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Post by calvinseviltwin on Jan 5, 2003 17:55:51 GMT -5
Go ahead, then! ;D Then I can get an opinion on my story! Aww... party pooper! |
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Post by calvinseviltwin on Jan 5, 2003 17:56:31 GMT -5
besides, I gotta go~
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Post by peachifruit on Jan 5, 2003 17:58:40 GMT -5
Noooo, not party pooper, per say--party not-so-social-butterfly!  Okay, tell you what, how about we both do short story reviews? EDIT: When you get the chance, that is. |
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Post by Leb on Jan 5, 2003 18:19:28 GMT -5
I did the short story reviews! I'll do the new series reviews tomorrow or the day after, whenever I have time. Chart of my smiley system: ;D great, awesome  good  ok, meh  bad, didn't like  disliked completely  hated ;D "From the Case Files of Dark Night: The Dark Past" by 2hot4u181-- Great story, Megz! I can't wait for the next installment. ;D "The Land of Discard" by smudgeoffudge-- An awesome, interesting and original story. The part when the Draik Egg fell from the sky was so cute! *Award of Originality* "Boldheart: The Camp of Lancoth" by meratocat-- This is a continued part of a saga or something, and I didn't understand all the characters, but it was otherwise great. "The Case of the Pant-Santa" by leb388-- Can't review it; it's mine. ;D "Magnolia and Sys-op's Big Fight" by peachifruit-- This was hilarious! It was a great story from start to finish. *Award of Originality* "Meridell Mayhem" by rain_hunter-- I didn't really understand this story, and I couldn't keep track of the characters. "And Chaotic_Paradox Makes Three" by bluescorchio104-- An interesting story. I'd have liked to see it go on longer than end so abruptly after Chaos was introduced, though. "SilverEmerald: Eater of Plastic Butter Knives" by too_kule-- It could have been done without the blood. A bit of narration error, though: the story is from too_kule's point of view, yet it includes SilverEmerald at NeoSchool, and later SilverEmerald telling too_kule about NeoSchool. Otherwise, good story and great ending. *Award of Originality* "Po's Snowday" by polayo-- A good story, but a bit confusing in some parts. ;D "Prelude to Disaster" by clumsyminkytink-- Good story, and an awesome twist at the end. *Award of Originality*;D "Eyes of Twilight Blue" by lupeartist14-- A beautifully-written story, probably the best short story I've ever read! AWESOME! *Award of Originality* |
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Post by TK on Jan 5, 2003 18:30:34 GMT -5
"SilverEmerald: Eater of Plastic Butter Knives" by too_kule-- It could have been done without the blood. A bit of narration error, though: the story is from too_kule's point of view, yet it includes SilverEmerald at NeoSchool, and later SilverEmerald telling too_kule about NeoSchool. Otherwise, good story and great ending. *Award of Originality*Don't like the blood? Seemed delicious to me! Made me thirsty...j/k, I'm not a vampire. I was fully aware of the narration problem when I sent it in...um...SilverEmerald filled in the entire story to me and then I wrote it down! He told me what happened. |
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Post by peachifruit on Jan 5, 2003 18:52:20 GMT -5
;D "Magnolia and Sys-op's Big Fight" by peachifruit-- This was hilarious! It was a great story from start to finish. *Award of Originality*Thanks, leb! This is actually the first story I've actually been slightly proud of for a long while. ^^ Thanks for the award, too! I'll have to frame that and stick it on my neohome wall. |
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Post by Leb on Jan 5, 2003 18:59:29 GMT -5
Thanks, leb! This is actually the first story I've actually been slightly proud of for a long while. ^^ Thanks for the award, too! I'll have to frame that and stick it on my neohome wall. Sure, no problem. |
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Post by calvinseviltwin on Jan 5, 2003 19:48:27 GMT -5
Heeh. I do having something... a dare out of character for Night's next adventure. Can anyone see the dectective singing
"Sunday money happy days! Tuesday Wendsdau Happy Days! Thursday Friday Happy says! Saturday! Whatta day! Grooving all week with you!"
*grins* believe it.
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Post by oddhatter on Jan 5, 2003 20:32:52 GMT -5
I've read the comics and there's only one thing I'd like to say: Oddhatter, I deeply admire you. Thank you, Hippiesoul. I'm personally surprised that it was okay-ed...but I also get the impression Adam is not particularly involved with the Times. Oh well.=) |
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Post by Tdyans on Jan 5, 2003 21:51:15 GMT -5
Maybe not until they end, it's easier to review something if it's finished already. =) *cough* Well, uh, on that note... has anyone read Needed Too? It finally ended this week... I don't expect anyone to go out of their way to read it and if I get no reviews, I honestly won't be hurt because I've gotten enough good feedback as it's been running, but I do respect your guys' opinions, so if you've read it and have any, I wouldn't mind hearing them. Boy can I ramble, eh? Oh, and as always, I'd like to thank everyone who reviewed comics for the nice reviews for SHH. Oh, and mini-celebration: This week's issue gave me my 50th golden quill trophy. Yay!  |
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Post by Linnen Malfoy on Jan 5, 2003 21:53:15 GMT -5
Oh, and mini-celebration: This week's issue gave me my 50th golden quill trophy. Yay! Congrats. Tdyans! ^_^ |
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Post by twayblade807 on Jan 6, 2003 3:19:32 GMT -5
Yeah, I never do reviews.
Fortunately, I won't do so today ;D But I WILL say that I really liked the series called "How I Helped Destroy Neopia" by hippiesoul - I'm really looking forward to the next part(s)!
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Post by hippiesoul on Jan 6, 2003 5:12:29 GMT -5
It'll be a short reference, like Chet Flash. =) I'll also mention "Dr Sloth with My Little Uni underwear on his head singing showtunes"... =) |
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Post by hippiesoul on Jan 6, 2003 5:21:05 GMT -5
Yeah, I never do reviews. Fortunately, I won't do so today ;D But I WILL say that I really liked the series called "How I Helped Destroy Neopia" by hippiesoul - I'm really looking forward to the next part(s)! Thank you! ;D that's a story I'm proud about, mostly because I spent a ridiculous amount of time in it and it is 50 pages long - longest I've ever writen!  ~ Tdyans: I can review your story, I just need to finish reading it first  I started reading it because I really liked Needed, but then got behind, and I'm now missing a lot of parts. I'll read it when I come back from school (in about 10 or so hours), and then post my review, okay? |
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Post by Princess Ember Mononoke on Jan 6, 2003 11:54:18 GMT -5
My 100% Guaranteed No-Fail Method for Dealing with Rejections - A+ ;D Very good!! Whack! Whack! Cry!! DIE SHANKLY! Oh wait, you DID say you were kidding, didn't you...? Yay!!!!! You like me, you REALLY like me!!! ;D;D;D;D;D;D;D;D |
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I started reading it because I really liked Needed, but then got behind, and I'm now missing a lot of parts. I'll read it when I come back from school (in about 10 or so hours), and then post my review, okay?