261 Reviews

[Brains]

The Island- Nimras

I loved this story, kinda because it felt sort of reminiscent, but mostly because you fully realized a locale that never really felt entirely complete to me before.
The ending was really sad, and when I read it I sniffed a bit (I'm such a sucker for sad endings in short stories). All in all really fun to read, and really interesting.

[Nimras]

Dan

I'm sensing a bit of an influence from Pirates of the Caribbean.

Not really. *shifty eyes* *Throws away story idea of cursed sailor who must work with pirates to save the world*

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Nut

For some reason I wasn’t sure what Sephonie was to Marcus. Obviously at the end, I had to infer that she was his bride, but I was halfway convinced that she was his niece or something.

Blame the NT rules for relationships. I couldn't think of any way to make it obvious that the reason he was coming, and then she was going back with him, was because they were getting married. Many muttered frustrations, trying to get that out.

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Wisdom

I immediately thought of the Ghost Lupe Neopedia entry when I read Lupe Knight + Mystery Island, and surprise! Ghost Lupe Neopedia Entry!

I have to admit, I was kind of worried that I'd get called on the Ghost Lupe neopedia entry. I have read it, and simply don't agree with the hypothesis there. There's a big difference between "knight rescuing his bride" and "ships second mate saving 7 crew members". That, and this way gives the the option of another story... (Not making any promises on that one though. )

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Brains

I loved this story, kinda because it felt sort of reminiscent, but mostly because you fully realized a locale that never really felt entirely complete to me before.

I'm sure my version of Mystery Island is completely different than everyone else's. *grin* I gave it a very heavy Okinawan influence, mainly because I was living there when I started writing.



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