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Post by Nimras on Feb 23, 2007 20:14:02 GMT -5
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Post by unstealth on Feb 23, 2007 22:58:04 GMT -5
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Post by Tashni on Feb 24, 2007 0:06:14 GMT -5
*droolz in envy over totally awesome pic*  It's so preeeetty . . . and eviiiiil . . . |
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Post by Kat on Feb 24, 2007 3:12:47 GMT -5
[shadow=purple,left,300]Chronicles of the Court Rogue: Jealousy - Nimras
When it comes to romantic innuendo, you're my idol. XD You managed to sneak several hints about Rolan/Lisha and Jeran/Mareian into the series. I'm taking a page from your book when I start my next AHJ installment - although it's still a toss-up between Reuben/Andrea and Reuben/Liwanag, in my case. As for Rohane...you all know who I've got for him. XD
Anyhow, I like how the story wrapped up. I like how the descriptions were rich and yet not too overdone *cough*LIKEMINE*cough* and it was a happy ending - I mean, not happy as in fairytale-ish happy, but you get the idea. I eagerly await the next CCR.[/shadow]
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Post by Deleted on Feb 24, 2007 6:52:37 GMT -5
Articles:A Simple Guide to the Site Spotlight by unstealthHey, you got on the front page  Good article, easy to read & useful tips. Comics:Spooky by ghostkomorichuOoh, ghosts in space. I like Komo's petpet And the Meepits Outgrabe by KittyI don't know why but the thing I like most is the little Meridell Castle bucket  Continued Series:Chronicles of the Court Rogue: Jealousy by nimras23I liked the story - I would have liked to see how Rolan deals with his brother and his good ideas now, but maybe you're planning a sequel to deal with that? I loved the ending, all romantic - I'm always amazed how much you manage to get away with!
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Post by hat on Feb 24, 2007 11:53:50 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Feb 24, 2007 13:24:18 GMT -5
I'm going to try for a full review this week (minus series I've not been reading), though I can't promise it.
Spooky by ghostkomorichu
Pop ups and space shuttles?! Boy, anything does go in outer space! Another lovely comic, yes, and I just love the joke and I love the art and I loved all of the expressions on your pets. They were wonderful.
These next ones...are sometimes on the list, though sometimes not...
I think they're by NTWFers, though am I wrong?
Razzle Dazzle - Episode VIII by khestrel
This comic almost seems incomplete, as if I've missed something or if it was just leading up to something bigger. Nevertheless, I really like your style of art and I enjoyed reading this.
And the Meepits Outgrabe by kittylin
Aww...I always end up saying "aww" over Miles. He's so cute. ^_^ This comic was really nice, and I really liked how it turned out. It was just adorable. Your art was fabulous once more. I also liked the touch of the ball deflating in that last panel.
Results May Vary by return_of_itsy
^_^ That was just wonderful. Why does it feel so familiar, though? Oh, yes, I have siblings of my own. I really liked the art as well, and the joke was priceless.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 24, 2007 13:53:19 GMT -5
Chronicles of the Court Rogue: Jealousy - Part Eight by nimras23
So it has come to an end... I feel I shall miss it, I suppose.
I loved this last part, Nimras, though that's not to say, of course, that I haven't loved the rest of them, because I have. I wanted to know why everyone waited and longed for your CCR stories, and now I know, and I'll be waiting and longing with everyone else now, it seems.
It was quite fitting that the relics hadn't been stolen at all, merely taken out to king Rolan. That was a good part, though the best part, I felt, was Mareian's and Jeran's time atop the balcony. It was so...soft in mood, and it felt...dreamy, and it really brought this wonderful series to a perfect close.
I had a wonderful, unforgettable time reading this, Nimras. I await your next stories.
Crowd, perhaps?
I shall just assume your "R" key was not working when you wrote this. ^_^ lol
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Post by Deleted on Feb 24, 2007 15:43:06 GMT -5
Another Hero's Journey: Part Seven by precious_katuch14
Things finally feel like they're moving again. Reuben's getting out of the cave and the storm's coming to an end, or at least we can assume and hope. Andrea's gift to him was well-made and really added that extra touch of touching-ness to this part of the story, and I really liked that. The fact that her brother's name had been Ruben was just...one of those things that don't really have words to be described by, but it was a good feeling, I guess.
The exchange between Tala and Jovan felt a bit awkward at first, though as I don't believe Jovan's been in this story much yet, perhaps that was the reason for its strangeness. When the letter came up, rather, when it was read, things seemed to fall into place and the awkwardness left. That letter...it is definitely interesting and I would very much like to see where it takes things. Dark Hope seems like an interesting character, yet I can't quite tell if he's a good one or not.
