Crime Show Book - Seeking Critique

[June Scarlet]

Hello! You might remember last year when I did my Crime Show webcomic. Well, I've been compiling them into a book format this year, along with some behind the scenes and new artwork. It's a way for me to practice everything that goes into making a book, since the main content is already completed.

I am very close to completion, and am seeking critique on the manuscript before I send it off to be self-published.

Current concerns:

- Afterword content (keep sketches??).
- Changing from passive to active voice.
- How to format the copyright page.
- Which age-range is it geared towards?

Please reach out if you are interested and able to help! Thank you!

[Lizica]

I could try to help if I can! I love seeing your comics, and that you're almost done with making the Crime Show book is awesome, aaaaa. =D

I'm also currently working with an old coworker for a formatting thing, so maybe I could ask him about the particularities of the copyright page for you?

[June Scarlet]

Thank you Lizica! I'm currently incorporating PFA's feedback, so let me finish up with that this week, and then I'll share with you.

And help with the copyright page would be appreciated. I basically looked at a bunch of different books, but I'm not sure what all the numbers mean or how I categorize my particular book. Some stuff was pretty easy to pick out, though.