Post by Deleted on Jan 12, 2003 14:26:17 GMT -5
Ok, heres my latest work, i just did it now. ITs not that great and i was really tired. All i need is some constructive critism and some ideas for one more section just to bring it up to the word recomendation.here it is:
If The Hidden Tower
Really Did Hide.
By Rishiy
FAERIE LAND – Many Neopians and people alike take to the sky everyday to travel to the wonder that is faerie land. Hundreds do the quests, buy the frilly little items and even search for the Hidden Tower its self. But what would we do if these luxuries disappeared?
Ok, lets not be to hasty, that’s not likely to happen is it? But lets see what would happen if our number on source failed us.
Faerie Paint Brush:
If the faeries were to disappear, surely they would take this with them. What would happen to all the faerie pets? Would their wings flutter to the ground like leaves off a tree? Would we have to look on helplessly as many an owner tried franticly to glue on their precious pets means of flight? If this happened, would we watch as pets plummeted out of the sky like meteors from the very skies above….oh…ahem. Well it wouldn’t be very nice would it? But also, these brushes sell form thousands as do their petpet counterparts, would one of our main selling points go down the toilet? Umm…if Neopia had toilets that is.
Faerie Land:
If the faeries went, would their home land come crashing through the clouds destroying everything it hit, or would it just spontaneously combust? Would all the people living there run around screaming as their homes burned to the ground?
Items:
Many of us buy the frilly little cutie pie doilies and dainties that go on sale in the bright pink shops. If they went, would we have imploded our last Floud with the power of carrots? Will we have munched our last cupcake? How will we sell these items? If it happens, I think well be seeing a lot more of that ugly grey retired sign. And the Hidden Tower. Will it reveal itself and be open for plunderers? Ok, maybe its not all bad, boy would I like to get my hands on a few of those….ahem…where was I?
Level Ups:
Without the help of our bottled companions, our pets will stay, wasting away as level 3 dust-weights, let alone feather-weights! All our watery attacks will run dry our air ones will plummet from great heights, our earth blows will crumble and our fire will extinguish! And that’s just no good! It will be an age of darkness, not even that with out a certain faerie sort, and we won’t be able to defend our selves. If it ever happens stronger pet will find a lot of seedy weakling on their front porch!
Ok, so maybe I’m being a bit hasty as I said, I mean our winged companions have no reason to leave us, do they?
Well actually yes. Let’s pick a random pet, oh lets say….Balthazar. This completely random individual has been capturing pets for years, just because he was pestered by a few bad ones in his time. And then, even the kindest of Neopians will only rescue one for the prize of an awesome ability. It doesn’t really say that much for what we think of them does it. Are we neglecting our faerie friends?
What if they do leave, how will we survive? Well for training, we still have the island training school. Well actually, no. The island it self is held up by Jhuidah, you guessed it, a faerie, so if she left the island would fall into disrepair and the school would close. The cooking pot we hold dear, for weapons and rare petpets would close soon after too.
Well there’s still the Snowadger and snow faeri…I’m not even going to bother. And not even the Snowadger will keep going. You see, the great ice beast gives out mainly neggs, and who else gives out neggs? The negg faerie! Can you work out what I’m getting at?
Well, I think I’ve proven my point, we neglect the faeries and they could be planning a secret escape right this minute! Well if they do go, at least we can rely on Chet Flash! Ummm, actually, I think I better go do some grovelling to Fyora!
If The Hidden Tower
Really Did Hide.
By Rishiy
FAERIE LAND – Many Neopians and people alike take to the sky everyday to travel to the wonder that is faerie land. Hundreds do the quests, buy the frilly little items and even search for the Hidden Tower its self. But what would we do if these luxuries disappeared?
Ok, lets not be to hasty, that’s not likely to happen is it? But lets see what would happen if our number on source failed us.
Faerie Paint Brush:
If the faeries were to disappear, surely they would take this with them. What would happen to all the faerie pets? Would their wings flutter to the ground like leaves off a tree? Would we have to look on helplessly as many an owner tried franticly to glue on their precious pets means of flight? If this happened, would we watch as pets plummeted out of the sky like meteors from the very skies above….oh…ahem. Well it wouldn’t be very nice would it? But also, these brushes sell form thousands as do their petpet counterparts, would one of our main selling points go down the toilet? Umm…if Neopia had toilets that is.
Faerie Land:
If the faeries went, would their home land come crashing through the clouds destroying everything it hit, or would it just spontaneously combust? Would all the people living there run around screaming as their homes burned to the ground?
Items:
Many of us buy the frilly little cutie pie doilies and dainties that go on sale in the bright pink shops. If they went, would we have imploded our last Floud with the power of carrots? Will we have munched our last cupcake? How will we sell these items? If it happens, I think well be seeing a lot more of that ugly grey retired sign. And the Hidden Tower. Will it reveal itself and be open for plunderers? Ok, maybe its not all bad, boy would I like to get my hands on a few of those….ahem…where was I?
Level Ups:
Without the help of our bottled companions, our pets will stay, wasting away as level 3 dust-weights, let alone feather-weights! All our watery attacks will run dry our air ones will plummet from great heights, our earth blows will crumble and our fire will extinguish! And that’s just no good! It will be an age of darkness, not even that with out a certain faerie sort, and we won’t be able to defend our selves. If it ever happens stronger pet will find a lot of seedy weakling on their front porch!
Ok, so maybe I’m being a bit hasty as I said, I mean our winged companions have no reason to leave us, do they?
Well actually yes. Let’s pick a random pet, oh lets say….Balthazar. This completely random individual has been capturing pets for years, just because he was pestered by a few bad ones in his time. And then, even the kindest of Neopians will only rescue one for the prize of an awesome ability. It doesn’t really say that much for what we think of them does it. Are we neglecting our faerie friends?
What if they do leave, how will we survive? Well for training, we still have the island training school. Well actually, no. The island it self is held up by Jhuidah, you guessed it, a faerie, so if she left the island would fall into disrepair and the school would close. The cooking pot we hold dear, for weapons and rare petpets would close soon after too.
Well there’s still the Snowadger and snow faeri…I’m not even going to bother. And not even the Snowadger will keep going. You see, the great ice beast gives out mainly neggs, and who else gives out neggs? The negg faerie! Can you work out what I’m getting at?
Well, I think I’ve proven my point, we neglect the faeries and they could be planning a secret escape right this minute! Well if they do go, at least we can rely on Chet Flash! Ummm, actually, I think I better go do some grovelling to Fyora!