Post by Lappi on Jan 21, 2003 16:58:28 GMT -5
Err . . . Untitled.
I wasn't sure which board to put it in, so I just chose randomly. Hey, I'm kidding. -.-
Anyways, I have no name for this poem, but I got an idea from . . . someone . . . but their poem was much better than mine, anyway. Don't worry about it.
I walked through out old Neohome
Pondering of many things.
Where had you gone long ago?
Had you truely left me alone? (doesn't have a very good rhymn)
Had you forgotten the past?
Had you forgotten the memories we shared?
Had our friendship broken at last?
Were you just there, or had you really cared?
Tears streamed down my cheeks
Just remembering you.
I thought we were both unique
And at the same time, alike too.
Our dust-covered Neohome
lay abandoned and wrecked.
The clock ticked like a metronome
Yet we and our home used to be perfect.
I remember the joy
When I first laid eyes on you.
When I recieved my first toy
When our troubles seemed through.
Do you not remember
When I had first recieved wings?
We both felt great being together.
We both loved each other inspite of everything.
To say we didn't love
Would have been untrue.
Our spirits reached the skies above
But now I just wanted to say my last "I love you".
So it was goodbye at last
As I lay against the cold wall.
It all seemed to fast.
Thinking about you
Until I finally leave.
Until I drifted to the sky.
Until I was with the faeries.
Until I found true peace.
Goodbye . . .
Okay, I know it sucks like heck. But I was just bored I have something else for you that might be helpful. Now, this is where you can TRUELY tell I'm bored. I've listed some nice little synonyms for some words.
Put ~ Place, lay, insert, deposit, stand, mount, get (bleh)
Cry ~ Mope, weep, shed tears, wail, sniff
Drop ~ Descend, leave, dip, sink, fall
Movements ~ Run, walk, march, hop, leap, dash, leave, move, scramble, shot, stampede
Place ~ area, estate, home, location, position, residence, scene, land, surroundings, whereabouts
And last but not least . . . say. Oy vey.
Reply, read, stammer, pipe, squeak, squeal, mumble, mutter, whisper, talk, speak, suggest, shout, yell, cry, demand, exclaim . . .
or you can put stuff like umm . . . if your character is lying, you would put, "blah lied." And depending on how the person is saying stuffies, those are the discriptions . . . eg "blah stammered fearfully."
I wasn't sure which board to put it in, so I just chose randomly. Hey, I'm kidding. -.-
Anyways, I have no name for this poem, but I got an idea from . . . someone . . . but their poem was much better than mine, anyway. Don't worry about it.
I walked through out old Neohome
Pondering of many things.
Where had you gone long ago?
Had you truely left me alone? (doesn't have a very good rhymn)
Had you forgotten the past?
Had you forgotten the memories we shared?
Had our friendship broken at last?
Were you just there, or had you really cared?
Tears streamed down my cheeks
Just remembering you.
I thought we were both unique
And at the same time, alike too.
Our dust-covered Neohome
lay abandoned and wrecked.
The clock ticked like a metronome
Yet we and our home used to be perfect.
I remember the joy
When I first laid eyes on you.
When I recieved my first toy
When our troubles seemed through.
Do you not remember
When I had first recieved wings?
We both felt great being together.
We both loved each other inspite of everything.
To say we didn't love
Would have been untrue.
Our spirits reached the skies above
But now I just wanted to say my last "I love you".
So it was goodbye at last
As I lay against the cold wall.
It all seemed to fast.
Thinking about you
Until I finally leave.
Until I drifted to the sky.
Until I was with the faeries.
Until I found true peace.
Goodbye . . .
Okay, I know it sucks like heck. But I was just bored I have something else for you that might be helpful. Now, this is where you can TRUELY tell I'm bored. I've listed some nice little synonyms for some words.
Put ~ Place, lay, insert, deposit, stand, mount, get (bleh)
Cry ~ Mope, weep, shed tears, wail, sniff
Drop ~ Descend, leave, dip, sink, fall
Movements ~ Run, walk, march, hop, leap, dash, leave, move, scramble, shot, stampede
Place ~ area, estate, home, location, position, residence, scene, land, surroundings, whereabouts
And last but not least . . . say. Oy vey.
Reply, read, stammer, pipe, squeak, squeal, mumble, mutter, whisper, talk, speak, suggest, shout, yell, cry, demand, exclaim . . .
or you can put stuff like umm . . . if your character is lying, you would put, "blah lied." And depending on how the person is saying stuffies, those are the discriptions . . . eg "blah stammered fearfully."