|
|
Post by troublems03 on Apr 14, 2007 1:05:48 GMT -5
As for the Galgaroth/Galgarrath, there are no less than three different spellings of his name in Neopia. ^_^ If I may quote Schefflera in "Curses": So really, whatever floats your boat for spelling. I went with Galgaroth. I didn't even know there was more than one spelling x). I took mine from the Cellblock game page. *shakes fist - some consistency please TNT!* -- ComicsNo Comment : Crossover- Soo thirsty.. by Tirilia and HuntressHehe...I liked this one. The art is lovely and the script is original - I think I've had this happen to me before also. Spooky #50 by KomoriWOW! I knew you were doing something different for #50 (congrats on that, btw) but this is awesome. So original, funny and wow  .Here's to another 50! ;D Amikarashui #2 by bluecloud300I saw this on the Work Reviews and Advice board a while ago and it impresses me as much then as it does not. Lovely art and a nice joke. My only concrit is that I feel the text is a little light. In Honor of Grey Day by ScarVogue Aw the poor Gelert!  A nice idea for a comic and original. Looking forward to seeing more of your stuff. |
|
|
|
Post by Nimras on Apr 14, 2007 10:04:41 GMT -5
*blink* Are you sure Buzz don't come in black? *goes off to check* It just seems like something I'd check. And what was the other shadow pet? o-0 XD And those reasons better not be romantic ones...  EDIT: You're right. o-0 I don't know what I was thinking when I wrote that. XD The other one was the black Kad in your Return to Cabin ...8? story. *cough* I'm not going to say anything on the Sloth/Space Faerie thing... Thank you for the review, Nim! CCR: Witchcraft - This was NOT what I was expecting, and I LOVED IT! Putting Mareian out all on her own as a member of the thieves' guild is a great idea. Oh, and if she doesn't read, does that mean this is a prequel? Yes, this is a prequel, pre-Jeran -- back when Harper (someone you haven't met) is king of the Thieves guild, and Mareian and Khalyen were just normal members. |
|
|
|
Post by Dan on Apr 14, 2007 11:48:56 GMT -5
*blink* Are you sure Buzz don't come in black? *goes off to check* It just seems like something I'd check. And what was the other shadow pet? o-0 XD And those reasons better not be romantic ones... EDIT: You're right. o-0 I don't know what I was thinking when I wrote that. XD The other one was the black Kad in your Return to Cabin ...8? story. *cough* I'm not going to say anything on the Sloth/Space Faerie thing... Thank you for the review, Nim! CCR: Witchcraft - This was NOT what I was expecting, and I LOVED IT! Putting Mareian out all on her own as a member of the thieves' guild is a great idea. Oh, and if she doesn't read, does that mean this is a prequel? Yes, this is a prequel, pre-Jeran -- back when Harper (someone you haven't met) is king of the Thieves guild, and Mareian and Khalyen were just normal members. Ooooh...XD You have good memory. |
|
|
|
Post by Dan on Apr 14, 2007 13:48:03 GMT -5
No Comment: by Tirilia and Hunty Art is lovely as always; I especially like the shadow effects you used.  Love the script, too. XD That's happened to me before. Spooky: by Komori I read the text before clicking the link and thought maybe you had drawn them 3D, but I was never expecting this! This is awesome! Is that you in the costume? And I can't really tell, is the Rock drawn in or did you make that too? I just can't believe how awesome this is. XD Amikarashia: I remember seeing this in the Work Reviews board, and I'm glad it got in! This is really funny and sooo true. XD And your art style's awesome. In Honor of Grey Day: Funny! I like the changes between grey and colors, it makes it more shocking. XD Although I think it could've been better without the note at the end. :/ They take away from the comic. Shenkuu: The Brink of Economic Success: Love the reference to digging to China. XD I wasn't sure if this was supposed to be a humorous article or a serious one, and I think it became kind of confused throughout. I think for this article, you needed to stick to one or the other, because going halfway on both made it sort of muddled :/ And the asterisks were sort of annoying, having to scroll down each time to see what they meant. CCR: Witchcraft: Another CCR! This one was absolutely hysterical. Loved it. Writing was impeccable, and the trial scene was pure comic genius. Are we going to see the Green Ixi or Harper again? I'm intrigued. Great great story. In, Through, and By Brotherhood: Aw...this is a nice story. ^_^ I didn't read your series, I confess (^^; , but I think I still understood this story well enough to enjoy it. You've got a very nice letter writing style. XD They're very realistic. And the ending is nice. Good work. |
|
|
|
Post by Shadaras on Apr 14, 2007 14:48:08 GMT -5
CCR: Witchcraft:
Monty Python and the Holy Grail references! *just had to say that*
|
|
|
|
Post by Komori on Apr 14, 2007 16:36:47 GMT -5
Spooky #50by ghostkomorichu *jawdrop* I confess, this comic is the reason I’m reviewing the comics first for a change. LOVE the costume. I mean. Holy Kau. On top of that, it’s even a funny, understandable joke. Is that you under that mask? And how long did it take you to make that? ^^ Thanks! It is indeed me under there, hehe. It took me somewhere around 2 weeks to make. Spooky by Komori - *jawdrop* . . . *silence* *grin* Spooky #50 by KomoriWOW! I knew you were doing something different for #50 (congrats on that, btw) but this is awesome. So original, funny and wow .Here's to another 50! ;D Thanks! I can't wait to make another 50! Spooky: by Komori I read the text before clicking the link and thought maybe you had drawn them 3D, but I was never expecting this! This is awesome! Is that you in the costume? And I can't really tell, is the Rock drawn in or did you make that too? I just can't believe how awesome this is. XD ^^ Yup, that's me. And I also made the Rock. It's a sheet of foam that's been painted. |
|
|
|
Post by Tirilia on Apr 14, 2007 17:30:08 GMT -5
Thanks for the reviews everyone  Komori! *lol* Very Special! *lol* |
|
|
|
Post by Goosh on Apr 14, 2007 19:10:39 GMT -5
Shenkuu: The Brink of Economic Successby goosher This article reminds me of the papers a lot of my classmates write for homework assignments for some reason. Awww… The cuteness, it burns! This article seems to wave in-between being an informative article, and an “I’m doing an assignment I don’t really feel like doing” comedic article at random. When you got into some of the stuff I was interested in learning about, the interviewer seemed to loose interest, making some comment and loosing her attention. I love the name Shen Kuu though. *grin* Thanks Nimras. ^^ Shenkuu: The Brink of Economic Success: Love the reference to digging to China. XD I wasn't sure if this was supposed to be a humorous article or a serious one, and I think it became kind of confused throughout. I think for this article, you needed to stick to one or the other, because going halfway on both made it sort of muddled :/ And the asterisks were sort of annoying, having to scroll down each time to see what they meant. |
|
|
|
Post by Deleted on Apr 14, 2007 19:15:52 GMT -5
No Comment : Crossover- Soo thirsty.. by Tirilia and Huntress
ROFL! I could so, SO see that happening to me if I'm that tired! That was just a great comic. The art was wonderful, and the story was just...it cracked me up! The title, though, has strange punctuation.
