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Post by Lau on May 25, 2005 12:43:25 GMT -5
*Clicks random area and finds self here*
Whoa. 0.o This is different. Looks interesting -- part six, eh? *Goes to look for parts one through five*
Owwy, poor Blub!
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Post by Sirius on May 25, 2005 16:53:12 GMT -5
This one ain't that long. I promise the next one will be EXTRA EXTRA long.
Seven Bloody Walls
“Where did Carrie go?” came the frantic cry that morning.
A group of people immediately set up a search party and split up, wondering where the girl could have gone. Everyone expected the worst – Carrie would be in some room, blood gushing around her, heart stopped. The groups slowly searched around the Forum, thoroughly checking every room.
Only a few hours after the search began, Nina shouted out, “I found something!” The group rushed over to where she was standing, something long and stringy in her hand. “It’s...Carrie’s hair.” Nina was only holding a handful of the hair, which was blood soaked. More of the red covered hair could be seen behind her, thrown around the room.
“She’s dead...” came a gasp from Wolf, as she dropped to her knees and put her head in her hands. “What’s happening here!?!”
Everyone was silent until Eri, who was not present at the time, screamed loudly. The crowd went running to where she was standing, hand over her mouth, and looked inside the room. Many others covered their mouths also and a few went into the corner to vomit.
Inside the room, bloody bags were filled with body parts. A fraction of what looked like the large intestine was hanging from the fan on the ceiling. Blood was on the walls and on the left wall, written out in the blood was letters which took a moment to comprehend but finally set in. Carrie will burn in hell.
A chilled and shocked silence followed.
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Post by Deleted on May 25, 2005 16:57:13 GMT -5
This is so bloodily great. XD Good job. I'm lovin' the deathness of it all.
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Post by Killix on May 25, 2005 17:03:39 GMT -5
Carrie's death has to be ranked #1 so far XDXDXD
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Post by Deleted on May 25, 2005 17:10:47 GMT -5
Carrie's death has to be ranked #1 so far XDXDXD I dunno, Blub's was great!
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Post by Deleted on May 25, 2005 17:15:52 GMT -5
Oh god. I think I'm going to barf. *falls over*
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Post by Kat on May 25, 2005 17:21:35 GMT -5
Ooh, the blood and the gore.
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Post by Killix on May 25, 2005 17:23:55 GMT -5
Carrie's death has to be ranked #1 so far XDXDXD I dunno, Blub's was great! Hmmm, I'd say Blub's is ranking a close second ;D
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Post by Deleted on May 25, 2005 17:30:27 GMT -5
I dunno, Blub's was great! Hmmm, I'd say Blub's is ranking a close second ;D Yeah. It was just cooler for me because we got to witness the actual death. But this one had intestines ;D
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Post by Deleted on May 25, 2005 17:31:54 GMT -5
Hmmm, I'd say Blub's is ranking a close second ;D Lol, I agree. ^^ Nice job again, Sirius. Poor Carrie. ;_;
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Post by Sammy at school on May 26, 2005 5:16:16 GMT -5
;____; I had a nightmare about your story last night, Sirius. I'm staying away from this story for a loooooong time........................
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Post by ncwidt5895 on May 26, 2005 8:27:03 GMT -5
Yikes, you STOLE MY GUTS. *whines* My pooooor abused guts. ;--;
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Post by neonick on May 26, 2005 10:10:24 GMT -5
... <__< Hmmm... another suspicious death, and perhaps the most suspicious yet... I DEMAND CLUES AND EVIDENCE! *Starts smoking a pipe and muttering to himself in an eccentric but wise way*
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Post by Zylaa on May 26, 2005 12:16:13 GMT -5
Yikes, you STOLE MY GUTS. *whines* My pooooor abused guts. ;--; So what's suffering more, your guts or NSQ's spleen? ;D EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK. Disturbing. Except when I got to the part about the large intestine I was forcefully reminded of dissecting pigs and all that, so it lost some of it's horror.
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Post by Sirius on May 27, 2005 17:26:40 GMT -5
The next chapter should be up later tonight/early tomorrow. I expect it to be quite lengthy (about 1000 words) and have the first clue. But I haven't started writing yet so I dun really know...
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