Short Story in progress

[lovejoy1997]

I was working on this short story that focuses on Helena White and her friends during the grey curse but I dunno how it goes. Can you recommend some sequences I can add and subtract?

docs.google.com/document/d/1GnnEF5Ntpxeg_sDz2eZg3wR3KU-x5dwetPsh5r30yWc/edit