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Post by alittlegrey on Sept 12, 2004 4:25:36 GMT -5
Ahhh thanks >.<
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Post by alittlegrey on Sept 12, 2004 4:54:02 GMT -5
-- starrs comic reviews --
186201 Wishing Well Drive: That's cute >.<
Cup O Borovan Hehe, I wonder where those books go... (hurrah for pixel art!)
Deviled Delight I think the joke's really good, and I'd like tosay a great, big thanks to silverqueengalaxia for letting me do the art!
Don't Blame ME LOL I hate that art size limit (and yet again: yey for pixels!)
Fair Immutanty Nnoo you can't call faelliles ugly...they're so cute, but I'l forgive you because your art is so cute and pixely
Fashion Faux-Pas LOL that gelert has fashion sense just like me... well... sort of
If You Only Knew... GASP poor snowflake, cute art though >.<
My Life With a Teenage Noobie lol, this one made me hungry...talking about all that food... it was funny
Neopian Circumstances Lol that always happens to my in that game, only sometimes it involves a piano... great art!
Neopian Wackiness hehehe .GIF movies rock, and it was pixely too!
Quest for Comedy (sniff, i wish I could draw people...) I love the art, that poor Aisha *shivers* I hope there's nothing under my bed...*looks*
Ramblings... Hey, the art wasn't bad it's pixely, and very cute, and the joke wasn't that bad, you should see some of mine... *shudder*
Rock Pool Rascals I'm not sure I get the first bit, but the art is cool, and it's funny too
Starry Stuff Lol, I can't wait 'til I can use the lan ray *cackles evily*
The Kitchen Krew awww i love the art, the joke, and everything, Oddy is one of Odyno's many nicknames too *grins*
The Strange Adventures of a Strange Poogle aww that's mean! poor poogly...it's soo cute (i like it though =) )
Usuki Trouble Okay, that's enough I'm not sure I can take anymore of people being able to draw better than me (lol) I loved it... it reminds me of something I did to my sisters doll when i was little *snicker*
Wishful Thinking lol plot twist, very funny, go pixels!
Yama & Ourra lol yeah imbeciles...wait a sec, I have that avatar! *gasp* lol very good (and pixels rule)
okay there, all the comics are, done, exept the stolen ideas ones, very, very naughty people! Kind of a bummer that A Little Grey didn't get in, but never mind. Great job to everyone who did get in! (exept the evil naughty people) see ya later! starr xx
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Post by Deleted on Sept 12, 2004 8:24:17 GMT -5
Okay, I'm ready for a few more random reviews: Turn the smile upside down! by: nincondemius I always like articles about Grey pets for some reason... lol, this article was amusing from start to finish! The different steps and *sigh*s were perfect! Very nicely done, it was enjoyable to read. ;D A Back-stabbing Competition: Story of Kyishi by: tennisblondie16 This story was pretty cool! I liked the competition, and the coconut oil, it was a nice twist. ^^ I also found it funny that the villain's name was Felicia! No bother though, it was a cool story. A Mind in the Moonlight: Part OneOooh, scary! I think it's a very nice first part. It seems a little fast-paced, but the awesome storyline makes up for it. I love the poem about the shadows! Can't wait to see what happens to Lael.
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Post by tennisblondie16 on Sept 12, 2004 10:17:09 GMT -5
Okay, I'm ready for a few more random reviews: A Back-stabbing Competition: Story of Kyishi by: tennisblondie16 This story was pretty cool! I liked the competition, and the coconut oil, it was a nice twist. ^^ I also found it funny that the villain's name was Felicia! No bother though, it was a cool story. Thanks a lot for the review! Yeah, lol when I re-read it, I had forgotten I named the villain Felicia ;D I might do some random reviews with stuff that hasn't gotten a lot of reviews yet.
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Post by redpen on Sept 12, 2004 10:26:39 GMT -5
Warning: All my reveiws may be spoilers....
Mind in the Moonlight: Part One
I really liked how it was haunting. You had a couple of typo's here and there, and maybe instead of writing 10 12, you could write them out. Ten and twelve
The Sacarb Tree: Part One
I liked your characters, and it was a pretty cool plot idea, but it all just seems sort of rushed, and that leaves us not caring so much about what is going to happen. The Scarab tree just plops down in there, and the sister sort takes everything he said for granted, and the magic pearls again sort of randomly appear. Nice characters though.
Logic And Circumstance: Part One
I liked this quite a bit, though the transition between the days was a bit awkward. Maybe I just read to fast. I love how you use foreshadowing to make us wonder if it was all a ploy to get her to do somthing.
