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Post by Deleted on Jun 9, 2006 22:22:36 GMT -5
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Post by peri on Jun 10, 2006 1:16:37 GMT -5
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Post by Loki'sRose on Jun 10, 2006 1:40:03 GMT -5
Squeak! I have comic in for the first time in over a year! *so fails at comic series*
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Post by Azzandra on Jun 10, 2006 2:41:43 GMT -5
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Post by nttryingtogetin on Jun 10, 2006 14:23:48 GMT -5
Of Truffles and Such, by shadowcristal: Another beautiful, yet haunting story. I love the way you write, Sia. The description in it was lovely, especially when you portrayed Jerad's hunger, and also the love for his family. I did think that the Kiko was acting rather strangely.. It became clear why when Jerad gave in to his temptations! You explained Jerad's feeling very clearly, and I'd recommend this story to anyone who likes chocolate and people who like good plots, descriptions and explanations.  A great story.
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Post by Huntress on Jun 10, 2006 14:46:49 GMT -5
Reviews for "Shad and Saura: A week in Bogshot - part 2" are very appreciated, etc etc :3 I'm gonna try to do some reviews this week, though I'm not sure if they'll be for comics or stories. Eh, I've been lazy lately. Smack me x.X
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Post by Dan on Jun 10, 2006 16:07:23 GMT -5
Court Rogue Part 5- Minor nitpick: How did Mareian know Jeran got that ring? You mention she wouldn't be able to lie, but did she know Jeran was getting that ring? I don't think so, if I remember right. *too lazy to go check* Hehe, that part about him hissing made me laugh. I never really thought of Jeran hissing. Good part overall, but I thought it was a tad boring. Will there be any action soon? Looking forward to next week. EDIT: And Jeran is so funny when he thinks about Mareian. Don't you wish we could write more romance?  |
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Post by ethan on Jun 10, 2006 17:37:37 GMT -5
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Post by Nimras on Jun 10, 2006 17:48:09 GMT -5
Court Rogue Part 5- Minor nitpick: How did Mareian know Jeran got that ring? You mention she wouldn't be able to lie, but did she know Jeran was getting that ring? I don't think so, if I remember right. *too lazy to go check* Hehe, that part about him hissing made me laugh. I never really thought of Jeran hissing. Good part overall, but I thought it was a tad boring. Will there be any action soon? Looking forward to next week. EDIT: And Jeran is so funny when he thinks about Mareian. Don't you wish we could write more romance? Way back in another chapter (one of the ones where there was "no plot build up" ) Mareian told Jeran that he should visit Illusen, because 'he knew more about the locks than she did'. She was really sending him so Illusen would give him the ring. Mare knew Jeran well enough to know that he would have gone, she just wasn't sure if he'd gone yet, hence her peeking while he was tying up her wrist. |
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Post by ethan on Jun 10, 2006 17:59:10 GMT -5
Meepit War Tactics by: cytherea007 and peri0neoBeatiful artwork, I loved it so much. The outlines of the meepits & feepits make it look tidy and neat and the floor pattern is cool. The front doors and shop title are an added touch that makes it awesome. I really like the font you use for the title. Easy to get joke and very funny. The expression on the feepit reading in the pink chair is the best! ;D -------- EDIT: Btw grats on getting first in the comic list. It beats mine being 13th in the list, lol.
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Post by Dan on Jun 10, 2006 21:34:01 GMT -5
Court Rogue Part 5- Minor nitpick: How did Mareian know Jeran got that ring? You mention she wouldn't be able to lie, but did she know Jeran was getting that ring? I don't think so, if I remember right. *too lazy to go check* Hehe, that part about him hissing made me laugh. I never really thought of Jeran hissing. Good part overall, but I thought it was a tad boring. Will there be any action soon? Looking forward to next week. EDIT: And Jeran is so funny when he thinks about Mareian. Don't you wish we could write more romance? Way back in another chapter (one of the ones where there was "no plot build up" ) Mareian told Jeran that he should visit Illusen, because 'he knew more about the locks than she did'. She was really sending him so Illusen would give him the ring. Mare knew Jeran well enough to know that he would have gone, she just wasn't sure if he'd gone yet, hence her peeking while he was tying up her wrist. Oh, I see. Although it makes sense in your brilliant mind, it obviously didn't transfer to mine. I guess just make sure you explain everything thoroughly is a tip. I've sure made that mistake before.  |
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Post by Nimras on Jun 12, 2006 8:19:19 GMT -5
Shad and Saura: A Week in Bogshot - Part Twoby ssjelitegirl Awww, I’m falling more and more in love with Clopsy. I like how you have the different kinds of magic; the wild elemental type, and the tamer kind that didn’t have to be bullied to make it work. And I love this: “Saura spent a few very energetic minutes dashing around and pulling out books from the shelves. The Meowclops hid under the armchair - he was familiar enough with the symptoms. The last time Sophie had dashed around like that, it had resulted in a brand new potion that flew away and almost blew up the Deserted Fairground.” Sometimes I think the Meowclops is the only one there with sense.
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Post by Nimras on Jun 12, 2006 8:38:27 GMT -5
Nothing is As it Seems: Part Five
by estantia
Poor Illusen, I get the feeling that she never did mentally managed to catch up with what they were all talking about.
I’m a little confused at the end, which two are falling? Than again, I’m pretty sure it will be obvious when the next chapter comes out. *grin*
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Post by Nimras on Jun 12, 2006 8:42:05 GMT -5
The Cudgel Karmaby ethan_redshaw The foreman looks psychotic.  All he’d have to do is walk out and the opponent would run away in fear of the toenail polish attack. I like how you did the background coloring here, with the shade fading halfway across. It
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Post by Nimras on Jun 12, 2006 9:03:23 GMT -5
The Face Behind the Dancerby rebornluthia Nice custom. ^^ I think that is like the second Aisha to ever have open eyes. There’s a lot going on in this story; I actually think it would have been suited to be a series with it spanning the whole war like that. I was a little confused when I realized that you had the Darigan pets being colored Darigan before the orb was stolen because according to the plot the orbs theft was what mutated them. I guess I’m just easily confused. My not having my cup of morning tea may have had something to do with that too. I like the last paragraph… *sniff* How you brought Kanrik back in. I was wondering when he was going to show up.
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1st one on the comics list, so neat! 
neo username - dan4884 
All he’d have to do is walk out and the opponent would run away in fear of the toenail polish attack.