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Post by marysue on Sept 11, 2004 14:23:05 GMT -5
Could someone please review "Second to None"? Thank you!
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Post by Deleted on Sept 11, 2004 14:32:57 GMT -5
Could someone please review "Second to None"? Thank you! I'll do it as soon as I can. ;D And your welcome, Cosmic.
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Post by barbcat00 on Sept 11, 2004 15:04:15 GMT -5
Thanks for the kind reviews on Wishful Thinking (Puzz gets to take the bow on the Fashion Faux-pas of course). And I will be getting to reviews either tonight or tomorrow, after my slave labor day is done.
Reviews for my short story Time and Again would be greatly appreciated. Have fun!
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Post by aakfish on Sept 11, 2004 15:36:29 GMT -5
So You Want to Be a Petpet Sitter by: aakheperkare This was a very interesting article! Petpetsitting! Sounds fun, eh? I loved the intro, it was cute and funny. In fact, the whole article was cute and funny, and informative as well. Good job! Thanks for the cool review Playmobil ;D ;D
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Post by Sock on Sept 11, 2004 15:46:29 GMT -5
186201 Wishing Well Drive Nice, original artwork, cute punchline. Well done. A Snowy Morning Hehe. Pretty cute. Cup O Borovan Eh, the joke wasn't funny at all, and the artwork was rather sloppy and quickly drawn. It was...okay. Deviled Delight Really cute and great artwork. I love Deviled Delight. Don't Blame ME ROFL! That was great. Fair Immutanty The Usul was really ugly, and normally I think Mutant Usuls are cute. My friend's Mutant Usul, Usullum, would be offended because she LOVES cute stuff. The joke wasn't that great and I feel that it made fun of Mutants. Fashion Faux-Pas Really cute comic. Well done. If You Only Knew... Hehe, that's cute. Evil little Angelpuss, stealing the Snowflake Doll like that! My Life With a Teenage Noobie HEHE! That is such a good series.
I might review more stuff later.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 11, 2004 16:01:48 GMT -5
Thanks for the cool review Playmobil ;D ;D 'welcome. Back to the reviews... Of Lights From Within: Part Four by: chocolateisamust and blubblub317 Ooooh, suspenseful! Poor Maddi, I feel so bad for him. But it is a very awesome story, guys! The emotions and descriptions are very clear. Another great part of OLFW. Can't wait to read the rest! ;D A Sister's Embrace by: erileen Aww... *sniff* what a sad story! Very well written, but very sad indeed. I almost cried... I really do like the show of emotions and the ending was immaculate. Very nicely put together! Second to None by: lemonkitty13 Oooh... *shivers* I absolutely LOVE the Shadow Usul. Okay, the first part was bone-chilling, I really like it! And this was your second piece in the NT? Wow. It's not every week that you read a story like this. ;D Time and Again by: barbcat00 Wow, this story was pretty cool! It was unique because it makes the reader feel like they're in the story. The dates begininng each part were clear and the storyline was very unique. Good job!
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Post by Retired Blub on Sept 11, 2004 16:03:32 GMT -5
Thank yuo so much, Playmobil!
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Post by char on Sept 11, 2004 16:10:13 GMT -5
Grr... you people are lazy. Nah, just kidding. But, any reviews on They Don't Call it Freaky Factory for Nothing! and Daughter of a Star: Part 2 are greatly appreciated. Yeah... they both have a million visible typos and grammatical errors... Now, to review some more stuffs... anyone want me to review something?
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Post by char on Sept 11, 2004 16:20:26 GMT -5
A Back-stabbing Competition: Story of Kyishiby tennisblondie16Oh! Wonderful story! Such an original plot! I literally couldn't take my eyes away from the screen, I HAD to finish this. Poor Kyishi, I pity her. I found it a bit funny that you named the villain Felicia...
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Post by Deleted on Sept 11, 2004 16:23:06 GMT -5
A Sister's Embrace by: erileen Aww... *sniff* what a sad story! Very well written, but very sad indeed. I almost cried... I really do like the show of emotions and the ending was immaculate. Very nicely put together! Thank you so much, Playmobil! *hugs* I'm glad you liked it.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 11, 2004 16:27:11 GMT -5
Playmobil's Random Reviews: 100 Ways To Tell if you are Addicted to the Neoboards by: darci44 Heh, cute article! My favorites were numbers 48 and 68. Good job for a first-time article! I definitely know that I'm addicted to the Neoboards, I'm addicted here! ;D Except... why does the article repeat itself?? It's printed out twice... 50 Secret Avatars that will Never be Released: Part One by: harper1618 and pseudo Part one?? Ooh, there's more?? Haha, pretty funny, my favorite one was number 36. Good collab, guys, and a great topic to talk about! I'll keep my eyes peeled for Part Two! How To Love the Neopet You Hate by: stoneman3x As Rider said, hopefully this will decrease the abandoning! Very helpful article indeed, and surpirse, surprise, iatemysocks the PTERI was created! Waah, it wasn't a Tuskaninny... oh well. Great article!
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Post by Deleted on Sept 11, 2004 16:30:42 GMT -5
Blub and Eri- Your welcome. ;D Char- I'll review your stuff. Wow, I'm on a serious reviewing-spree! They Don't Call it Freaky Factory for Nothing by: shadih_temporary Lol! Great story, Char, very funny! It really held my interest. It was very amusing and I like Cassandra and Mark's contentious behavior. It really made the story funny. I liked it! ;D Daughter of a Star: Part Two by: shadih_temporary Cute second part! That is a really cool thing to find out, and my cat's name is Cali! ^_^ Umm... I do have one thing to point out... I thought a series had to be 1500 words or more per part... I did like it! It just seemed a bit short.
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Post by Sirius on Sept 11, 2004 16:31:20 GMT -5
Dum de dum. *sigh* Guess I'll go review something...
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Post by Deleted on Sept 11, 2004 16:32:56 GMT -5
Dum de dum. *sigh* Guess I'll go review something... I'm reading. I might not be able to post your review now (I have to get off relatively shortly) but rest assured I will read it and post a review.
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Post by Sirius on Sept 11, 2004 16:33:36 GMT -5
I'm reading. I might not be able to post your review now (I have to get off relatively shortly) but rest assured I will read it and post a review. K. (At least I know someone's reading). *pokes Neomail inbox*
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