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Post by Kat on Mar 24, 2006 22:17:25 GMT -5
It's...out?
Reviews for my short story, "Lullaby" would be appreciated.
LIST OF STUFF TO REVIEW (EDIT THE SECOND):
Shorts:
~Lullaby by yours truly
~Climbing the Snowflake Tree by doughnut215
~The Adventures of Payne the Draik by frynr and goten__10
Articles:
~A Bit of Maraqua in your Dry Neohome by tashni
~Making Ex-Tensions of your Extensions by velveteen
~Having A Superlative Chomby Day by lassie_nikki
Series (continued):
~Treasure of the Caves by ssjelitegirl
~Walk the Plank by puppy200010
~Deserts and Desserts: A Gargarox Isafuhlarg Story by darkerstrife
Comics:
~Something Fishy by ssjelitegirl
Series (new):
~The Shoyru Tamer by sammywalkers
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Post by Gav on Mar 24, 2006 22:19:07 GMT -5
No fair. *sulks* I was gonna make it, but I went to check MQs and... eh. XD I'll be sure to review it later, Kat.  |
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Post by Kat on Mar 24, 2006 22:19:55 GMT -5
No fair. *sulks* I was gonna make it, but I went to check MQs and... eh. XD I'll be sure to review it later, Kat. Bwahaha. ^_^ What goes around, comes around. Gav gets KARMA'D! *cough* Thanks though. And what's a MQ? |
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Post by Gav on Mar 24, 2006 22:20:46 GMT -5
No fair. *sulks* I was gonna make it, but I went to check MQs and... eh. XD I'll be sure to review it later, Kat. Bwahaha. ^_^ What goes around, comes around. Gav gets KARMA'D! *cough* Thanks though. And what's a MQ? Memorable Quotes. |
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Post by Tashni on Mar 24, 2006 22:24:21 GMT -5
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Post by Kat on Mar 24, 2006 23:17:30 GMT -5
Thanks, Tashni. ^_^
Which reminds me - I have to make reviews too. ^^; Tashni - I'll review your article as payback.
I love the custom images in this issue! *stares and starts to drool*
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Post by Deleted on Mar 25, 2006 5:15:07 GMT -5
I'd love a review for my short story 'Climbing the Snowflake Tree' if anyone has the time =)
Reviews for a couple short stories coming soon, promise! xD
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Post by velveteen on Mar 25, 2006 8:45:37 GMT -5
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Post by Huntress on Mar 25, 2006 8:57:21 GMT -5
Well, Kat gets to make teh List then ^^ I can't review without the list. I'm too lazy for that. Ohkay, my "Treasure of the Caves" series is finally finished. Does anyone feel like reading and commenting it? @.@ *puppydoglefox eyes* *hands out cookies* I know it's pretty long but I s'pose it's not that bad... or is it? And then there's the newest Shad and Saura comic, called Something Fishy. About time it got published, I drew it in January...  ; |
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Post by Kat on Mar 25, 2006 9:21:00 GMT -5
Well, Kat gets to make teh List then ^^ I can't review without the list. I'm too lazy for that. *makes list* Is that how you do it? ^^;;; |
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Post by fryn on Mar 25, 2006 9:39:14 GMT -5
Re-posting this in the right place this time  -- ... I've just been invited to join the forum (thank you patjade!) and have just had my 1st attempt at writing a short story published (in conjunction with my daughter, goten__10) I'd love to know what you think about it - if you have a chance to read it through. Its the one about "The Adventures of Payne the Draik". Take care, Fryn |
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Post by nikki on Mar 25, 2006 9:43:01 GMT -5
Hello ;D I'm new to the Neopian Times and (thanks to Patjade) this forum. My article (Having a Superlative Chomby Day) that appears in this week's issue is my first one to be accepted  I'd like to know what you guys think about it because I could use some constructive criticism, hehe. |
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Post by Scar on Mar 25, 2006 9:46:59 GMT -5
Welcome to the NTWF Nikki and Fryn. I hope the both of you enjoy your time here ^_^
As for the reviews it usually takes a while for them to appear so be patient. *pokes Kat to add to list*
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Post by Deleted on Mar 25, 2006 10:58:42 GMT -5
Reviews for Walk the Plank: Part Three would be greatly appreciated! Just so I don't forget, I'll go do some reviews as soon as I'm done doing dailies on neopets . |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 25, 2006 11:38:46 GMT -5
Two reviews...
A Piece of Maraqua in Your Dry Neohome-I love the way you wrote the narroration in this article! The dialect of the article definitely made it more fun to read. It was also nice that you included the pictures of the petpets, because if you hadn't, I'd probably have scurried off to the trading post or something to find out what they looked like. Overall, it was a fun article to read, while also being informational!
Climbing the Snowflake Tree-I like the way you caught my attention in the beginning of the story by describing the new neohome and setting the scene for the story. Because the plot wasn't extensively developed, the story seemed very short and a little repetitive. A plot twist or some more action might have helped to make the story more interesting. Another thing I liked was the way Bordelian seemed so determined to climb the tree, though by the end of the story, I'm still slightly confused why he was. I'm assuming that it was just a personal goal of Bordelian, but it would have been nicer if you would have stated it a little more clearly. I like the way that you ended the story. Bordelian requesting another move wasn't something I was expecting. Overall, I thought the story was cute and enjoyable!
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Furgo 
Michael. 
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I'd like to know what you guys think about it because I could use some constructive criticism, hehe. 
