Post by Nut on Dec 17, 2006 20:01:58 GMT -5
brains03 said:
Thanks Nut! I really appreciate the huge review you left, it makes me feel a tad guilty that I didn't give a longer one for Lucky Cake. Alas, next time.You're welcome. Heh, sometimes I think I ought to make my reviews shorter and do more of them; I may do that this week. And you don't need to feel guilty; Lucky Cake was, as I said, a story I wrote for fun and I wasn't really looking for serious critique on it. I appreciate your telling me what you thought of it. ^^
[glow=blue,2,300]In-4-Motif Tours for Newbies[/glow]
Taking advantage of newbies… evil. Skitter’s such a character. I like how the newbies are clearly newbies and not n00bs; the latter appears a lot more often in the Times than the former. I can imagine clueless newbies really doing these things. XD Poor newbies…
"My, but you look like you're in dire need of some pruning, too..."
A saw, eh? Maybe I should bring one along the next time I try to get something from the Money Tree. >> The rotting footwear gets overwhelming after a while. I liked the Ghostkerchief joke at the end of this paragraph. ^^
"Fifty Neopoints make a Dubloon, and ten Dubloons make a Nerkmid," another answered proudly.
Roffle! I can imagine this so easily. Reminds me of when I thought Paint Brushes could be bought with 5,000 NP…
I love Skitter’s question and answer section at the end. The Haunted Woods line was particularly funny. ^^
This was a really amusing story with a touch of realism, which I enjoy best, and the characters were done well. Great job. ^^
