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Post by Nimras on Dec 7, 2006 1:02:21 GMT -5
A Question of Worth: Part Twoby extreme_fj0rd Ohhh… Now the title makes sense to me! I like the detail of just the utter mind numbing-ness of the class to Christopher. Especially the bug.  It’s amazing how those manage find your ears. (Especially since earwax is supposed to be a natural bug deterrent.) It’s funny how his entire mindset is parametered by what he doesn’t like though most of the story, it isn’t until the last couple paragraphs that he starts to view things from what he doesn’t like to what he does. I also like how the end of the story is in Sara’s POV, watching Christopher -- leaving his exact thoughts a bit of a mystery at the end.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 7, 2006 4:55:24 GMT -5
Dan & Nim, thanks for the reviews  Sorry I haven't got round to doing any yet - tough week - my Gran died so we had the funeral on Tuesday, and now I've got tonsillitis  I'll try to do some later today when I get back from the doctor. |
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Post by Nimras on Dec 7, 2006 13:37:40 GMT -5
In This Together: Part One
by rainbow_daydreamer
*laughs* This sounds disturbingly like some of my sister’s childhood experiences.
*blink* I remember this story! Didn’t you have us edit it once? Or the first chapter of it?
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Post by Nimras on Dec 7, 2006 13:47:39 GMT -5
Darkest Corner: Dig-dig-digging!by dark_elfa *laughs* We’re too depressed to work… I like the facial differences between Bruno and the grey pets. I wish I may, I wish I might...by squire_genevieve  The poor star… Everyone squishing it when they climb up. Like Santa’s lap, only not quite. Hot Stocks!by gliderames FIRE! It looks like the Draik has the same ability with stocks that I do. As soon as I buy them, they plummet. Chingo!by fuzzy_muu …That must be a very difficult puzzle… especially since all the pieces don’t seem to be there. Dream On #2by autoc007 Proof that bunnies are evil. I like the cloudy, fuzzy style of art work -- it makes the whole line between dream and not dream fuzzy. *grin* Meow?by edddibgaz The poor Meowclops… Too bad it worked during the plot. *FWOOSH goes the hair* I love his expression in his *inspiration!* panel. Digging Into Randomnessby pokemon_lunatic Err, in the first panel, is the Grundo levitating? Whoa, I think that little green Meerca is a random event magnet!
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Post by Nimras on Dec 7, 2006 14:13:59 GMT -5
The Provider
by playmobil_is_my_life
I think I’d kill Thomas after just a couple moments.
Hee!
I love the ending. *grin*
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Post by xanme on Dec 7, 2006 16:55:34 GMT -5
Thanks for the reviews, everyone. ^-^ Ah, I felt something was missing, next time I'll have to remember to do shadows from now on (I don't often do backgrounds, so I kinda forgot it that time ^-^;  . |
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Post by Deleted on Dec 7, 2006 20:54:24 GMT -5
ThankYou to EVERYone for the reviews. yes..  All my comics are done in paint, and I try to be detailed.. it takes soooo long for me to do them. Thanks So Much for the compliments on details. Makes me feel all glad I tried so hard. hehe. ;D I'll get my comic reviews in now. Darkest Corner: Dig-dig-digging!
by dark_elfaVery Nice Artwork.. I love the expressions. Took me a minute to get the funny part (my fault, lol). They TOTALLY should have given us shovels during the digging.. we would have been done a lot faster, lol.. Very Good. I wish I may, I wish I might...
by squire_genevieveOne of those Cute comics. The art was clean and bright, which was very nice. The dialogue was a little.. itneresting, but you deinfitely get the idea. I like the orange grundo.. he's cute. hehe. Nice Job. Chingo!
by fuzzy_muuhehe, I always love reading a comic that has SOMEthing that I've just never thought about on neo before. This was definitely one of them. Made me giggle. The cybunny is cute.. but the surrounding art makes me feel a little dizzy.. lol.. But very nice comic. Dream On #2
by autoc007That art.. is SO pretty.. and dreamy.. I love it. Very cute comic, and awesome art. very very nice. Meow?
by edddibgazhaha That is so cute. Why didn't I think of that? lol.. ;D very nice art, very great idea.. excellent execution. Very Nice Work. Digging Into Randomness
by pokemon_lunaticI liked the idea.. of four pets doing the same chore, and getting 'rewarded' differently. I'd be the one zapped by the bad events.. while someone else runs off with the brush. hehe.. I like the idea.. Cute night-like art too. Very nice. Hot Stocks!
by glideramesMeeeee. I won't review myself, of course. hehe. ThankYou all again for the reviews. *hugseveryone* I really appreciate the compliments and feedback. LuvAme... |
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Post by Nimras on Dec 8, 2006 23:57:26 GMT -5
I know, I know, I’m running late. Sorry, but I haven’t had any days off! (And won’t have any until Wednesday) Work is killing me. The Princess Lettersby myfallenrevival4 I do find it a little odd that Vyssa switched back and forth between calling her father “Daddy” at the very beginning and “Coltzen” though the end. I wasn’t around for the first Lost Desert plot, but I knew enough of the basic gist of it to follow your story. Those who didn’t know about king Coltzen at all might have been a little confused though, since the story style itself kind of takes for granted that you know who the two writers are and the basics of their life. This part made me laugh: |
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Post by Nimras on Dec 9, 2006 0:04:44 GMT -5
Queen Fyora's Guide to Status Symbols
by dan4884
*snort*
Hee! I love how you made her seem like such a… I want to say “Glinda”. I’m going to think of Glinda every time I see Fyora now, and it’s all your fault.
