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Post by Loki'sRose on Jun 20, 2006 4:01:57 GMT -5
Share Your Toys...: whoot, a handdrawn comic ^^ Very well drawn too, with shading n stuff. *is obsessed with shading* The plushie looks a bit... sceptical x3 As if it knew what was about to happen. And the Skeith looks so very cute in panel three (or four, if you count the title). The only thing that bothered me was the royal Shoyru's gasp, the mouth didn't really look like a mouth as it was so close to the nose. (It is a mouth, right? o.o) And as the panel didn't have any writing whatsoever, it looked a bit off. Even a short "Oh no!" would've worked fine. Yeah, I'm nitpicky today xD But it was still a good comic and I'd love to see more from you ^^ I love shading. But yeah, you're right, I kind of botched some of the drawing and lineart. It's been sitting half-finished in my sketchbook so long, I figured I'd just finish it, errors and all. As for the gasp, I was kind of going for the 'Scream' look. It didn't even occur to me to put text there. ^_^;; Ah well, I'm very glad you enjoyed the comic, and thank you so much for taking the time to review it!
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