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Post by Belle on Jun 23, 2006 19:50:52 GMT -5
Issue 245 is out! p:D
Reviews for my article, In fashion: Names, are much appreciated!
All NTWF List coming in a while.
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Post by Cara has gone insane again on Jun 23, 2006 19:55:23 GMT -5
Still trying to get in: The Lost Knight
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Post by Belle on Jun 23, 2006 20:01:49 GMT -5
Still trying to get in: The Lost Knight Roffle. pXD This is a reviews thread, not a previews thread. p;) |
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Post by Tay - Sock Eater on Jun 23, 2006 20:05:28 GMT -5
I'm off to read your article, Belle. I'll review it in about ten minutes at the most.  |
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Post by Strife on Jun 23, 2006 20:11:10 GMT -5
The Ten Worst Ways to Leave the Darigan Citadel by iamskot and lupe_friend77
ZOMG, lupe_friend is one of the council members in my Sloth guild! Her actual name is Katire. Nicely done... first Azellica and now her! f:) *is very proud of his guild*
Anyway, this got quite a few chuckles out of me, and it should be a treat for both Darigan and Roo Island fans (Roo Island meaning the people who want Darigan kicked out of the Altador Cup f:P ).
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Post by Nimras on Jun 23, 2006 20:12:45 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Jun 23, 2006 20:18:24 GMT -5
"The newest issue of the Neopian Times has been released! Keep your eyes open for great stories and adventures like The Altador Cup Dream Team and The Gallion Ranch." Quite an honor to be in the news announcement. -cheers- Nimras, even I know pacmanite will be asking you to add her.  I'll try to get my reviews in sooooon.  Ame. |
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Post by Belle on Jun 23, 2006 20:25:15 GMT -5
I PMed you with additional NTWF comics, Nim. ^^
Comic Review
Something Has Happened by tdyans, art by nut862
Roffle! pXD There's nothing much to say. p:p This was so funny, tdyans. And, Nut, the variation of character expressions for each panel is awesome.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 23, 2006 20:38:27 GMT -5
I Review some comics since I'm a horrible writer myself and anything I tell writer's would probably not help them at all. The Gallion Ranch: Umm...I'm sure I've seen a comic (not in the NT) like that before. But anyways, love the art. The gallion you drew is awesome! Spooky: Haha, I love it. You're one of my favorite comic writers and I don't know why but I'm in love with your art. Great joke, got me laughing! I love comics that are Neo-related and not just a regular joke with neopets saying/doing it. Ai Yi Aisha: You used a joke about neo-related stuff and with real life combined. Awesome! Something Has Happened!: I'm stupid and didn't get it really. Sorry (bad reviewer here) Shoyru Squadron: Agents of Faerie: I love how your comics like like one's out of an old comic book. You're art is amazing! I also like how you can show that not all comics have to be funny. Way to go! The Locker Room: I love it!! Really funny but you did spell "Oops" wrong, the made it even funnier Keep 'em coming! |
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Post by Dan on Jun 23, 2006 21:47:29 GMT -5
Spooky-
This has to be my favorite Spooky comic to date. It was hilarious, the dialogue was spot on, and the are was amazing as always. I loved the line "We were a bit heldover." XDDD Perfect in-joke (sort of). Great job as always.
Shoyru Squadron-
Does this remind anyone else of that Kim Possible episode? Dunno if anyone watches Kim Possible anymore, but whatever. XP There was a similar storyline, but I think they ripped it off of yours. Yours is better. ^^ Great art, and exciting as always.
Court Rogue-Part 7
"...managing to slip on a patch of ice, fall though an open ground level window in the kitchen and pull a shelf full of cast iron pans onto himself. Mareian wished she could have seen that." XDDD GREAT line. How you pull of humor so well in a story like this amazes me. *is uberly jealous* These parts are flowing so well that it's over so quickly, which is a good and bad thing. I always want more, which is of course your intention. Good job. I just have one question. At the end it says Athless has a lack of alibi, but in Part 6 he said he was rolling bandages. Did I miss something?
