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Post by lovejoy1997 on Jan 28, 2022 6:02:58 GMT -5
I fixed my story and added some additional dialogues and details on it but I was feeling like there is something missing in it. Let me know what can I fix there and how can I improve my story before I can submit it to NT. Find A Way |
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Post by Liou on Jan 28, 2022 6:53:19 GMT -5
I fixed my story and added some additional dialogues and details on it but I was feeling like there is something missing in it. Let me know what can I fix there and how can I improve my story before I can submit it to NT. Find A WaySorry, I haven't had time to look again while working this week! Yes, from checking quickly I can tell there are still issues with verb tenses, to start with. Would you like detailed feedback with every little thing pointed out to you? If so, it would be better to allow comments on your document. I could look over it again this weekend~
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Post by lovejoy1997 on Jan 28, 2022 7:05:14 GMT -5
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Post by Stephanie (swordlilly) on Jan 29, 2022 20:23:47 GMT -5
I went through and highlighted some small issues I noticed on the first page. Do you happen to have access to Microsoft Word, by any chance, on a school or library computer? Word's grammar check can help you catch a lot of tiny errors. It'll automatically highlight things like mismatched verb tenses with a green squiggly line, and you'll be able to click to see the suggested edits.
The story is very close to being done, I think! It's mostly just small grammatical issues that are holding back some of its meaning.
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Post by lovejoy1997 on Jan 30, 2022 17:49:45 GMT -5
Ok, thanks
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