plans. All in all, great series! You ROCK for reading my whole series Sarah. I'm glad you liked the ending. Oustider Within: Web of DeceitI just read this whole series today and yesterday. I loved it, the suspense was built greatly. There isn't I can critique on that hasn't been brought up already, so I will just say that I am looking forward to your next entry. Thank you so much for going back and reading it, Serene! I'm glad you liked all the suspense. ^_^ |
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