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Post by Birdy on Apr 12, 2007 10:06:40 GMT -5
~Short Stories~ A Tiny Adventure by Dimi*smiles* Cute story, I liked it.  Thankies! ^^ You're welcome! |
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Post by Nimras on Apr 12, 2007 14:07:07 GMT -5
Discovering the Denizens of the Deepby pyrosquirrelx … Professor Vaternick, is that you?  Awww, I love squid -- I wish there was an option to attach them as petpets instead of eating them. *gags* Catsup Caramel Squid Delight just sounds nasty. Very cute article -- I especially like the comments to the audience mixed in. ^^
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Post by Nimras on Apr 12, 2007 16:30:03 GMT -5
Of Holes and Headachesby ghostkomorichu and TC Love the Meepit and the Gelert’s expressions… The Gelert is just so oblivious to how the Meepit really feels about this whole situation. *grin* And the joke itself is good too -- I can see someone having to shove their petpet into that deep hole. Slippery Slorgby aiyakhiori Hehehe, the poor Slorg, frantically trying to brake… *cackles* I’m evil, finding this so humorous. Art wise, I love the shading. ^^ Very nice. Opportunistby ssjelitegirl Two words: Uni with Lime Green Mohawk. (okay that was more than two words, but who cares) I wants. And Saura’s “…What?” and the end is priceless.  Family Meetingby manda314 and Kat *snicker* I suspect that’s similar to my pets reactions when I announce I’m starting a new series…. I can see Kat’s pets doing this too: “We lost her to Rohane and company… again.” Anonymous Candy and Rude Awakeningsby nadia8705 Ohh! Chomby and the Fungus balls! *grin* Looking at your comic, I’m guessing you drew it by hand, then scanned it in. The font is hard to read for me, maybe either invest in a finer tipped pen, or add the wording in after you’ve scanned it in… I adore the cloak on the shop wiz though.
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Post by Nimras on Apr 12, 2007 16:36:00 GMT -5
A Tiny Adventure
by pokemon_lunatic
I’m melting…. No no, you horrible little girl…. Oh sorry. Wrong story. *turns off Wicked soundtrack*
That read kind of … off. Are you sure it isn’t missing a word or two in there?
Awww, I adore the Zomutt. The idea of a tiny little Halloween Zafara riding one is just adorable. Very cute story, and I love the ending.
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Post by Dimi on Apr 12, 2007 16:40:57 GMT -5
A Tiny Adventureby pokemon_lunatic I’m melting…. No no, you horrible little girl…. Oh sorry. Wrong story. *turns off Wicked soundtrack* That read kind of … off. Are you sure it isn’t missing a word or two in there? Awww, I adore the Zomutt. The idea of a tiny little Halloween Zafara riding one is just adorable. Very cute story, and I love the ending. Thanks for the review. That phrase does seem strange, indeed. |
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Post by Nimras on Apr 12, 2007 16:44:32 GMT -5
Sand Balls
by goosher and extreme_fj0rd
I love how the Kougra is so obsessed with how he looks.
*snicker*
The whole thing is just so over the top that it’s ridiculous. Which is why it works so perfectly for a short story. *grin* Oddly though, I think my favorite part is the authors’ note at the end…
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Post by Deleted on Apr 12, 2007 16:47:27 GMT -5
Eeeee! Zank ye, Wolfy! *glomp* :D I'm really glad you liked it...! Faerie-tale ending was good, then? You're quite welcome, Sytra. ^_^ I wouldn't say a happy ending is always a fairytale ending. Happy things happen in life, too, and sometimes things play out for the best, even within the scope and time frame of fictional settings, so having some good endings aren't a bad thing (and is much better than building a reputation that your ending will always be bad *grins*). The best endings are those that fit, I feel, and this one fit, definitely. :) |
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Post by Nimras on Apr 12, 2007 16:54:01 GMT -5
A Sprinkling of Troubleby bird_brain312 The search for the missing cupcake sprinkle… Oh dear. You know, I’ve had customers like the main character here. *dies of laughter* And the ending bit, about the omelette is awesome. It’s amazing his pet hasn’t done something to him yet. 
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Post by Nimras on Apr 12, 2007 17:04:00 GMT -5
Easter in the Gnome Undergroundby myfallenrevival4 Fear the living gnomes… And fear the evil, trippy evil Cybunny. There were some parts of this story, particularly where the action was, that I had to read twice to follow exactly what was happening. I think it was mostly because sometimes it was hard to tell who was saying what, if that makes any sense. For example: I like the bit at the end about the garden gnome that never quite looked the same as the last time you saw it…
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Post by Nimras on Apr 12, 2007 17:10:52 GMT -5
Revenge and Resistance: Part Oneby dan4884 That’s still an awesome picture. Eeep, scary Sloth Clones. *shudders* And I really, really like how you didn’t make yourself out into some… I don’t want to say ‘rambo’ character… but you know what I mean. And Slothy’s nervous… Awww…
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Post by Nimras on Apr 12, 2007 17:16:57 GMT -5
Catching Up: Part Nine
by extreme_fj0rd
This chapter seems to be more of a set up chapter for next week than anything else… Though I like the new Faerie that was introduced, Clocia seems like someone I’d like. *grin*
Something tells me that they’re not going to have an easy time at the courts…
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Post by Dan on Apr 12, 2007 17:19:42 GMT -5
Revenge and Resistance: Part Oneby dan4884 That’s still an awesome picture. Eeep, scary Sloth Clones. *shudders* And I really, really like how you didn’t make yourself out into some… I don’t want to say ‘rambo’ character… but you know what I mean. And Slothy’s nervous… Awww… Thanks! ^_^ I <3 the picture too. XD I will never be portrayed as a rambo character. XDDDD |
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Post by Nimras on Apr 12, 2007 17:23:48 GMT -5
The Mirror of Memories: Part Eleven
by sytra
Hee! Everyone knows Kin’s the real hero of the story… *grin*
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Post by Birdy on Apr 12, 2007 19:03:52 GMT -5
Awww, I love squid -- I wish there was an option to attach them as petpets instead of eating them. *imangines a Jubjub with a Titanic Giant Squid as a petpet* XD Roffle! It'd SO win at petpet battles... ;D Hmm. Must make that into a comic. |
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Post by CV Classic on Apr 13, 2007 23:53:48 GMT -5
Wow, some good reviews for my short story. Thanks to all who reviewed it, much appreciated. Also, I will note the sarcasm point mentioned in one of the reviews. Thanks for the advice on that, Scrunt. A Sprinkling of Trouble by CVCool acronym. You mean it's not?!  Overall, a good read! I liked it! Just had to point out I liked how you put my title in rainbow-rific colours. |
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