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Post by Tay - Sock Eater on Jun 23, 2006 21:56:43 GMT -5
Sorry, Belle, that I didn't get it in as soon as promised. My mom was upset over something, so I went to sit with her and we watched a movie. In Fashion: NamesWow! I really like this. At first I thought it was going to be cliche, because I and many other people I know have tried writing articles about fashionable names before, and how to make a better name. But you included so many sections and so many things I've never really thought about before, such as pets naming themselves and feminine and masculine names! I also like the "Headed for Fame" section! I think you did a really good job on this article. It wasn't cliche at all, but instead, quite original! I also loved how it was written by your pet and not you. Although in the first paragraph, I noticed a lot of ?s and !s Lol, I have that same problem. Overall, I'd have to rate this article... 9/10 GREAT JOB, BELLE! |
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Post by Nimras on Jun 23, 2006 22:03:45 GMT -5
Court Rogue-Part 7 "...managing to slip on a patch of ice, fall though an open ground level window in the kitchen and pull a shelf full of cast iron pans onto himself. Mareian wished she could have seen that." XDDD GREAT line. How you pull of humor so well in a story like this amazes me. *is uberly jealous* These parts are flowing so well that it's over so quickly, which is a good and bad thing. I always want more, which is of course your intention. Good job. I just have one question. At the end it says Athless has a lack of alibi, but in Part 6 he said he was rolling bandages. Did I miss something? Athless lied. He was at the hospital, but not nearly as long as he'd let her to believe that he was.... Don't worry, it's all explained next chapter. ^^ |
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Post by Dan on Jun 23, 2006 22:16:21 GMT -5
Court Rogue-Part 7 "...managing to slip on a patch of ice, fall though an open ground level window in the kitchen and pull a shelf full of cast iron pans onto himself. Mareian wished she could have seen that." XDDD GREAT line. How you pull of humor so well in a story like this amazes me. *is uberly jealous* These parts are flowing so well that it's over so quickly, which is a good and bad thing. I always want more, which is of course your intention. Good job. I just have one question. At the end it says Athless has a lack of alibi, but in Part 6 he said he was rolling bandages. Did I miss something? Athless lied. He was at the hospital, but not nearly as long as he'd let her to believe that he was.... Don't worry, it's all explained next chapter. ^^ Ah, thanks, Nim! ^^ |
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Post by Belle on Jun 23, 2006 22:25:52 GMT -5
Sorry, Belle, that I didn't get it in as soon as promised. My mom was upset over something, so I went to sit with her and we watched a movie. In Fashion: NamesWow! I really like this. At first I thought it was going to be cliche, because I and many other people I know have tried writing articles about fashionable names before, and how to make a better name. But you included so many sections and so many things I've never really thought about before, such as pets naming themselves and feminine and masculine names! I also like the "Headed for Fame" section! I think you did a really good job on this article. It wasn't cliche at all, but instead, quite original! I also loved how it was written by your pet and not you. Although in the first paragraph, I noticed a lot of ?s and !s Lol, I have that same problem. Overall, I'd have to rate this article... 9/10 GREAT JOB, BELLE! That's okay, Tay. ^^ Whoot! ^^ Success! :3 I was trying to challenge myself by choosing a cliche topic and making it so that it's not cliche at all. You don't know how happy I am to read your review, Tay. *glomps* I was also trying to mix "fact" (stuff people can really use for naming their pets) and "fiction" (all those side stories I invented pXD ). I ended up writing something longer than I originally planned it to be. ^^; And, yes, I do have a fondess for questions and exclamations (not to mention smilies, heh, but that's beside the point). p:p Again, thank you! ^^ More reviews for my article "In Fashion: Names" are still very much appreciated. p:) |
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Post by Nimras on Jun 23, 2006 22:27:06 GMT -5
In Fashion: Namesby ladyariel32 “I can’t very well introduce myself as nadashikoh the Faerie Aisha in an article, can I? That’s just not proper! Get it? Proper? Because proper nouns are -- Never mind.” It is late, I am tired, I found that sentence hilarious… I’m now getting a weird look from my husband.  And Koko’s there! *squee!* I really don’t have a lot to say about it, because I helped with the beta version when you were asking for reviews and critiques. I still enjoyed reading it, the fourth or so time though. *grin* Re-readability is always a good thing. ^^
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Ame.
neo username - dan4884 