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Post by Dan on Jul 25, 2006 13:22:10 GMT -5
That makes no sense to me either. o_0 |
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Post by costaricangirl on Jul 25, 2006 13:34:41 GMT -5
That makes no sense to me either. o_0 Um.... I think it's like one pet is trying to be nice to the other because they stepped on their Petpet? Thus the "that collar looks good on you" or whatever... I think so, anyway. xD Who knows? |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 25, 2006 13:49:32 GMT -5
Yeah, something like the pet was trying to get on the other pet's good side and the second pet knew that the first pet wouldn't say something nice unless he/she did something wrong. So it turns out he/she stepped on the petpet. Something like that. XD
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Post by Deleted on Jul 25, 2006 13:52:17 GMT -5
I um...have no idea....but it should say, "Kiro , your collar look s nice on you!" |
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Post by costaricangirl on Jul 25, 2006 14:04:29 GMT -5
To Work or Not to WorkThis was a cute lil' story, although it might've been a bit TOO short. I think it lacked a certain amount of detail and description (although I'm not too good with that either, heh). I thought the plot was fresh and original, although slightly unrealistic for an eight-year-old to actually work. I dunno, maybe I'm just unimaginitive (sp?). xD Overall I enjoyed reading it, and keep up the good work! I'll get to other stories and such later. 
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Post by costaricangirl on Jul 25, 2006 14:05:08 GMT -5
I um...have no idea....but it should say, "Kiro , your collar look s nice on you!" Hahaha you are SO right. I'm actually surprised that this comic actually made it into the NT...  |
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Post by Tashni on Jul 25, 2006 14:17:21 GMT -5
I um...have no idea....but it should say, "Kiro , your collar look s nice on you!" ... *shrugs* Well the collar was sort of the same color as the petpet so I was like, "is that supposed to be the petpet wrapped around his neck?" I really don't know. |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 25, 2006 14:33:33 GMT -5
I wondered that, too, Tashni. But then I thought it couldn't be. n:) I like your new avatar, Writingwolf!
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Post by Deleted on Jul 26, 2006 3:45:10 GMT -5
Haven't been here for a while, but also my new series "The Mynci Squad" could be added. ^^; Reviews are appreciated!  I really liked this - it sort of reminded me of The Secret Seven I don't think you've got too many characters, but I do think you're right about just using a few of them as main characters in future stories. I'm looking forward to reading the next part though |
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Post by costaricangirl on Jul 26, 2006 12:07:32 GMT -5
Haven't been here for a while, but also my new series "The Mynci Squad" could be added. ^^; Reviews are appreciated! I really liked this - it sort of reminded me of The Secret Seven I don't think you've got too many characters, but I do think you're right about just using a few of them as main characters in future stories. I'm looking forward to reading the next part though Thanks so much! I've never heard of The Secret Seven... Is it a Neopian Times story? I'll have to read it. |
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Post by costaricangirl on Jul 26, 2006 13:10:43 GMT -5
Eerie Friends
I really like this story! It was totally original, and I loved the voice of Westie--it sounded just like a little girl talking to an older sibling! I could totally imagine it. I think it could've been more descriptive, like describe the ghosts or the sisters in more detail than just what species they are, but that's probably something we could all work on. Especially me. xD
Overall I thought it was a great story, and I'm super psyched for the upcoming stories!
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Post by Deleted on Jul 27, 2006 2:00:32 GMT -5
I really liked this - it sort of reminded me of The Secret Seven I don't think you've got too many characters, but I do think you're right about just using a few of them as main characters in future stories. I'm looking forward to reading the next part though Thanks so much! I've never heard of The Secret Seven... Is it a Neopian Times story? I'll have to read it. The Secret Seven was a series of books written by Enid Blyton. It was about a group of kids who had all sorts of adventures and solved mysteries and things, but because it was written for quite young kids the mysteries were things like 'who took all the cookies from the clubhouse' |
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Post by Belle on Jul 27, 2006 3:46:21 GMT -5
Thanks so much! I've never heard of The Secret Seven... Is it a Neopian Times story? I'll have to read it. The Secret Seven was a series of books written by Enid Blyton. It was about a group of kids who had all sorts of adventures and solved mysteries and things, but because it was written for quite young kids the mysteries were things like 'who took all the cookies from the clubhouse' Actually (heehee...I'm going to be slightly off-topic here but when I read "Secret Seven", I just had to barge in), I enjoyed the Secret Seven series when I was younger and a lot of the mysteries involved more serious things such as their clubhouse getting used as a storehouse for thieves. Stuff like that. p:p Sometimes, things can get a little silly but they're all fun. ^^ |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 27, 2006 6:30:39 GMT -5
Actually (heehee...I'm going to be slightly off-topic here but when I read "Secret Seven", I just had to barge in), I enjoyed the Secret Seven series when I was younger and a lot of the mysteries involved more serious things such as their clubhouse getting used as a storehouse for thieves. Stuff like that.  Sometimes, things can get a little silly but they're all fun. ^^ Yeah, I know I remember one about a racehorse too I think... |
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Post by costaricangirl on Jul 27, 2006 17:22:30 GMT -5
Haha that's awesome! Too bad I didn't get into those books when I was a kid...
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