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Post by TK on Mar 2, 2003 17:47:18 GMT -5
Something Has HappenedFirst SHH I didn't understand... Really? I thought this was one of the funnier ones! Perhaps I didn't portray it well enough: They're Tyrannian. They speak with ughs. They get the disease Ugga Ugga. It makes any pet speak with ughs. They already speak that language so it's one of thos PoInTlEsS Random Events. |
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Post by Battlesunnn on Mar 2, 2003 17:47:40 GMT -5
[quote author=too_kule link=board=lobby&thread=1046381109&start=73#4 date=1046644978 Shoyru Squadron: Besides the Wocky fighting in the midst of the aliens and Shoyrus (was he even supposed to be there?) great job! And the alien version of Dr. Zappy was a nice touch. [/quote] I think that they put in the Wocky to show that Pets of all species are allowed to join the squadron. I liked the Wocky fighting amongst the Shoyrus... It was very, I dunno, memorable. The Wocky is my new favorite character...  |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 2, 2003 17:47:56 GMT -5
Ooooh! Hehe. I didn't know that the disease made any pet speak with Uggs.  Oh well, feel free to make fun of my SHH comic next week. |
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Post by teghan62 on Mar 2, 2003 17:48:08 GMT -5
Tedious... It measn that sometimes it tend to get a bit dull and repititive. But that only happened once throughout the whole story. Otherwise, it was quite good. Don't feel bad Teghan! Compared to some of MY earlier stories... ("Scardey Acara", "The Invisble Zafara Plushie"...) --"Flames" deserves a pulitzer! Really? Spiffy!  ...Whats a pulitzer? -suddenly feels stupid- |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 2, 2003 17:49:21 GMT -5
Nice chet flash referance Felabba! A bit subtle but mee maw.
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Post by TK on Mar 2, 2003 17:49:46 GMT -5
Ooooh! Hehe. I didn't know that the disease made any pet speak with Uggs. Oh well, feel free to make fun of my SHH comic next week. I'm sure it'll be great |
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Post by Battlesunnn on Mar 2, 2003 17:52:10 GMT -5
Really? Spiffy! ...Whats a pulitzer? -suddenly feels stupid- A very distinguished award for literature. It's been the subject of a couple "Calvin And Hobbes" jokes.  |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 2, 2003 17:52:59 GMT -5
Once more, my storie was rejected, maybe I should acctually send in a different storue. That would work!
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Post by TK on Mar 2, 2003 17:54:44 GMT -5
A very distinguished award for literature. It's been the subject of a couple "Calvin And Hobbes" jokes. Don't worry teghan, I didn't know what a pulitzer was...until now. I didn't like thios weeks' part of The Ultimate Time Twisters Adventure. Since death can't really be mentioned, Felicia changed the word to 'perished' and 'lives will be taken'. I noticed that, and realized how many times I used that word in my story. Made me feel...gothic. |
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Post by teghan62 on Mar 2, 2003 17:59:07 GMT -5
A very distinguished award for literature. It's been the subject of a couple "Calvin And Hobbes" jokes. Ah... okay. I need people's opinions on this... Flames has already gotten into the NT, but I have some Researchers story finished, too. (They're good... i love writing those ;D) So... I dunno if I should submit Researchers later, and keep working on the Flames, or submit Researchers right now, and work on both at once. I really dunno what to do. |
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Post by apparent on Mar 2, 2003 18:02:35 GMT -5
Ah... okay. I need people's opinions on this... Flames has already gotten into the NT, but I have some Researchers story finished, too. (They're good... i love writing those ;D) So... I dunno if I should submit Researchers later, or keep working on the Flames, or submit Researchers right now, and work on both at once. I really dunno what to do. Well, do you think you can work on both at once? If so, go ahead. I don't advise working on two things at once, though. Sometimes it's better to put your undivided attention into a piece of work to get the best results (unless you're just a very, very good writer, unlike me). I'd like to see both in the Neopian times too, but since Flames was in prior issues, maybe it'd be better to continue working on Researchers? |
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Post by noremac9 on Mar 2, 2003 18:10:24 GMT -5
Database Problems: Well-written, and really makes you wonder what does go on when Neopets is down... Database Problems: A tad predictable, but fun to read none the less. I think it should've got a custom picture... Thanks, Jan. =) Yeah, that's pretty much where the idea for the story came... Predictable? Eh... I see. I guess I can see that, yeah... Too bad. It wasn't really meant to be intellectually stimulating, or even a terribly original story, more of a light, fun read. My other short stories have all been pretty serious, dark, and point-proving. This one I decided to write just for someone to enjoy. |
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Post by terrabondayle on Mar 2, 2003 19:33:06 GMT -5
The Cheese Caper: *Snort* *Cackle* I LOVED it! Delightfully cheesey. I honestly can't really find a fault with it... (And the accent was done just fine, Catriona). Thanks, Battlesunn! It probably wasn't deliberate, but you even did the review title in my favourite colour. ^__^ As for no faults, after re-reading it, I noticed some punctuation errors, but it's too late to worry about those now. I might do some reviews later, but I don't really know yet. I'm pressed for time with some school and personal projects. |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 2, 2003 19:41:29 GMT -5
Gaaaaaah, can someone please review articles? I actually never got around to doing so, and I don't think I'll have time |
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Post by Kiddo on Mar 2, 2003 20:35:42 GMT -5
HEY NOREMAC!! Good job on the article! Look what I found in my inbox today:
Hi, remember me? I think I may have found a thing that mom would approve of!In the nt, theres an article on torturing scammers. In it, it mentions "kiddo." is that you? Because if its you, then mom couldn't accuse you of scammer.Now, I'm going to make some scammers life misserable
Sincerely,
muffinkuchen
We've got some new blood out there hunting the boards...
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Oh well, feel free to make fun of my SHH comic next week. 
