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Post by Deleted on Dec 9, 2005 17:31:52 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Dec 9, 2005 17:59:36 GMT -5
Reviews for When the Weather is Grey: Part 3 would be greatly appreciated  . |
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Post by Dan on Dec 9, 2005 18:25:14 GMT -5
Reviews also for Sight Part 3 requested. |
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Post by Deleted on Dec 9, 2005 18:30:43 GMT -5
I'll see if I can get around to article and short story reviews...
If anyone would like to review my article "Karma Comes Around" it would be greatly appreciated.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 9, 2005 18:35:54 GMT -5
If someone would review Nina's comic and mine.... I'd appreciate it very much.
We did a sort of collaboration.... thing ^_^
I'll review the comic section tomorrow.
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Post by Czenko on Dec 9, 2005 18:50:04 GMT -5
I'd love reviews for the second part of the pirate writer
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Post by Tiger on Dec 9, 2005 20:06:52 GMT -5
Reviews for the first part of Searching For Paradise are rewarded with White Weewoo shaped cookies! *Pats underused oven*
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Post by Tam on Dec 9, 2005 20:54:28 GMT -5
Got that animation-ish comic out this week. Any reviews would be great! |
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Post by Lau on Dec 9, 2005 22:55:44 GMT -5
I've love reviews for "The Mask of Calendroh: Part One." It's only two parts -- too long to make one short story. Looking forward to next week, too. |
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Post by bookworm on Dec 9, 2005 23:20:38 GMT -5
Reviews fro the Unraveling Truth? Hope you like it...
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Post by Tam on Dec 10, 2005 1:06:08 GMT -5
Okay... let's give this reviewing thing a try. I'll try to keep them to the point... so... comics... The Happiest Quiggle
by nut862I really liked this cartoon (once I could get it to load with my dial-up)... the drawings were as good as I know Nut's usually are, and the punchline was simple but funny. What I especially liked was the different personalities that you can make out from just a few frames. Poking fun at the "sold-out" screen was witty too. All that I noticed was that your colour lines went over the black outline in a few places, making the images a little less bold. Spooky
by ghostkomorichuGreat drawings once again by Komori. I love the way she uses a few very simple lines with just the right thicknesses at just the right points. It makes for a very smooth drawing. And the setup was cute; I honestly didn't guess the punchline coming, but when it came, I would have been giggling nervously if I weren't too busy admiring the artwork. Stuck in the Lost Desert
by spotthechelsey*grumble* Refuses to even start loading. I'll see if it's any different tomorrow... Notions and Nonsense
by patjade and 0523ckCute. It was easy to read and not too complicated. It wasn't exceptionally hilarious (I have to say the table threw my perception out of whack XD), but a lot of younger players are really gonna like it because they can actually understand it. Mootix Madness - We Have A Winner!
by leoness*goes to read first part* *reviews both parts together* I haven't really read that many comics on Neopets before (the dial-up and all), so I hadn't seen any of Leoness's other Mootix Madness entries before. Because of that, when I saw the first couple of frames, I laughed my head off. ^^ I have never seen anyone ever attempt to characterize a petpetpet before, but she does an excellent job of it. The expressions are enough to make anyone laugh by the end, and the story of the comic is lively and funny throughout. The only thing I have to say is that the difference between the computer art in the first and second parts was fairly bold, since Part 2 had more background, more gradient, texture, etc. -- but this part also depended more on the character's surroundings to bring the plot together, so more background detail was okay, IMHO. Beautiful work.  |
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Post by Spot on Dec 10, 2005 1:42:41 GMT -5
Stuck in the Lost Desert
by spotthechelsey*grumble* Refuses to even start loading. I'll see if it's any different tomorrow... I'm sorry... ;__; What speed connection do you have? 'Cause if you're on 56k, it takes approx. 1 min, 15 secs. I don't have a loading sequence for my comics yet, so it may be loading even though it doesn't seem like it ... it's on my to-do list. I'm almost, done, I just have to muddle through the script behind it. >_<; |
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Post by Nut on Dec 10, 2005 2:23:10 GMT -5
Thank you so much for the review, Tamia! ^^ I know the color lines overlap a bit; a lot of my comics had that problem, and I noticed it recently and have been trying to work on it. Thanks for pointing it out. ^^
More reviews for The Happiest Quiggle appreciated! :3
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Post by Tiger on Dec 10, 2005 6:35:28 GMT -5
My first reviews since Avalon was out...
Karma Comes Around- Nice job! I wasn't expecting all the questions that were there,
and you did a nice job with them!For some reason, I especially like the part about nobody caring that
Jhudora is misunderstood. I scored a 6-9 ^^ Yay good karma!!
Why Blue Draik Eggs?- Very nice art! The animation was pretty good too, especially
the clock and the Kad's shift eyes. You've gotta wonder what they do with those eggs...you can't
eat them, can you??
The Happiest Quiggle- Nice artwork! It would kill me to sit down and draw/color like
that..@_@ Especially all the nice shading you do...Love the slorg ^^
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Post by Deleted on Dec 10, 2005 7:30:35 GMT -5
Mootix Madness - We Have A Winner!
by leoness*goes to read first part* *reviews both parts together* I haven't really read that many comics on Neopets before (the dial-up and all), so I hadn't seen any of Leoness's other Mootix Madness entries before. Because of that, when I saw the first couple of frames, I laughed my head off. ^^ I have never seen anyone ever attempt to characterize a petpetpet before, but she does an excellent job of it. The expressions are enough to make anyone laugh by the end, and the story of the comic is lively and funny throughout. The only thing I have to say is that the difference between the computer art in the first and second parts was fairly bold, since Part 2 had more background, more gradient, texture, etc. -- but this part also depended more on the character's surroundings to bring the plot together, so more background detail was okay, IMHO. Beautiful work. Thank you for this thouroughly review Even though this comic is my 9th., I'm still experimenting with my style. That is why you see different layouts and the like. Hopefully I will settle with something soon xD |
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Thanks, Leoness! ^__^
