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Post by Auto Run on Sept 17, 2006 0:06:22 GMT -5
I didnt understand this joke.what's happening  It's from the game Extreme herder where you (a kacheek) save petpets from Bathlazar. I thought since the kacheek is mostly carrying the pepets, for once, the kacheek can have a break and have a petpet carry him. oh..now i get it LOL |
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Post by Yuka on Sept 17, 2006 12:11:43 GMT -5
Thanks for the review, Kat.  |
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Post by kamikatze in france on Sept 17, 2006 16:26:30 GMT -5
could you give me a review of "cheesecake"??
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Post by Yuka on Sept 17, 2006 16:54:24 GMT -5
More reviews! Luau - Raeka A very enjoyable read. I feel like that kacheek sometimes, but I know when to stop myself now. I liked Raeka right from the start. She's got a lot to be jealous of, true, but she's also really kind and friendly... great job.  Sorry for the bad review. Still half asleep here. X.X Cheesecake Very funny. xD Poor Xweetok! Lovely soft art style, too. :3 The note on the bottom, though... everyone does that. I would leave it off next time. Other than that, great work! |
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Post by Deleted on Sept 17, 2006 20:00:54 GMT -5
Augh! I still have got little time (weekends away from home = lots of things pushed aside, me being helpless of it all). Though, the stories sound all great, so I really look forward to reading them all. In the little precious time I have now, I shall do a quick comic review. ^_^
No Game Here: Extreme Rider - hello5346 and 13blackdragonsExtreme Herder has always been one of my favorite games, and this joke of it was awesome! The art alone somewhat zapped away the laughter, though, as I find it difficult to laugh loudly while staring in awe at a beautiful piece of art (yes, art). My only negative comments are that I feel the kacheek's tail was too long and too skinny, and the text bubble seemed out of place, like a different font would have worked better. But then again, those are simply opinionated, and mean little in the long run, I guess. Overall, though, this was still great. ^_^ Cheesecake - Tyrannian Paint idea by allyssa_renne, art by kamikatze24Such a bitter-sweet little comic! I really enjoyed it - the art was so profound, and everyone was so expressive! The idea of a sun dial being a watch was an awesome idea, too! ~ - ~ - ~ Thanks, Dan, for the review. ;D I guess simply I figured Ellamara was commenting on how different Faerieland was based on Nevan's comments; I guess I may have not made their dialogue as even as necessary, then. And, yes, I like the idea of things not always being as happy as they seem, but also that things aren't as sad as they seem (I'm a firm believer that absolutes do not exist). The saddest part when writing it was how quickly I ended it. I had wanted to take it a bit more slowly, push their relationship a little farther, but I felt with the amount of death in it, and how close I got to *ahem* a Neopet relationship, trying to go past what I had would be setting me up for rejection. So, I made it as good as felt was acceptable. Thanks again for the review. |
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Post by Pacmanite on Sept 18, 2006 7:56:12 GMT -5
Kat, you forgot to add me to the list, but no biggy since I'm supposed to be away at this time. (I'm at an internet cafe in China now, getting my fix... xDD)
No Game Here: Extreme Rider - hello5346 and 13blackdragons
Heh, I like the concept! The art is very beautiful but it's sort of hard to decipher their expressions... I can't put my finger on it. But great work, made me laugh ^^
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Post by Deleted on Sept 18, 2006 16:23:27 GMT -5
Gallery Spotlight: A Step-to-Step Guide - Dimitris
This was an interesting, easy-to-read, and quite informative article.
Though I have no plans to ever run for the Gallery Spotlight, if I decided to, I'd definitely feel up to it with the instructions and tips you have included in this article. I really enjoyed this; I feel I really learned something.
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Post by mysterioustd on Sept 18, 2006 19:02:50 GMT -5
I'd like a review for my article, Raising Your Toddlers. It was my first NT article. It was held over for over a week, then finally, TNT sent me my acceptance neomail. I was overjoyed that I had to tell everyone about it. I was especially glad that the editor decided to feature me on the front page of issue 257, and gave my article another title. ^^
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Post by troublems03 on Sept 18, 2006 19:41:52 GMT -5
ARTICLES:
Gallery Spotlight: A Step-to-Step Guide
Well broken up and structured article as well as quite informative. As it happens, I was just starting my gallery this week and was very pleasantly surpised to go to the NT and find this useful article. Good job as a whole.
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No Game Here: Extreme Rider:
One of my favourite comics this week because it was so simplistic. The joke was clear and overall it was nicely done. Good work.
Cheesecake - Tyrannian Paint:
Well drawn and nice and expressive, especially on the part of the Xweetok. Favourite panel was the "Lalala painting myself" one...that was nice and sweet and particularly well drawn. Howver, I don't think that the author's note was necessary...it was a little long. But overall, great job.
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Post by Dimi on Sept 19, 2006 6:33:45 GMT -5
Thanks for the reviews! It was my first article and I'm pleased with the way it came out.
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Post by Kat on Sept 19, 2006 6:36:18 GMT -5
Kat, you forgot to add me to the list, but no biggy since I'm supposed to be away at this time. (I'm at an internet cafe in China now, getting my fix... xDD) [shadow=purple,left,300]I'll edit the list anyway. ^_^ What's your piece?[/shadow] |
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Post by Nimras on Sept 19, 2006 16:01:07 GMT -5
Gallery Spotlight: A Step-to-Step Guide
by pokemon_lunatic
I really like the organized layout you used in this article. Gallery Spotlight isn’t usually one of the things I pay attention to. Granted, I have a gallery, but all I do is stick stuff I like in there. *grin*
About the only thing I would have changed (or I may have just missed it) is an explanation that Firefox and IE don’t always show up the same, and that to win the Spotlight, the gallery has to work in both browsers.
Other than that, I really liked this article, I’ll probably never enter the spotlight – at least, not anytime soon – but I still like to know things for the sake of knowing things.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 19, 2006 16:13:41 GMT -5
Raising Your Toddlers by mysterioustd (Toan)
Not to say this article was bad, I was not pleased with it. It simply just did not hold my attention very well. That's probably more likely because I care not for Baby Pets, rather than not caring to give a review. Though I only saw a few small errors (such as "you" instead of "your"), I advise watching out for those small ones (they're always the ones that get me). Overall, a nice entrance to the NT and welcome to here as well.
Oh, and by the way, the "title" on the front page is merely a headline; it does not change the actual piece's title.
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Post by Nimras on Sept 19, 2006 16:39:16 GMT -5
Raising Your Toddlersby mysterioustd Well, I’ll be the first person to admit that Baby usually isn’t my favorite color (except for Lupes… Awww *cough* Sorry.) I think some of the suggestions for encouraging your pets to like each other would get me killed.  Some of mine inherited my love of sharp, pointy things….
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Post by Nimras on Sept 19, 2006 17:00:57 GMT -5
A Different Kind of Gameby precious_katuch14 Also by dan4884 Aww, I love the picture you all got – even if it isn’t custom. I actually had a similar idea when I got this card… I like your version much better than mine though. First of all – far less plot holes. *grin* I like how you could see what was happening in the game in between the separate smaller stories, very easy to follow and still complete in their own right. Though my favorite part of this story has to be Jerdana and Altador’s bantering.
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Sorry for the bad review. Still half asleep here. X.X
Some of mine inherited my love of sharp, pointy things….