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Post by Deleted on May 25, 2007 20:23:31 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on May 25, 2007 21:13:50 GMT -5
The Happiest Quiggle:
This made me crack up. Really. It's really an excellent comic idea, as well as a good strategy for real life, even! I should try it sometime! ... Oh yeah, except that nobody comes to me asking for quests. Oh well. XD
Spooky:
As always, your comics are hilarious. I love how Komo's reflection is the redone neopets image in the mirror. And Tombstones looks very nice without his hood. This one made me laugh as well. ^^
The Bunker:
I love how your comics always have lots of jokes in them instead of just one punchline! Phil doesn't really seem like much of a 'people person', does he? D=
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Post by jockylocky on May 25, 2007 22:58:59 GMT -5
The Portrait Just as i suspected! The cold hearted Mrs. Prenderghast would break down at the sight of the portrait. Awesome series, one of the best i have ever read  One thing though, where did you get the last name "Franz"? I know someone who has that as a last name  |
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Post by nikki on May 25, 2007 23:32:55 GMT -5
Could you add Quinton's Quest for the Golden Carrot under Short Stories by me, lassie_nikki ! I'd appreciate any reviews please and I will review back for you! |
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Post by Fj0rd on May 25, 2007 23:33:07 GMT -5
I would love reviews for Waiting for Anna. ^^ It's probably one of my favorite pieces I've had in the Times.
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Post by Dice on May 26, 2007 6:43:03 GMT -5
A review for mine and Blace’s piece would be great (It finally got in, yay!) Reviews: Short StoriesExtraordinary Shelter by LuauThe opening was very good; it drew me in gently and softly, like slipping into cool, refreshing water. The writing was simple and extremely enjoyable to read, immersing me in the story with seamless transition. I really liked this line: I don’t know why, I just liked it However, I really felt this piece was too short. It left me with several questions, such as queries about Cora’s attack, why the cactus blossom had grown so tall (it was because of the water, right?), and whether or not Cora would ever reach Altador. I wish you’d added a little more depth to the ending and not just finished with a line that seemed, to me, slightly out of place. But the opening/beginning was very good ^_^ |
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Post by Dice on May 26, 2007 6:54:07 GMT -5
New Series
Waiting for Anna: Part One by Fj0rd
Wow, Fj0rd, you write beautifully. I found myself becoming so interested in the piece, and what will happen to Anna. That prologue gives me a vague sense of dread, as does the cliffhanger ending. I don’t really have any criticism for this piece, because I thought it was really good—the character is very believable and so is her situation, and I want to know more about Anna’s story. Combine that with excellent writing and imagery, and….I’ll be watching this series. (Write more! XD)
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Post by Deleted on May 26, 2007 6:55:11 GMT -5
Heheh, did anyone see the editorial this week?
It seems Dr. Sloth took over it for the day. It was quite hilarious, I feel.
That said, since today is my birthday, I'll probably not be able to do any reviews until tomorrow.
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Post by Dice on May 26, 2007 7:01:15 GMT -5
Yeah, I saw that, I always read the editorial XDDD (Happy birthday, Wolf!)
Comics
The Happiest Quiggle by Nut
Illusen’s expressions are priceless XD Especially the last one. This was a good joke and I liked the art. The first and second lines made me giggle. Hypocritical faeries.
Spooky by Komori
First off, congratulations on finally getting this comic in, Komori. I was excited to see it. Secondly, passing by all the praise I would give about your awesome art….the last panel made me honestly crack up laughing. Another hilarious comic!
The Bunker by hubadawaha
“What’s with the ‘no pants’ thing?” made me laugh. Phil is really funny. I want to know what happens next :3
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Post by Deleted on May 26, 2007 7:10:09 GMT -5
I love when Adam would pop in at random times and do the editorial... but Dr. Sloth is pretty cool, too.  |
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Post by Goosh on May 26, 2007 7:53:52 GMT -5
COMIX (all comic series this week...) The Happiest Quiggle by NutXDDDD I honestly didn't see where it was going until the end. Laugh. Out. Loud. And the FW mentions were awesome. Good work! ^__^ Spooky by Komori0_= Ew. But funny. And it's good to poke at foibles. Wonderful. The Bunker by HubaXDDDD Excellent! Now, lesse, we've got Sorore, Phil, Valryio, the...um....other two, and you. This is -packed-. =D And insanely funny. |
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Post by Goosh on May 26, 2007 8:05:23 GMT -5
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Post by Nut on May 26, 2007 9:52:39 GMT -5
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Post by Serene on May 26, 2007 12:42:26 GMT -5
The Happiest Quiggle by Nut
I liked the artwork in this, Illusen was especially nicely drawn. The joke was pretty good to, I expected to see Jhudora, am glad the comic did not get that long.
Spooky by Komori
I loved the artwork, of course. But the joke had me spit up a little of the drink I was drinking at the time. Good job.
The Bunker by Huba
I love how many jokes seemed to fit in one of your comics. I loved the "no pants thing" also Phils simple way of saying" touche"
Roc's Box by green_roc
The artwork was great and the joke was good. It was punny. The thing that made me laugh the most though was the "Yak Yak Yak" because sometimes when I am explaining something I just say "and yada yada."
Pink Poogles and Glowing Jelly by Dragon and flufey_is_cute
I saw the thread where you two were discussing thism but it was still funny. I like the how the kacheek (That is a kacheek right? Don't want to be wrong.) was reading the times. (S)he seemed almost annoyed that someone was talking while they were reading it. This comic made me laugh. Great job.
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Post by Deleted on May 27, 2007 12:47:19 GMT -5
Alright, the missed pieces have been added to the list. My apologies they weren't there sooner.
The Happiest Quiggle by nut862
ROFL! I loved the blatant allusion to the Faerie Wars. ^_^ Illusen's muttering to herself was nicely done and never seemed boring, which, for such a long monologue in a comic, was really good. Then, the cheater! That was the best, though: send her questers out to get the ingredients they like for her entry. ^_^ The art was beautifully magnificent as well.
Roc's Box by green_roc
That was simply the greatest! I wasn't certain what the "sign" was for, but then, when the joke was made, I just could not stop laughing. Awesome job.
Spooky by ghostkomorichu
Komo's always my favorite, no matter what he's doing. ^_^ I think it was pretty cool to make his reflection in the mirror his re-drawn self. Then, when Tombstones arrived on screen, his panic was just hilarious. His dashing off at the end... O_O that was even funnier. And their reaction to his was just the greatest. :)
The Bunker by hubadawaha
Once again, I don't think the white background detracted from the Bunker feel one bit. You know, I also don't know why I had thought you'd never personally be in there...guess I figured you were one of those "heard but not seen" kind of owners, lol. Though, when Oracle did arrive, why'd she have to climb out a window and around to the front if she was already inside...? The short words war between Oracle and Phil was funny. ^_^ The bonus, though, wasn't that great this time.
Pink Poogles and Glowing Jelly by aqua_blue_dragonfly and flufey_is_cute
Aww, poor Korbat! That comic was one of those bittersweet ones, for however funny it was, it was also just sad and pitiful to see it start raining so suddenly. The art was nicely done, as well, and I really liked the comic as a whole.
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