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Post by Nimras on Jun 23, 2006 22:41:32 GMT -5
One Stormy Day, Three Sunny Resolutionsby violinoutoftune Violin! *fuzzyglomp* I thought you’d quit Neo! “The Quigukis would have to use the Lab Ray on Sloth later.” “Finally, Les placed Dr. Sloth and Ballerina Usuki on her pillow, the villain somehow ending up with a pretty white tutu encircling his waste.”  Now those are mental pictures I wasn’t expecting. This story is so sweet! Les reminds me of my little sister … when she was littler. I love how you make her carry out her conversations with her dolls – just like a little kid would do. She does seem a little young to be left alone in the house for a long period of time, but the story really wouldn’t be a sweet without it, so I can see why you did it that way.
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Post by Nimras on Jun 23, 2006 22:47:28 GMT -5
The Gallion Ranch - spinoff
by pacmanite and hakuryu_86
Hee! Very cute. I love the happy look on the petpet’s face as she’s jumping… just so happy and oblivious… then the rear shot when she’s stuck. I also like the checkered pattern on the trampoline, and the colors. (Blame me being tired, but I was staring at the orange going ‘Ohhhh, pretty’ for longer than is probably healthy.)
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Post by Nimras on Jun 23, 2006 22:51:11 GMT -5
Spooky
by ghostkomorichu
“Komo’s been ill since issue 224 and you’re just now bringing his cure?”
“Well, we were a bit heldover”
*dies*
I love the facial expressions; they’re just so perfect for expressing what everyone is thinking. And the rampant puns… Muahahaha!
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Post by Belle on Jun 23, 2006 22:58:30 GMT -5
In Fashion: Namesby ladyariel32 “I can’t very well introduce myself as nadashikoh the Faerie Aisha in an article, can I? That’s just not proper! Get it? Proper? Because proper nouns are -- Never mind.” It is late, I am tired, I found that sentence hilarious… I’m now getting a weird look from my husband.  And Koko’s there! *squee!* I really don’t have a lot to say about it, because I helped with the beta version when you were asking for reviews and critiques. I still enjoyed reading it, the fourth or so time though. *grin* Re-readability is always a good thing. ^^ Hehe...thankies, Nim. ^^ I'm glad you still have the gusto to read it the fourth time around. p:p You probably don't want to know how many times I've re-read my article today. pXD Heh. |
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Post by Nimras on Jun 23, 2006 23:01:36 GMT -5
Ai Yi Aisha
by yami13331
…. May I borrow that excuse sometime?
Very cute concept, I love the hair on the island Aisha too. Especially the startled look in the last panel.
And the line at the bottom is classic.
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Post by Nimras on Jun 23, 2006 23:04:29 GMT -5
Something Has Happened by tdyans art by nut862 *snicker* I think he was angry by the end of the comic… Nice pun work Tydans. Nut, I love the expressions… I also like how the disco’s markings didn’t … migrate… during the course of the comic. *glomps* It’s nice to see that you’re move hasn’t stopped you from doing comics. 
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Post by Nimras on Jun 23, 2006 23:07:55 GMT -5
Shoyru Squadron: Agents of Faerie
by the_darkjedi
I love how the Blumaroo is still wearing his glasses…. He’s the million dollar man who couldn’t fix his nearsightedness or something.
…WHY do you always make me come up with 1960’s TV show references?
I still have to squint to read some of the text though. But that is a wicked looking mace he’s got there.
