Issue 282 Reviews

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Thanks, Nut, Skittles, and Birdy for the reviews! When electricity (like that from lightning)combines with sand, it makes glass. Not usually the kind that shows up here; usually it's ugly and full of porous holes, but as Nut says, it doesn't seem like ordinary lightning. I think a lot of it will be cleared up in the next chapter, so please keep reading!

[Goosh]

luau said:

Thanks, Nut, Skittles, and Birdy for the reviews! When electricity (like that from lightning)combines with sand, it makes glass. Not usually the kind that shows up here; usually it's ugly and full of porous holes, but as Nut says, it doesn't seem like ordinary lightning. I think a lot of it will be cleared up in the next chapter, so please keep reading!

Uh..... I don't think we've met. I'm Goosher, or Goosh, whichever you prefer, but NOT Goos or Goo. Anyway, I'm just impersonating candy for the time being ^__^

[Birdy]

luau said:

Thanks, Nut, Skittles, and Birdy for the reviews! When electricity (like that from lightning)combines with sand, it makes glass. Not usually the kind that shows up here; usually it's ugly and full of porous holes, but as Nut says, it doesn't seem like ordinary lightning. I think a lot of it will be cleared up in the next chapter, so please keep reading!

You're welcome.

Ahhh, ok! Thanks!


Edit totally un-realted to reviewing: 300th post! ;D

[Nina]

Big Trees by violinoutoftune

This is the first story I've read in maybe.. twenty issues of the NT. I was captivated by the reviews here, and the title was different. And it really didn't disappoint. It made me think, and it made me feel. The climax was so.. full of emotion, and energy, and I was so curious to see what would happen next! I have to admit, I really hated Ever as she was harming the tree. I was so annoyed with her.. but the explanation you later gave for it made me a little more fond of her =P. Just a little, though .

When I was reading, this sentence stood out to me: Her body filled the entire length of the reflection and extended horizontally beyond it. I liked the way you put that!

So, are Janice and Max her grandparents? Just out of curiosity.

I found absolutely nothing in your story that I didn't like! Really well done, you're very talented. ^_^

[Nina]

Spooky by ghostkomorichu

I really liked this comic! But then again, I like all of your comics . The space-related ones lately have been really cool! I like how you tend to do a few comics on a certain theme once in a while, and pull so many jokes out of each major theme.

You have such nice writing, Komori! It's perfect for comics ^_^. It's become a lot cleaner over time, too! Not that it needed to become cleaner, but you know.. it's just so ridiculously easy to read and fun to look at xD.

Good expressions, as usual! And I really like how the token is stuck, and that the electricity is coming out like that. The "Zzzt!" actually looks like another ray of electricity in itself, so I like how you kind of.. camouflaged it in there so it looks natural while still getting the sound into my head .

I have.. two very, very minor things that I think you could have done differently! I promise they're very minor . One's the Grundo's eyes, which look too empty, although the anger in their shape gets the message across. I would have liked to see.. are Grundo eyes gridded? Well, I would have liked to see grids in his eyes, or maybe a shine on them (they don't actually have pupils, right?). But just something to give him a little more life, since they are the first thing you look at in the comic.

The second thing is just that you should have put a thin black border around it, even one pixel. I say this because.. my Internet has been very slow lately, and it loaded the top of the comic first, with the writing, and then loaded the bottom.. and I kept waiting for the rest of it to show up until I read it and realized that was it xD. I think that with a comic like this, where it's just one panel, and you don't usually do one panels, a border would tell the reader, "That's it." Also, the panel is pretty short, in addition, so it gives even more of an impression that there might be more to it. A border would make it look more final and complete.

I can't be very picky with your comics, because they all rock . I'm glad you're still making them! It's motivating me to do the same myself, as long as you're around and a few quality comics are still appearing in the NT ^_^;.

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Big Trees by Violin
This was a lovely and touching story, Violin. I've read similar stories and heard similar tales before, yet this was written quite well and in such a way that it became a fresh experience and was just as enjoyable to read as if I had never read such similar stories before. This was a wonderful story, and you wrote it exceedingly well; good job.


Double Crossed by Dan and Nut
This was such a fabulous story. It was fun to read, and well-written. The story itself I found was somewhat predictable, though the way you executed such things as Sophie's introduction into the story (which was beautifully done) and the transformation, it was made a thoroughly unique experience. The final few lines just gave it a great sense of finality, which was awesome. Great job, you two.

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Oops, sorry, Goosher. Nice to meet you. Thanks again for the review.

[articunoneo]

Happy to see that everyone's still active There are great stories in the NT. I read Big Trees too... Really liked it, very cute and a little bit sad at the end. Hope to see more stories like that!

[kittygirl]

Thanks for the the review Birdy. ^_^

[Birdy]

kittygirl said:

Thanks for the the review Birdy. ^_^

You're welcome! *can't wait for the next part*

[kittygirl]

Would anyone else mind reviewing my new series Super Chel?

[Freefalldreams]

kittygirl said:

Would anyone else mind reviewing my new series Super Chel?

I'll give it a try when I finish with my fan (and anti-fan) mail. Could you review my little series so I remember the good side of writing?

[Ice]

Double Crossed

I thought the idea here was very neat! I've never seen an explanation for the Esophagor/Brain Tree, so kudos to you two for a creative story The last line made me smile ^^

Overall, it was a great story - easy to read, amusing, and fun. Nice work =D

[kittygirl]

freefalldreams said:

kittygirl said:

Would anyone else mind reviewing my new series Super Chel?

I'll give it a try when I finish with my fan (and anti-fan) mail. Could you review my little series so I remember the good side of writing?

I'll read it next time I have a chance. ^_^ Should be fairly soon.

[peri]

Thanks again, Nut, for putting my comic on the list Much appreciated! Thank you Wolf, Gen and Birdy for the reviews! Glad you liked the joke This is actually the 2nd comic I drew. I drew 4 Me & My Mootix comics in a row. The first one was accepted (after like a year - lol) and then when the others weren't accepted in order, I started drawing other things. Decided to try submitting these old ones again in relation to calendar themes They were my first forays into Paint. Hopefully I can figure out how to properly use Photoshop for drawing one day

My Reviews:
Spooky - I agree with Nina, I was waiting for another portion of the comic to load since yours usually have several panels However, only one panel was needed to get the joke across. Love your comic, as usual. Can't say enough about the great expressions you draw. Can't wait to see more of their adventures in space

No Comment-Crossover - I probably wouldn't have caught the Lucky Green Boots detail if another reviewer hadn't mentioned it. But I love that it was thought about and put into the comic This was funny since I normally get this message from the Deserted Tomb. That or the Hissi trying to deny me my avatar Art was simple and effective. I think the Grundo's expression in the last frame is adorable. Like my puppy when she does something wrong and pretends she didn't realize it... oops! But I'm still cute! lol Nice job!

Other comics I liked:
Dandilion Tails - This one actually made me snicker out loud. hehe

This Comic Has No Title - The subtitle actually made me click on the title. lol And I thought the animation was pretty neat.

Time for me to go to bed...