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Post by Nimras on Nov 12, 2006 12:26:40 GMT -5
What Lies Hidden in Your Closet: Part Sixby puppy200010 I’m confused, didn’t last week she say ‘even though some of them seemed to have no effect’? That kind of implies that some of them did… Or am I misunderstanding? I love the part about changing into a Blumaroo... the whole escapade tells you so much about Sury’s character. She really doesn’t have enough sense to fill a thimble.  I do think I would have preferred if you’d cut out the part about the stomach growling, it pulls you out of the … mini story?... and it’s kind of hard to slip back into it again afterwards. It’s a good re-intro, but there just isn’t enough time before the chapter ends to get sucked into it. I love the “I even checked under the rugs!” line.
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Post by Nimras on Nov 12, 2006 13:28:21 GMT -5
Everyone Has a Name: Part Two
by dark_goddess_rising
Roffle! This line strikes me as endlessly amusing.
Hey! *shakes fist*
I love little Sruthair. And I really like the whole idea of how the inventory and stuff works.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 12, 2006 21:54:26 GMT -5
Oh...so... the sadness hath cometh upon us at last... *tear*
Needed Adventure Part Twelve by Tdyans
Well, Tdyans, after three months, this has finally ended, and it ended beautifully.
After my weekly comments, I find there are few things left to say...
I must be honest, though, and admit that the reunion brought tears to my eyes, though if I'm being truly honest here, a sad song was playing at the moment and reunions are always emotional things for me to begin, though you did it perfectly, you should know.
Perhaps, in the future, I shall find time to read the rest of Needed... I would like that....
Though...in looking over your past works...I stumbled upon your All Ears comics, and though the art was simple, I found that they were quite funny, indeed! ^_^
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Post by Deleted on Nov 12, 2006 22:20:52 GMT -5
Shad and Saura: The Story of Elversti - Part One by Huntress
Though I had not been planning upon taking up any new series for a while, as a fan of the Shad and Saura comics, I was intrigued by this one and figured I'd check it out-- and I'm glad I did!
I was easily drawn into this, what with all the detail that it has and how easily it is to read and how...light it is, I guess I could say, even though I can tell it still has an air of seriousness to it. The magical aspects of it actually make perfect sense to me, and I am quite hopeful to see where they are taken from here. The illustration as well was a pleasant addition to the first part, as well, and was quite nicely drawn.
On the mechanical side of things, I think this was flawless, though in this sentence-- "If the magic is strong enough then leather only helps at certain occasions." --I can't quite tell if "then" is correct or if it should be "than," but really, I think you have it correct there, too.
And, of course, I just love the following:
I just wish my spellbooks were as active. >_< lol
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Post by PFA on Nov 13, 2006 15:08:13 GMT -5
Hey wait... isn't goldchocobo21 a forumer? Well, whatever... I'll just say now that it was pretty funny, and the art rocks!  |
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Post by kamikatze24 on Nov 13, 2006 15:29:52 GMT -5
I know I'm a little late, but thanks for the reviews ^^
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Post by Nimras on Nov 13, 2006 15:30:00 GMT -5
Aubrise and the Gebmid Mystery: Part Threeby rookina I love the ending paragraph POV shift for this week.  I also love the fact that Sarina was so ditzy as to not bring matches, but brought a candle. Though at times it’s hard to understand why she was in such a high position, from all the incompetence we’ve seen from her so far. She must have don’t something well to get her job in the first place. I like Princess Amira’s role so far. She’s concerned, but she’s not dropping everything to come and help. Instead she grabs every person who may be able to help and throws them into the task.
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Post by Nimras on Nov 13, 2006 16:13:16 GMT -5
Prophecy of the Second Equinox: Part Two
by laurelinden
Ohh, very spooky part. And disturbingly seductive, which I’m sure is the whole idea you were going for.
I like the idea of the music you used for getting Azraen -- my only confusion is that wouldn’t it have been heard by the guards once Rhoan started singing it louder?
I really really like how you made it a believable stance for Rohan and Azraen without either one of them thinking of themselves as ‘the evil side’.
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Post by Nimras on Nov 13, 2006 16:22:48 GMT -5
Shad and Saura: The Story of Elversti - Part One
by ssjelitegirl
*dies of laughter* Just the idea that it’s become common enough to be given a name…
I love the usage of pictures here. If I could draw, I’d love to do something like that in my stories -- it really helps the reader visualize what’s going on.
This is a very nice set up for the rest of the series -- I love your Shad and Saura stories to begin with, and I always love reading a new one.
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Post by Nimras on Nov 13, 2006 16:40:53 GMT -5
The Battle for Kreludor: Part Oneby azellica Commander Krule …. Awesome name. It’s just so… Buck Rodgers. I’m a little confused… Did the Fire Grundo not put on a space suit before walking out on the moon… but Zara did? That doesn’t sound good…
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Post by Nimras on Nov 13, 2006 17:07:53 GMT -5
One Last Song: Part Oneby mutedsanity I love how you compare what each of them is to the other. Poor Radom just doesn’t know to quit when he’s ahead, does he.  All in all, this is a nice character set up, can’t wait to see where you take it.
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Post by Nimras on Nov 13, 2006 17:18:01 GMT -5
Darkest Cornerby dark_elfa Err, I’m at a loss I’m afraid. *is bad because she does not get the joke* I do like the coloring you used for this comic though, very pretty.
Cure for the Itchby autoc007 Hehehe, I wondered about that with all the scratching the pet is doing in the intro screen… The overwhelming amount of pink is scary -- proof that Faellies are evil. I love the shadow and the expression in the second panel. Your Check, Gentlemen?by gliderames Hehehe, it’s funny because it’s true. I’m still trying to figure out how my *very bloated* Aisha can eat a three course meal, have a drink and dessert… and still not have any leftovers. I like the gradual fattening of the Draik too.
Brothers'n'Sister - Paint Brush Luck IIIby kamikatze24 Love the “To the rescue!” scene. *dies* Of all people to bring into this, Judge Hog. *snerk* *blink* Bikini… 
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Post by Nimras on Nov 13, 2006 17:28:43 GMT -5
Shadowflame: Prisoner
by brains03
LOVE the custom.
*boggles* This is an evil long running joke. I like it. ;D
I really like this new Shadowflame Darkhunter. She’s just so greedy and calculating. Are we going to see more of her?
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Post by kamikatze24 on Nov 13, 2006 17:31:19 GMT -5
Brothers'n'Sister - Paint Brush Luck IIIby kamikatze24 Love the “To the rescue!” scene. *dies* Of all people to bring into this, Judge Hog. *snerk* *blink* Bikini… [/quote] Well, it's a pool party, after all - and it got in ;P Thanks for the review, Nimras |
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Post by Nimras on Nov 13, 2006 17:37:05 GMT -5
Dear Crabby: Bring On the Happy!
by dan4884
The opening paragraph, while I’m listening to Bill Engval, is bad… *dies*
The italicized comments are brilliant.
I guess Crabby is channeling my sense of humor… The comments after Crabby’s “Happy” replies were the highlight of the whole article.
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