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Post by Yami on Jun 24, 2006 1:04:15 GMT -5
Wow...never expected to get my comic reviewed on this board. Thanks for the comments, Tee and Nimras! ;D Ai Yi Aishaby yami13331 …. May I borrow that excuse sometime? Very cute concept, I love the hair on the island Aisha too. Especially the startled look in the last panel. And the line at the bottom is classic. Heh...sure you can borrow it. It'd be a bit hard to execute, though. XP "But I couldn't work on my homework, teacher! My Neopet destroyed my textbook! ...er, no, she didn't eat it...actually, she read it..." |
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Post by Tay - Sock Eater on Jun 24, 2006 1:08:56 GMT -5
Sorry, Belle, that I didn't get it in as soon as promised. My mom was upset over something, so I went to sit with her and we watched a movie. In Fashion: NamesWow! I really like this. At first I thought it was going to be cliche, because I and many other people I know have tried writing articles about fashionable names before, and how to make a better name. But you included so many sections and so many things I've never really thought about before, such as pets naming themselves and feminine and masculine names! I also like the "Headed for Fame" section! I think you did a really good job on this article. It wasn't cliche at all, but instead, quite original! I also loved how it was written by your pet and not you. Although in the first paragraph, I noticed a lot of ?s and !s Lol, I have that same problem.  Overall, I'd have to rate this article... 9/10 GREAT JOB, BELLE! That's okay, Tay. ^^ Whoot! ^^ Success! :3 I was trying to challenge myself by choosing a cliche topic and making it so that it's not cliche at all. You don't know how happy I am to read your review, Tay. *glomps* I was also trying to mix "fact" (stuff people can really use for naming their pets) and "fiction" (all those side stories I invented  ). I ended up writing something longer than I originally planned it to be. ^^; And, yes, I do have a fondess for questions and exclamations (not to mention smilies, heh, but that's beside the point).  Again, thank you! ^^ More reviews for my article "In Fashion: Names" are still very much appreciated.  Yippee, then you definitely succeeded! Good job, and -high five- |
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Post by Deleted on Jun 24, 2006 4:24:11 GMT -5
"The newest issue of the Neopian Times has been released! Keep your eyes open for great stories and adventures like The Altador Cup Dream Team and The Gallion Ranch." Quite an honor to be in the news announcement. -cheers- Yay, me too! The Altador Cup Dream Team article is mine |
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Post by Violin on Jun 24, 2006 8:03:58 GMT -5
One Stormy Day, Three Sunny Resolutionsby violinoutoftune Violin! *fuzzyglomp* I thought you’d quit Neo! “The Quigukis would have to use the Lab Ray on Sloth later.” “Finally, Les placed Dr. Sloth and Ballerina Usuki on her pillow, the villain somehow ending up with a pretty white tutu encircling his waste.” Now those are mental pictures I wasn’t expecting. This story is so sweet! Les reminds me of my little sister … when she was littler. I love how you make her carry out her conversations with her dolls – just like a little kid would do. She does seem a little young to be left alone in the house for a long period of time, but the story really wouldn’t be a sweet without it, so I can see why you did it that way. Thanks for the review, Nimras! I didn't even have to ask.  And yes I'm here on the NTWF and still do play Neopets, just not as much as I used to. ...About those mental pictures... this was suppposed to be just a nice, sweet story. But I couldn't help writing those things in there for some humor.  --- EDIT: I just now noticed that I got quote of the week. I viewed the front page like three times before realizing that. I'm so blind. ;D |
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Post by nttryingtogetin on Jun 24, 2006 9:14:46 GMT -5
Spooky: I've always loved Spooky. The art, the joke, the characters... They're all great. All of your comics own.. But this one was the BEST. It was hilarious. I repeatedly read it, and everytime, I was laughing. I love the third panel and the last panel - the expressions on both of these panels are priceless. Keep up the awesome work. xD Shoyru Squadron: I haven't actually read any of your comics before, but I read this one. It's a very different comic from the rest (well, I think so) because it focuses more on action. The art was brilliant, though it does look slightly busy. Also, I love the smaller panels, where the Blumaroo says why he's better than the Shoyru's. I can't wait for the next installment! Good work. 
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Post by Huntress on Jun 24, 2006 12:02:56 GMT -5
Whoa, is that thread long or what? I just got back from the countryside and looks like I've got some catching up to do... reviews for "S&S: A week in Bogshot" are all so very appreciated ^^ I'll try to review something later on...
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Post by Star on Jun 24, 2006 12:45:03 GMT -5
Whoa, I haven't been on in a while. The usual...exams etc. But here are some reviews!
In Fashion: Names by ladyariel32
Haha, there's nothing bad I can say about it. I loved this and it was amusing. Nadashikoh was perfect. I loved everything about this!!!
Comic reviews:
The Gallion Ranch - spinoff by pacmanite, script by hakuryu_86
Hahaha! I found this quite funny actually. The art was great, as well.
Spooky by ghostkomorichu
Every issue I read the Spooky comic and I think, "This time, it can't make me laugh." And it always does! Always original and funny. This issue has to be one of my favourite!
Ai Yi Aisha by yami13331
At first, I didn't see the funny side of it. But that might be because I, being me, missed the last line and then I thought it was great!
Something Has Happened by tdyans art by nut862
Hahaha! This one made me laugh. At first, I didn't understand but then it was me being slow.
Shoyru Squadron: Agents of Faerie by the_darkjedi
So exiciting now! I envy your drawing...
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Post by Deleted on Jun 24, 2006 14:34:38 GMT -5
Greetings. I would like for you all to review my story, please. It's 'The 10 Most Obscure and Forgotten Neopians'. First Article and hopefully not the last. Thanks all! I'll get some reviews up soon, as well, for the the other stuff. ^^
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Now those are mental pictures I wasn’t expecting. 
Overall, I'd have to rate this article... 9/10 GREAT JOB, BELLE!
And yes I'm here on the NTWF and still do play Neopets, just not as much as I used to.
