Post by Shiloh on Jul 10, 2024 8:51:20 GMT -5
Hi there. I've written a couple of things for the NT and I always enjoy it, although I don't do it enough haha.
My most current project is a short story based off of the new Void Within plot. I was attempting to work on a story for the Motions in Motion collab and promptly got turned around and did a 180.
I was wondering if anyone would be interested in editing it for me? For general content, it basically goes over one of my pets, Zabuzaf, waking up to Brightvale being under siege. This was upsetting for her, because she previously lived nearby where Faerieland fell and lost her town to the wraiths. So there are some traumatic reactions, but nothing is dwelt on and things resolve in a way a friend of mine (who does not play Neo) described as "sweet". Just please, if you're worried about this being potentially triggering/upsetting for you, take care of yourself first!
I'm primarily looking if the lore I have established for Zabuzaf and my other pets is acceptable for the NT, and if not, what I might be able to do to make it be that way. But if there's any typos or things that don't make sense, catching those would also be appreciated.
There are also a lot of names mentioned within the story (with several of them showing up and interacting), but all of the names are pets I own (and sometimes nicknames; I own some pets with more or less gibberish names and some i/L replacements) - my canon for my pets is that they all live in a giant manor in Brightvale 
Anyway, if you're interested, you can post here or send me a PM. I would prefer to send the story to you via PM - my anxiety would not appreciate me posting it publicly until it's been edited LOL. I do have pretty severe social anxiety overall, thus why I have not posted an intro, just throwing myself here and going "help plz?"
Thank you in advance ♥