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Post by Yuka on Sept 30, 2006 4:11:10 GMT -5
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Post by Nimras on Sept 30, 2006 9:41:23 GMT -5
*grin* Don't I now how hard it is to remember everyone everyones username. Especially when they use a different name here than they do on Neopets.
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Post by Yuka on Sept 30, 2006 11:57:45 GMT -5
Thank you for the help, Nimras. :3 Sorry reviews are late. Either tonight or early tomorrow, I promise.
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Post by Yuka on Sept 30, 2006 16:02:47 GMT -5
Here are the reviews. I guess it must be a busy time IRL for everyone...
Sleight of Hand
I remember reading this in Work Reviews and Advice. I especially like the opening paragraph, it really draws the reader in! It works on a creepy level, because the first-person writing lets the reader get into his head. Wonderful work. I hope to see more of your stuff soon! n;)
More to be added shortly!
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Post by Sock on Sept 30, 2006 17:33:46 GMT -5
Don't mean to soudn like I'm begging, btu anyone who can, please check out my comic Mutant Doughnut and review it. :3 Thanks.
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Post by mats77 on Sept 30, 2006 18:17:22 GMT -5
Although I don't think it was written by a member of these forums, "Rebuttal: ‘On the Impossibility of a Jelly World’" by octochan is in response to my article in the 253rd article.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 30, 2006 19:04:21 GMT -5
Comic reviews a plenty! I'll probably get my reading reviews done on either Tuesday or Wednesday, as I am busy tomorrow and Monday. Looks like good reading, though.
Sticky Hand by imogenweasley - written by dan4884 Not the funniest joke I've seen, yet it did bring about a smile. The artwork was really nice, and I liked the touch of having the sticky hand go from one panel into the next.
Test my Patience by xpropugnator and gliderames Ah! It's finally in! I've read this about four times before, so its funniness was considerably less as I already knew what was going to happen, before it did. It was, however, still funny, and I'm glad that it finally made it in.
Mutant Doughnut by sockmonk and frostychica_ LOL! That was great. It was a surprise what happened, and it was hilarious when it finally did. The artwork looked nice as well, though the text on the sign and the text in the text bubbles were a bit hard to read, I think.
Lessons of Fame by ssjelitegirl That was great! I really liked it, a lot. It was funny and comical, and the art was as wonderful as always. Really nice job!
Luck Out by nanoalchemist That made...no sense, and the author's note was long and confusing. I did, though, get the joke, and that was funny. The art was good, too.
And...um...I've seen it said elsewhere, so what is a "glomp"?
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Post by Sock on Sept 30, 2006 19:54:51 GMT -5
And...um...I've seen it said elsewhere, so what is a "glomp"? A tacklehug. :3
I'll tell the artist of Mutant Doughnut about the text thing. Thanks!
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Post by scorchdragon on Sept 30, 2006 21:13:45 GMT -5
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Post by Lex Luthor on Oct 1, 2006 2:04:24 GMT -5
Here are the reviews. I guess it must be a busy time IRL for everyone... Sleight of HandI remember reading this in Work Reviews and Advice. I especially like the opening paragraph, it really draws the reader in! It works on a creepy level, because the first-person writing lets the reader get into his head. Wonderful work. I hope to see more of your stuff soon! More to be added shortly! Much thanks, and I do hope to pick back up my place in entering the Times.
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Post by Krycek on Oct 1, 2006 10:51:28 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Oct 1, 2006 12:49:30 GMT -5
Hi! I'm sorry to bring this up but I would really appreciate it if you could put my published article up? Roses are Black: Rise to Fame? Thanks so much! It's in the short story category, thanks again!
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Post by Deleted on Oct 1, 2006 14:05:12 GMT -5
One more comic review!
Maraquan Meercas Are Hard to Hug by krychek The artwork is beautiful! It's really soft, but has so much expression. I really, really like the art. The story is harder to get, though, and I found myself to be a bit confused. However, the end made most of that confusion go away, and it was so sweet. I couldn't help but smile and laugh. This was really nice.
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Post by Krycek on Oct 2, 2006 10:32:41 GMT -5
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Post by Sock on Oct 2, 2006 17:44:00 GMT -5
Mutant DoughnutYay for Plushie Draiks! ;D I noticed that the patch on his ear flipped sides in one panel. Otherwise, it's pretty good and I really like the Cybunny character. And more to come because I have to go for now. Yaaay for Plushie Draiks! Thanks for the compliment on Frosty, lol. And yeah, me and Frostychica noticed that it switched sides in one panel. But we were tired and needed to get it done so we figured it wouldn't matter. :P
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