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Post by Dan on Jan 27, 2006 23:24:16 GMT -5
Yay! Any reviews for Tales From Cabin Eight: The Creature in the Cabin? (Wow, that's a mouthful  ) |
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Post by Patjade on Jan 28, 2006 1:41:09 GMT -5
Yay! New Sheep of Doom! I am happy to see Shing return to the NT.
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Post by nttryingtogetin on Jan 28, 2006 5:26:21 GMT -5
I'll be reviewing some stories, and if there's any good starts for Continued Series, I'll review them too. ^^
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Post by Gav on Jan 28, 2006 6:38:40 GMT -5
Congrats to Kat for making QoTW.  |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 28, 2006 10:01:39 GMT -5
Nothing in for this week. I think this is the second time that has happened ever since Sia was published in the NT..
Congrats to Kat! Here's a review for you! *throws confetti*
A Hero's Journey: Part Four
Wow... Yet another awesome part of the story... Now is when things are really set in momentum ^^ Reuben is being very over-dramatical, isn't he? I'm surprised that Rohane grew so much in such a short time, though knowing his character it's kind of easy to understand... The ending is really sweet (no cliffies so far though they all entice one to read more). The QotW reminds me a bit of some other story by a very good writer who wrote about 'The Knight Within'... So Rohane will be self-teaching from now on? Interesting. I noticed that Kat didn't use as much of her beautiful, flourishing descriptions like she usually does in this part; it was more action-like... I like that too, though =)
Looking forward to reading the next part...
(Will Reynold really get killed? Sorry if it's a spoiler.)
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Post by Huntress on Jan 28, 2006 10:55:28 GMT -5
My new series starts this week. It's called Treasure of the Caves and it's pretty long o0; If you've seen my comics then you'll be glad to meet good ol' Shad and Saura there. Along with many others.
I'd really appreciate it if you pointed out each and every little grammar mistake you run into. You see, this spring I'll be taking my highschool graduation English exam and I'm going to need very good results as this exam will define my whole future (yus, no pressure x.X). But the English teacher we got this year is an idiot. She spends most of the lessons discussing our class's behavior and we haven't learned much this year. So I need to carry on on my own. And I could use your help.
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Post by Buddy on Jan 28, 2006 12:49:02 GMT -5
Any review for my series, "Green Genies and H.A.M.S." would be mundo appreciated! It ends this week, so... now's the perfect time to get in and review it before it's too late! ^^;;
I'll try to do some reviews this week. I shouldn't be as busy as I was last week, so it'll probably be easier.
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Post by Speck on Jan 28, 2006 12:52:41 GMT -5
I would like some reviews for my comic "Triple Negative"...
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Post by Deleted on Jan 28, 2006 13:38:01 GMT -5
I'll do the requests so far, unless they are a series. (Blame me for being so lazy...)
Tales From Cabin Eight: the Creature in the Cabin
I like the introduction. Rather narrative, though it's a bit of storytelling it isn't too boring and does catch the reader's attention. The beginning (before the ***) reminds me of this place at summer camp (on an Island) where there was this mysterious house number 34 3/4 and an angry, strange guy living there...
Anyway, the story doesn't contain a tons of fancy words (spares me some dictionary-looking) but you describe the horror rather inventively. Sometimes the story sounds a bit stale with quite a number of sentences beginning with words like 'as' and 'when'. The character introductions were a bit simple, and the way you describe them later on is nice, though I would've liked a bit more showing and less telling. With so many characters, the story was a bit hard to keep track of. The story didn't really feel that deep, but the action at the end with the spyder and everything was entertaining. I like the way you leave it open for a sequel (and just look at the title!)
Overall it was a rather light-hearted (though scary) short story that wasn't too long and provided an amusing read.
Sheep of Doom
*smile*... It wasn't exactly straight-out funny (the llama bit was a bit funny though) but the TBC shows of some promise... Is this a continued comic? If so, I'm looking forward to what happens next...
