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Arin just had to try speaking to him.

Famous last words.

Or in this case, the decision that sets off the entire rest of the story and turns the course of history on its ear.

Because main characters tend to do that.

[Avery]

Three days earlier, the Lion had released Alicia from the Den with fifty bleeding lash marks on her back, an unmarked phial of clear liquid in her waistband, and an exorbitant fine levied against her. He had, conspicuously, not sent out with her any explicit instructions as to how, precisely, she was supposed to befriend the stranger Bryony Dahl and use the woman to gain entry into the rebel organization Alicia had been coerced into infiltrating.

All night long I've been like "Carrie, stop writing, your fingers hurt for cripes sake". But I can't stop. ;___; It's like my muse is releasing all the words it's been hoarding for the past few years at once.

[Coaster]

Sept 27, 2014 1:20:58 GMT -5 Avery said:

Three days earlier, the Lion had released Alicia from the Den with fifty bleeding lash marks on her back, an unmarked phial of clear liquid in her waistband, and an exorbitant fine levied against her. He had, conspicuously, not sent out with her any explicit instructions as to how, precisely, she was supposed to befriend the stranger Bryony Dahl and use the woman to gain entry into the rebel organization Alicia had been coerced into infiltrating.

All night long I've been like "Carrie, stop writing, your fingers hurt for cripes sake". But I can't stop. ;___; It's like my muse is releasing all the words it's been hoarding for the past few years at once.

Yup, muse does like to alternate between hostage and jailbreak and usually at the worst times, eh? ._.

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The last thing she wanted to hear right now was life advice from someone who was systematically dismantling her life. If he really cared so much about that, he would be better off leaving her alone.

The future never felt so dark or uncertain.

I'm having fun making Arin more frosted at Byk when they first meet, especially since my co-writer did such a great job of playing him up as slightly more of a jerk at the beginning.

[Twillie]

"But I think our own problems are far from over."

I have finally finished scripting the arc, I can now finish drawing the rest of it.

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She wanted so badly to take all of their pain away. Sometimes she wished she could personally put her arms around them one by one and tell them everything was going to be all right. But she could settle for the next best thing, which was to tear down the regime that had done this to them.

She and Jaxon watched Yuriy blend back into the crowd, and then Arin glanced back to Radovan as he spoke to her.

Same story as last time, but... very many words later. xD This is from what we're actively RPing, not the manuscript of earlier material I'm editing.

Arin just wants to hug all the bidurruti. G'awww Yuriy is really adorable though. Nothing like cute monster children with Slavic names.

[Breakingchains]

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Ever have something come to mind and you just start typing it?

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Sept 28, 2014 8:37:53 GMT -5 Breakingchains said:

By using Miracline, the patient grants MiraCo exclusive rights to all uncovered thoughts, memories and associated imagery for advertising purposes. MiraCo may contact you telepathically from time to time with exciting special offers. By using Miracline, the patient agrees to not research, download, create, or execute any neural antivirus program. Miracline is also available in three yummy flavors of convenient, easy-to-swallow gel capsules!

Ever have something come to mind and you just start typing it?

Bwahaha I love it. That's terrifying.

An enormous smile broke over Leti's face and she jumped up, waving her hand. "Jasna! Jaxon!" Turning, she scrambled over to Harran and suddenly scaled the woman's back like a guster, sitting on Harran's broad shoulders, which she did not seem to mind as she clutched Leti's ankles. "Jaxoooon! Jasnaaaa!" the girl called again, waving frantically.

Leti's rather angry most of the time so it's nice to see her acting happy and cute like this. I enjoy her friendship with Harran, too. The size juxtaposition between them is amusing (Leti is 5', Harran is 6'9") and they have a sisterly camaraderie.

[♥ Lulu]

Sept 28, 2014 8:37:53 GMT -5 Breakingchains said:

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Ever have something come to mind and you just start typing it?

That sounds like such a fun, yet sinister, idea!

She wonders if they have Christmas trees in the Lost Desert.

Already nearly finished getting my Christmas story out of the way. I hate present tense, so I'm punishing myself.

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She lifted her helmet in the air and waved it, looking as excited as a child on a holiday. It was as though she'd grown tired of having to play soldier and had decided to cast aside that shell. Now that she had experienced something better, it was difficult to want to slip back into the cold, angry state she'd been in before.

In which Leti finally gets to be a kid again. Poor girl's usually hauling around a rocket launcher.

[Blu]

Aress: Yes, but mainly It stares at me at night. Like I have said, I only see It either in the library or in my room. I have told It to stop coming by the dormitory at night because our conversations upsets Xoki, but really I enjoy It’s company. Although, it is rather uncomfortable when It stares at me from the window when I try to sleep. When I told It that It keeps me up at night and that I needed a good night’s rest. It just told me that It had to warn me.

This is hopefully going to be a line in my BVU Submission. My attempts at being mysterious and creepy. >.> Words always sound better in my head.

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Arin was at a loss for words for a moment, simply stunned by Radu's insensitivity and self-centeredness. When she finally spoke, her voice was shaky and quiet. "... Why does he hate me so much?" she asked Bykendi. "What did I ever do to him?"

Gah, Radu, stop being an immature jerk.

[Blu]

He had to admit, for a red head, she was beautiful. Usually his MO was blondes, but this girl’s hair was a beautiful hybrid, like a floribunda rose tumbling from her skull in curly locks.

We were doing a little writing exercise in my Intermediate Fiction Class and this little beauty came out of it. For the record a floribunda (which I probably miss spelt is a hybrid type of rose in the petals are a sort of harsh ombres of reds to yellows.)

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She frowned and curled her hands around Bykendi's arm, burying her face into his sleeve. "This is not like when I befriended you at all. You have a beautiful heart beneath that monster's face. His monster is on the inside."

Gah, I promise this whole thing isn't some sappy mushfest. <_< Earlier in the post I had eccentric engineers and spunky cyborgs and giant soldier women and an Irish doctor grandma, I swear! Arin just can't not be sappy is all. And her actions happened to come last.

[Avery]

The sanctuary smelled of incense and lime—the former courtesy of the eight sticks burning on the altar, one for each god, but the latter Alicia couldn’t quite place.

Went through my entire 16k and edited in pertinent world-building stuff that I only thought up after doing my major plotting (so, after writing a whole lot that now was somewhat conspicuously devoid of world-building XD). Now on to fresh material, whoo!