Spooky 50 by Komori
That was completely unexpected. But hilarious. ^_^
Amikarashui 2 by bluecloud300
That was quite a funny comic! It happens to me all the time, too. The art was stunning; very nice work.
In Honor of Grey Day by ScarVogue
Oh, how horrible! But even more so funny! I just couldn't stop laughing, seriously.
|
|
|
|
Post by Omni on Apr 14, 2007 20:02:15 GMT -5
You missed the short story 'In, Through, and By Brotherhood' by Kat.
|
|
|
|
Post by Sq on Apr 14, 2007 20:12:20 GMT -5
Amikarashui 2 -- ... whoa. I swear, I've seen this comic somewhere before... >_>
|
|
|
|
Post by Nimras on Apr 14, 2007 20:17:11 GMT -5
You missed the short story 'In, Through, and By Brotherhood' by Kat. Err, no he didn't. It's the very first short story on the list. Amikarashui 2 -- ... whoa. I swear, I've seen this comic somewhere before... >_> That's because it was on the Work Reviews and Advice board here on the NTWF for awhile. |
|
|
|
Post by Sq on Apr 14, 2007 20:21:40 GMT -5
You missed the short story 'In, Through, and By Brotherhood' by Kat. Err, no he didn't. It's the very first short story on the list. Amikarashui 2 -- ... whoa. I swear, I've seen this comic somewhere before... >_> That's because it was on the Work Reviews and Advice board here on the NTWF for awhile. Oh. Ha! That might explain it. XDD *dumb* |
|
|
|
Post by Deleted on Apr 14, 2007 20:24:25 GMT -5
Catching Up: Part Ten by Fj0rd
The way Lillian said "What's up?" when Patricia flew up beside the window made me think, "This happens all the time?" I think a little more astonishment was needed, like maybe having her say, "What's going on?" to establish that this was unusual, and definitely against the rules.
The scene also made me think of in Harry Potter when Ron and his brothers break Harry out of his room at the Dursleys. Very well-done. ^_^
You know, this often reminds me of Harry Potter. Sure, the magic and the whole school is similar to Harry Potter, but what really makes me think of the boy wizard is how you've written this: it's so easy to fall into reading it and not stop, and then reach the end and crave more. That's always how I feel when I read Harry Potter. To know that that's how reading this makes me feel, well, I can't quite put it into words, but it's definitely a compliment, Fj0rd.
Revenge and Resistance: Part Two by Dan
I liked your "Previously" note; it certainly helped get me into the frame of mine I had finished the last part in. Sometimes, though, they wouldn't fit well, but for this story, they certainly do.
The description of the Mad Scientist was wonderful, and I could really picture him perfectly based solely upon your words (and ignoring the fact that I already knew what he looks like). Not only did you give his appearance, you colored his character as well.
The line "Where is my Blue Fuzzle?" somehow reminded me of the Incredibles, when that one guy (I forget his name, what was it, Iceman?) looked out of his room and said, "Where's my super suit?"
Then "lying even more low" made me double-take because I thought at first it should've been "lower" not "more low" (my mind has a way of seeing those things), so I reread it and got the right meaning. I think, to avoid just that, it should have been worded more along the lines of "lying low even more."
Neverminding all of that, though, this was steered in a completely different direction than I had expected it to move in. And. that. is. awesome! I had figured this would be some story about the 'Times writer getting himself out of trouble with his pets, but now I see it as a story about Sloth's master plan, and what a plan it's turning out to be! I don't think I've ever seen Sloth portrayed quite as evilly except in "Encountering Resistance," and that had little actual on-screen time with Sloth himself this early on (more with the aftermath of his ultimate plan, really), so this Sloth, definitely, is the darkest I've seen him. And I like it.
Evil is good.
I await eagerly the next part.
|
|
|
|
Post by ummagine3284 on Apr 14, 2007 20:38:04 GMT -5
Chronicles of the Court Rogue: Witchcraft by NimrasI couldn't stop laughing through the whole second half, and even as I type this right now I'm still laughing. It was great, especialy the parts with the Mallad and the scale. One question, will we see the town of Woodfen again?
|
|
A nice idea for a comic and original. Looking forward to seeing more of your stuff.
neo username - dan4884 
Love the script, too. XD That's happened to me before.
It seemed muddled, like Dan said, and I certainly hoping it would be accepted earlier. I finished it the day after the Lunar Temple came out.