There’s been some confusion over rooming here at Shiz…
Okay, I’ll stop. I really like how well this flowed, it read a lot like she’d just scribbled it down as thing came to mind when she had nothing better to do. *grin* Very nice. ^^
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Post by Nimras on Dec 9, 2006 0:10:47 GMT -5
100 Excuses Not To Clean Your Room
by petfriendamy
I’ll be perfectly honest. First thing to run though my head at the tile is …Oh… a list article. Normally, I confess, I’d just skip right over it.
…You know, I think my sister has used most of these arguments. (Minus Sloth and Jelly World) That is disturbing.
I love the ending though:
*snicker*
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Post by Nimras on Dec 9, 2006 0:20:09 GMT -5
CCR: Instincts by Nimras - Okay, so he's safe. YAY! I really liked the ending, where Mareian almost admits she thinks Jeran is cute. *snicker* However, it ended sort of abruptly for me. Maybe it is because I am used to your series being 12-parters. But overall, I liked the different direction this CCR took. I'm looking forward to seeing if that little Ganuthor is going to be character in the upcoming CCR series. ^_^ Hehehe, that one part about Mareian almost admitting she though Jeran was cute was the most commented by neomail part of this whole series. ...Mostly because people didn't get it and asked me what the joke was. *headdesk* They knew there was one -- they just couldn't tell what it was. I do have plans for the little Ganuthor *grin* but it's not in the next series. The new one actually takes place before this one -- they didn't come out in order because I wanted "Instincts" to overlap with Halloween. *cracks knuckles* *Comment by Nimras* Holy Kau...  Chronicles of the Court Rogue: Instincts Lookie, finally came to this one x3 Started 22:10, finished 22:39. Result: I take about 40 minutes to read a six-parter and twice as long for twelve-parters. Logically enough. And why the first one with two parts took me half an hour is a mystery o0How you managed to pull these stories off with all these sparkles between Jeran and Mareian is beyond me >> Well, that sure was different from those usual court intrigues. A Werelupe Jeran is a pretty interesting idea and I like how you pictured it. The setting was different from the previous series aswell. It was a nice change (especially seeing my today´s crazy reading marathon... though believe me, I´ve been through worse. Harry Potter 5 in one day, anyone? x3 *is nuts*) Poor Danner always gets mocked so much x3 He could use a more serious spotlight one day... *mental image* xD See, proves my point about you getting away with the craziest things x.x Conclusion? Write more of these chronicles, really. And should you ever need someone to illustrate the chronicles, contact the people who work for my meepits and they will see if they can work something out ^_____^ *grin* I do plan on doing some more serious stuff with Danner in some of my upcoming stories -- Mareian just delights in messing with him, and since we usually see things from her point of view... Yeah. And thanks so much for the offer! I just might take you up on that someday. *grin* Not exactly a review but.. For CCR: Instincts, I love the end :3 I didn't realize the whole fishing thing (rather like Danner xD) for a second, then I reread it and it was amusing You've definitely made the relationship between those two concrete in this one, but without triggering the Neo filter GREAT JOB! <3 Like Hunty, I'm hooked on CCR! >.> I think my new series might get me slapped by Droplet with a wet fish... speaking of fishing... Chronicles of the Court Rogue-LAST PART OH NOES Awww, it's over! ;___; This was great, Nim, it really was. It wrapped it up nicely and I loved the line about Jeran never eating Mareian's food. ^^ Genius. Really, what else is there to say besides write more, soon please? XD You know... kind of on topic here, Mareian's actually a pretty good cook. Jeran's the one who can't cook. Thank you all so much for the reviews! *glomps* |
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Post by Brains on Dec 10, 2006 0:30:07 GMT -5
Queen Fyora's Guide to Status Symbols by dan4884
Queen Fyora is, as we all know, an expert on Status Symbols.
I like the voice you used for her, and all in all it was a great article. Informative, sort of, and worth the time. It was an easy read, which is a big plus in a world of boring, dry articles. Great job!
100 Excuses Not To Clean Your Room by petfriendamy
I'm not a huge fan of list articles because they've begun to stale in terms of content, but since you're an NTWFer I guess I could make an exception and read it. 100 excuses... impressive.
A few of the excuses are hit-or-miss, but all in all it's a pretty solid list. I like the Meepits excuse, and the Jelly World one (who doesn't?). Good job, and way to stay in the same style.
CCR and Equinox reviews coming later
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Post by Hiccup on Dec 10, 2006 16:14:46 GMT -5
Bit late with this, but... thanks for the reviews on Chingo :3 Hurray for totally random obscure names! And coming back to neopets after 2 weeks away, only to discover a published comic and your first fanmail is a nice suprise |
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It’s amazing how those manage find your ears. (Especially since earwax is supposed to be a natural bug deterrent.) 
I'll try to do some later today when I get back from the doctor.
The poor star… Everyone squishing it when they climb up. Like Santa’s lap, only not quite.
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All my comics are done in paint, and I try to be detailed.. it takes soooo long for me to do them. Thanks So Much for the compliments on details. Makes me feel all glad I tried so hard. hehe. ;D I'll get my comic reviews in now.