DEFINATE SPOILER HERE!
Gaurdians of Old: The Last Part I liked the plot well enough, it was good and fairly orginal for an epic, I have a couple of nitpicks thought.
was stained, showing that the he had been hit a lot of times by the sharp swords.
This part made me laugh and I don't think it was supposed too, but that's just my insanity. Okay, the only thing is that I don't feel like we get to know the gaurdians well enough to really care about them when they die. I auctually know/care about the villan more. Other than that I really liked it.
SQUAD MISSION: Part 2
I really liked this, I found the chef funny and entertaining. I love how you give the lupe an aura of mystery, the only thing was how can a water faerie stand up if she can't walk?
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Post by Deleted on Sept 12, 2004 11:26:21 GMT -5
Thanks a lot for the review! Yeah, lol when I re-read it, I had forgotten I named the villain Felicia ;D I might do some random reviews with stuff that hasn't gotten a lot of reviews yet. 'Welcome. I might be doing some more reviews too.
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Post by aakfish on Sept 12, 2004 11:34:38 GMT -5
I finished all my Geography, Business and English homework so I can do some reviews. Just tell me what you want me to review and I will do. I can't do series though, sorry.
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Post by barbcat00 on Sept 12, 2004 11:43:42 GMT -5
random comic reviews:
Deviled Delight Cute all around, art and concept
Don't Blem ME Squeeze those pixels in! Such despiration. Such fun.
Fashion Faux-Pas Be careful what you wish for. Thanks for letting me do it Puzz!
If You Only Knew Love the bulgy eyes in the first panels and all the expressions. Cute!
My Life with a Teenage Noobie Oh so accurate. *shivers*
Neopian Wackiness I love job descriptions like that. Makes you feel so important!
Rock Pool Rascals Fool me once... Yes, we need a negg Chia! Great job.
Starry Stuff Great expressions. The ears in the second panel seem to sort of blend with the floor. But still a good job.
Wishful Thinking The result of a twisted mind.
Yama & Ourra LOL I like the changing shirt too.
Are there any short stories that haven't had much review that I could do for someone?
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Post by barbcat00 on Sept 12, 2004 11:45:38 GMT -5
I finished all my Geography, Business and English homework so I can do some reviews. Just tell me what you want me to review and I will do. I can't do series though, sorry. A review of Tima and Again, my short story, would be immensely appreciated!
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Post by aakfish on Sept 12, 2004 11:49:32 GMT -5
A review of Tima and Again, my short story, would be immensely appreciated! Sure thing
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Post by aakfish on Sept 12, 2004 12:06:40 GMT -5
Time and Again
by barbcat00
I wont lie, I got really confused at the start of the story. However I went through it again and really enjoyed it. This was very well written and flowed perfectly.
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Post by barbcat00 on Sept 12, 2004 12:11:11 GMT -5
Time and Againby barbcat00I wont lie, I got really confused at the start of the story. However I went through it again and really enjoyed it. This was very well written and flowed perfectly. Thanks, I was afraid of that problem, especially when I went back and read it again for the first time in forever and had the same difficulty. I tried to make it abrupt and grabby, but I think I made it a little too abrupt.
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Post by marysue on Sept 12, 2004 12:31:42 GMT -5
I finished all my Geography, Business and English homework so I can do some reviews. Just tell me what you want me to review and I will do. I can't do series though, sorry. Can you please review my short story, Second to None? Thank you! I have a review for A Sister's Embrace.. I love this story! I love unhappy stories in the Times. I guess it was unhappy, it made me very sad, but the end was kind of a cheer up.. was the story originally that way, or did you originally have Sunjat actually drown and you couldn't put that into the Times? I'm very curious.. Anyway, I actually went back and read your story Under the Poplar Tree. This amazed me, too. You are such a good writer, I am going to keep an eye out for your stories.. keep it up!
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Post by nincondemius on Sept 12, 2004 12:50:45 GMT -5
Okay, I'm ready for a few more random reviews: Turn the smile upside down! by: nincondemius I always like articles about Grey pets for some reason... lol, this article was amusing from start to finish! The different steps and *sigh*s were perfect! Very nicely done, it was enjoyable to read. ;D Wow, you really think so? *ish astounded* Thank you so much for the review!!!
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Post by char on Sept 12, 2004 13:16:09 GMT -5
I finished all my Geography, Business and English homework so I can do some reviews. Just tell me what you want me to review and I will do. I can't do series though, sorry. My short story, 'They Don't Call it Freaky Factory for Nothing!', please?
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