Overall, things, like I said, are starting to feel in motion again. As well, your descriptions weren't bad in this one, but actually quite good. I think Joan could have used a bit less, and Jovan a bit more on where he stands in relationship to the others, but it was all manageable. Good job. ^_^
Legend Seekers: Mysterious Magic - Part Six by yatomiyuka
What was written on the scroll...was very powerful. I've read so many analogies almost identical to that, or at least with the same duality in mind, yet that, I have got to say, has been one of the most powerfully-said ones I have ever read, if not the the most powerfully-said one I've ever read.
Jen's part, as a whole, was quite well-written, with a lot more description than I've seen elsewhere in this story. That wasn't bad, no; on the contrary, it was a pleasant change, and it really made the images come to life. Kail Selvar. I don't know what to say about him yet. The name sounds somewhat familiar, though, though I'm not entirely sure why it does.
Pemero's part was quite dwarfed by Jen's. ^_^ It was sufficient, though. I'm not entirely certain I understand why Pemero panicked when Seth came, as what he and Afton were saying didn't seem that bad to me. I'm also curious as to what that tower is. I shall have to wonder and wait, I suppose.
The Mirror of Memories: Part Five by sytra
Well, quite a bit happened, and no time passed. ^_^ I had figured that no time would pass in either timeline when she passed through the mirror, yet the revelation was still entertaining to read with how it was written and written well.
The entire journal thing is also an incredibly interesting aspect of this story. Aina could reads into the "future" and stop the problems from occurring before they occurred, instead of just trying to fix them. Or, as she has done so far, she could let things go without knowing and see where things take her. I don't think that's a good idea, though. I think it's only going to cause trouble, not solve it.
I also have bad feeling about the door being left unlocked, but I guess I'll have to wait to know if it's justified at all.
I think that it's missing an end to that quote. Unless she thinks out loud like I do. ^_^
Catching Up: Part Three by extreme_fj0rd
This chapter seemed to flow a lot faster than the last two, something that I accredit to its being told primarily through Lianar's perspective. Arielle seems like a cool Air Faerie, even though not much is really know about her yet. Lillian also seems like another interesting character, though I do have to wonder why she was in detention in the first place.
I don't think I've quite said it yet, but I really like the academy that you've presented here, with all of these classes and such. It actually reminds me a bit of a school for Faeries that was a part of my NeoAdventure before I abandoned it, though perhaps I'll finish it someday for the NT. Anyways, really like the idea and you've really done it well.
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Post by hat on Feb 24, 2007 16:12:55 GMT -5
Wait, no... It was posted on there. xD! ...Hmmm, anyone want to review Dork, The Little Known Hero...?
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Post by Deleted on Feb 24, 2007 16:57:05 GMT -5
*droolz in envy over totally awesome pic* It's so preeeetty . . . and eviiiiil . . . Rurouni Kenshin rly? =/ |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 24, 2007 20:46:19 GMT -5
Hey, this is my 888th post! That's cool. ^_^
A Simple Guide to the Site Spotlight by unstealth
This was a very simple and easy-to-follow guide, so much good work with that. I feel the paragraphs in the earlier sections may have been broken up some, but it was alright as they were.
Though I doubt I'll achieve the site spotlight any time soon, if ever, this was a very helpful guide with points that I can certainly apply to any webpage I may design in the future, and I do have quite a few ideas for those.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 24, 2007 21:11:14 GMT -5
The Effects of Procrastination by puppy200010
Wait, where'd she get that FROSTY can of Neocola from? A fridge, perhaps? Great work there. ^_^
Anyways, getting past that nicely-placed and quite creative slip past the "no technologies" rule, I quite enjoyed reading this story. It was quite entertaining and very easy to read and fun as well. It was obvious very soon afterwards that she was dreaming, yet it was still fun to read. Lastly, the closing paragraphs were awesomely done and forced me into laughing. It was a great ending.
I...I just can't figure out if this was a comedic or non-comedic story. It seems to be both...
Anyways, I can sympathize with Ardana. I can't tell you how many times I've been so tired I've actually fallen back asleep in bed and dreamt I was going about the day and getting things done. It's a horrible shock to wake up at noon, look at everything waiting patiently to be gotten through, think, "But I already did all of this!" only to find that you had only dreamed it. ^_^
Oh, yes, I almost forgot - you get a cookie because I really enjoyed this story! *hands out cookie*
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I'm thankful I got the chance to meet all of you.
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Post by retired on Feb 24, 2007 22:42:05 GMT -5
huba's Comic(al) Reviews:
Spooky:
As always, made me snort. But that's good, because it means it was funny. The art is ever-beautiful and makes me feel all spooky inside. I heart Komo! XD
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Post by hat on Feb 24, 2007 22:56:13 GMT -5
Eek! +pushes her story+ Please please reveiw? I need critisism.
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