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Post by Dan on Jul 8, 2006 10:05:37 GMT -5
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Post by Achilles Deranged on Jul 8, 2006 10:17:42 GMT -5
I wrote the comic "Adventure!!!"... sorry, not sure how to link exactly.
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Post by Dan on Jul 8, 2006 10:33:30 GMT -5
I wrote the comic "Adventure!!!"... sorry, not sure how to link exactly. Added. ^^ Sorry about that, it's hard to recognize newer authors. |
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Post by Achilles Deranged on Jul 8, 2006 10:39:11 GMT -5
I wrote the comic "Adventure!!!"... sorry, not sure how to link exactly. Added. ^^ Sorry about that, it's hard to recognize newer authors. No prob at all. I'll do some reviews, but I have to head to work now. |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 8, 2006 11:18:16 GMT -5
Reviews: The Lost World of Stnaltia: Part Two:I really like how your story is going. You are quickly developing the plot but at the same time not excluding a bunch of detail.  It is a very interesting story so far. Oh, and it was a good idea to put the pronunciation guide at the end. Just out of curiousity, how many parts is your story? How to Play Yooyuball... Without a Yooyu!Very cool idea. I like how it was more of a real-life article rather than a Neopets article. Creative ideas, it makes me want to play.  A Manly Man’s Guide to Neopian FemininityHaha! This is quite a hilarious article, but does make a good point. I imagine there are way more females than males out there. Very entertaining. I must say, I loved this line: "You disgust me. Since you’re probably still reading, I’m going to take a guess, you’re a gross feminine girl wanting to see what the masculine upper power is up to! I knew it! " It's true! It's true! Nice job. Regarding the Exchange of Round, Wet ProjectilesWow unique game idea. Sounds fun! ^.^ I didn't know there were so many snowballs (Pictures!!  ). I found this article to be very entertaining. Good job! |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 8, 2006 12:40:03 GMT -5
Just flipping through, this looks like an awesome issue of the NT. I'll definitely get to some reviews today. n:)
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Post by Deleted on Jul 8, 2006 12:41:25 GMT -5
"A Manly Man’s Guide to Neopian Femininity" by Apollo
I read this article, intrigued by its headline, and I liked it. It has great humor, and I suddenly feel inadequate...I suppose I might never be very much of a manly man. But then, I'm not a Neopet, so...maybe I'm good. Overall, good work Apollo - I had a lot of fun reading this!
Adventure!!! by Achillesderanged
This is hilarious! I guess I adventure very much *shifty eyes*
Shoyru Squadron: Agents of Faerie by the_darkjedi
I read this and let me tell you, the visuals are awesome!
Dangerously Insane by Leah
ROFL! Quite funny...terribly insane. I liked it a lot!
Dan-Under The Iron Sea, thanks for adding my story.
You can't even begin to realise how exciting this is for me.
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Post by Dan on Jul 8, 2006 15:04:32 GMT -5
Chronicles of the Court Rogue Part Nine by Nimras:
Ooh, great part. Cool plot twist and writing's good as always. There were a few errors in there, for instance you said "Reaching the padded room exercise room," but nothing too major. This series is really genius and the next three weeks should prove to be great. ^^
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Psycho here but not for long
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Post by Psycho here but not for long on Jul 8, 2006 15:24:32 GMT -5
Here just to say thank you to Dan, and to Droplet for inserting those pictures.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 8, 2006 17:33:41 GMT -5
How to Play Yooyuball... Without a Yooyu!
Roffle! I love it! I was wondering how you were going to instruct us to make some of those balls. Wonderfully creative. I'd worry a little about the guttering taped to my arm but I probably wouldn't like anything taped to the inside of my arm. I liked how it was more of a real life article than directed toward the Neopets world. Usually you can only find those in game guides and writing guides. n:)
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Post by Deleted on Jul 8, 2006 17:41:12 GMT -5
A Manly Man’s Guide to Neopian Femininity
"For those who think that there should not be boundaries that preserve the way a being can express themselves no matter how out of “gender role” it may be, I applaud your efforts and beliefs, they are very respectable. "
Roffle! I love this article's tongue-in-cheek humor.
"Now, go out there and scratch!"
Awesome way to end the article. And I loved the line about how manly men would have stopped reading way before the end.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 8, 2006 17:45:21 GMT -5
Regarding the Exchange of Round, Wet Projectiles
You actually do this? How fun!
Definitely a great idea for bored Neopians to amuse themselves with. You've probably started all sorts of "Dung" and "Pizza" snowball fights out there. And definitely gave me an idea if I ever feel up to coordinating an event here at NTWF. This year, we're not only going to exchange gifts, we're going to pelt them at eachother! n;)
In all seriousness, good idea to point out some rules, helpful tips, and variations on the game. I was having fun just reading about it.
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Post by Achilles Deranged on Jul 9, 2006 1:11:24 GMT -5
Regarding A Manly Man's Guide to Neopian Femininity
When I first read it, I thought "Oh man, this is pretty risky for a NT writer," since it deals with the touchy aspect of gender roles. Still, I really enjoyed, and related, being a guy and all. I saw the title and thought "YES. This is the article for me."
... the funny thing is, the first time I was reading it I got distracted and didn't make it to the end, so you REALLY hit it on the head at the end.
Regarding Dangerously Insane
I thought this one was hilarious. The idea was clever to begin with, but what sold it to me was the execution... namely, her reaction, immediately followed by "hey! A lever!" Seriously, really well timed.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 9, 2006 9:24:49 GMT -5
How to Play Yooyuball... Without a Yooyu!Roffle! I love it! I was wondering how you were going to instruct us to make some of those balls. Wonderfully creative. I'd worry a little about the guttering taped to my arm but I probably wouldn't like anything taped to the inside of my arm. Thank you And you're supposed to be wearing long sleeves I haven't got anyone to play it with though, so I'm waiting for other people to tell me if it actually works! |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 10, 2006 4:43:41 GMT -5
I finally got round to doing some reviews Dangerously InsaneVery simple and very funny - I love your art Leah Shoyru Squadron: Agents of FaerieI've only recently started reading these, but they're amazing! I love the art, I love the story, I love the concept - it reminds me of Saturday morning cartoons I used to watch as a kid  Adventure!!!Another very simple one. It's very good and you got the timing spot on A Manly Man’s Guide to Neopian FemininityLove this, especially the last two paragraphs Regarding the Exchange of Round, Wet ProjectilesI love snowball fights! We did this a lot on the LAT board during the LDP, but I didn't realise it was so widely done, or that there were so many snowballs, come to that! |
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neo username - dan4884 
It is a very interesting story so far. Oh, and it was a good idea to put the pronunciation guide at the end. Just out of curiousity, how many parts is your story?
). I found this article to be very entertaining. Good job!