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Post by Zylaa on Oct 31, 2010 22:16:32 GMT -5
Self-explanatory, really.
"It was really quite ridiculous how cold it was, Peter Hawkins thought, as he watched the crew of the Saltkite prepare for battle."
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Post by Rikku on Oct 31, 2010 22:44:05 GMT -5
'The incubus was talking to a girl, some pretty blond Bless-beauty with blue eyes and an awed expression.'
... Yyyeah, not my most interesting. xD
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Post by Birdy on Oct 31, 2010 23:20:42 GMT -5
"Somewhere on Earth, in the undefined future (which shall henceforth be referred to as “Present Day”, as that what it is in this story)..."
=3
Or, if the intro doesn't count, it'd be this:
"He was crashing; that much he knew."
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Post by friday on Nov 1, 2010 0:24:52 GMT -5
"Somewhere hidden among the vast waves and folds of the ocean, there was an island."
Sorta bland, but whatever. XD
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Post by Butterfly on Nov 1, 2010 0:48:51 GMT -5
"My name is Joshua Rymes and I am Death."
I'm giving first person a shot this year. It's definitely different... Wonder if I can keep it up?
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Post by Tam on Nov 1, 2010 1:38:04 GMT -5
'Once upon a time, no one really knows when, there was a kingdom.'
...Specific! ^_^;
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Post by Amneiger on Nov 1, 2010 2:07:06 GMT -5
"The dawning of consciousness is not a black and white thing, a sudden light upon sentience that draws the resting one upon their feet."
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Post by Celestial on Nov 1, 2010 2:28:27 GMT -5
'The Shangri-La drifted through space, carrying its strange load of people with it, like a large animal carries its fleas. '
x3 I think so highly of the people on the ship.
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Post by Shadaras on Nov 1, 2010 2:44:03 GMT -5
The hunger eating away at her wasn’t the worst of it.
...and then it goes on into an internal monologue about the nature of life and stuff? xD
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Post by Gelquie on Nov 1, 2010 3:08:43 GMT -5
"A majestic summer dawn peeked itself over the mountains, sending its waves above the horizon and giving the first of its kind rays towards the little village of Valdreen." Yay cliches! And the next few sentences talk about the town already being up for quite a while. Screw the dawn. ^^
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Post by Fam 1741 on Nov 1, 2010 3:14:12 GMT -5
It was 1:00 PM; I wouldn’t be able to wake up this late tomorrow, or the day after, or the day after.
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Post by Yuka on Nov 1, 2010 3:28:46 GMT -5
Whispers in the dark illuminate my drifting mind. Sounds like a lot of people are off to a good start!
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Post by Deleted on Nov 1, 2010 4:44:52 GMT -5
"It was the night before Christmas."
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Post by Avery on Nov 1, 2010 5:02:58 GMT -5
Well, it's two sentences, but the first is nothing without the second, so:
I saw my sister Zoie today. It wouldn’t have been such a big deal if it weren’t for the fact that Zoie’s been dead for a decade now.
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Post by Goosh on Nov 1, 2010 6:13:18 GMT -5
'There was about fifteen minutes left to go before lunch when I spontaneously combusted.'
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