Triple Negative
Quite good for a one-panel. I like the art, though the background looks a bit plain. It's the good old 'when pigs fly' thing, isn't it? ^^
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Post by Dan on Jan 28, 2006 13:45:26 GMT -5
I'll do the requests so far, unless they are a series. (Blame me for being so lazy...) Tales From Cabin Eight: the Creature in the CabinI like the introduction. Rather narrative, though it's a bit of storytelling it isn't too boring and does catch the reader's attention. The beginning (before the ***) reminds me of this place at summer camp (on an Island) where there was this mysterious house number 34 3/4 and an angry, strange guy living there... Anyway, the story doesn't contain a tons of fancy words (spares me some dictionary-looking) but you describe the horror rather inventively. Sometimes the story sounds a bit stale with quite a number of sentences beginning with words like 'as' and 'when'. The character introductions were a bit simple, and the way you describe them later on is nice, though I would've liked a bit more showing and less telling. With so many characters, the story was a bit hard to keep track of. The story didn't really feel that deep, but the action at the end with the spyder and everything was entertaining. I like the way you leave it open for a sequel (and just look at the title!) Overall it was a rather light-hearted (though scary) short story that wasn't too long and provided an amusing read. Thanks for the review! I appreciate it. (By the way, I've already got a sequel in the works. In fact, I planned it to be more of a series of short stories. ) |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 28, 2006 13:50:28 GMT -5
I'll do the requests so far, unless they are a series. (Blame me for being so lazy...) Tales From Cabin Eight: the Creature in the CabinI like the introduction. Rather narrative, though it's a bit of storytelling it isn't too boring and does catch the reader's attention. The beginning (before the ***) reminds me of this place at summer camp (on an Island) where there was this mysterious house number 34 3/4 and an angry, strange guy living there... Anyway, the story doesn't contain a tons of fancy words (spares me some dictionary-looking) but you describe the horror rather inventively. Sometimes the story sounds a bit stale with quite a number of sentences beginning with words like 'as' and 'when'. The character introductions were a bit simple, and the way you describe them later on is nice, though I would've liked a bit more showing and less telling. With so many characters, the story was a bit hard to keep track of. The story didn't really feel that deep, but the action at the end with the spyder and everything was entertaining. I like the way you leave it open for a sequel (and just look at the title!) Overall it was a rather light-hearted (though scary) short story that wasn't too long and provided an amusing read. Thanks for the review! I appreciate it. (By the way, I've already got a sequel in the works. In fact, I planned it to be more of a series of short stories. ) You're welcome ^^ I think I'd like to read more, just because it's so fascinating. I don't think the Spyder was that terrible or scary, though... :/ But the authorities on that place does leave one wondering... |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 28, 2006 14:14:53 GMT -5
Anyone want to Review my Article Tyrannian Pets - Stones And No Combs?
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Post by Patjade on Jan 28, 2006 19:26:56 GMT -5
Meowth, I am getting some good feedback on our comic this week. A lot of people really like your artwork.
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Post by Kat on Jan 28, 2006 20:46:10 GMT -5
Nothing in for this week. I think this is the second time that has happened ever since Sia was published in the NT.. Congrats to Kat! Here's a review for you! *throws confetti* A Hero's Journey: Part FourWow... Yet another awesome part of the story... Now is when things are really set in momentum ^^ Reuben is being very over-dramatical, isn't he? I'm surprised that Rohane grew so much in such a short time, though knowing his character it's kind of easy to understand... The ending is really sweet (no cliffies so far though they all entice one to read more). The QotW reminds me a bit of some other story by a very good writer who wrote about 'The Knight Within'... So Rohane will be self-teaching from now on? Interesting. I noticed that Kat didn't use as much of her beautiful, flourishing descriptions like she usually does in this part; it was more action-like... I like that too, though =) Looking forward to reading the next part... (Will Reynold really get killed? Sorry if it's a spoiler.) *hops around happily* Thanks. ;D Go me. Thanks for the review, Sia! Yay! (And yes... AHJ SPOILER AHEAD. READ ON AT YOUR OWN RISK.Reynold will die.AHJ SPOILER TRANSMISSION COMPLETEI'll try making random reviews, since I'm really busy and I barely do any reviews right now... |
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Post by Killix on Jan 29, 2006 1:52:20 GMT -5
Meowth, I am getting some good feedback on our comic this week. A lot of people really like your artwork. Oooh, that's nice ^_^ Thanks for the heads up. |
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