What do you think of my comic ART? :D

[jesillu]

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I kinda messed up and didn't delete my sketch layer. Think this art is cute?

Also is the writing too hard to read when I hand write it?

Cheers for your opinions!

[Ginz ❤]

Your art is very cute!! I really like your simple style with bold shapes and colors. Your handwriting is also very neat, I had no problem reading it at all. (I was amused by the helmet filling up with tears XD Poor Alien Aisha!)

[June Scarlet]

I remember your comic! It was good. Very clever, and the art was cute. I didn't even notice the sketch layer was still there until you mentioned it, to be honest.

You handwriting is readable, but I might use a thicker line to begin with, because it looks like you had to go over each letter twice, which is just more work for yourself.

But yeah, I like your comic art. :3

[charming thievery]

Aww, I like your art! It's super cute! ^^ (I also wouldn't have noticed your sketch layer if it hadn't been pointed out.)

As for the text, it's still readable. I think it's mainly the occasional white specks in the lettering that sometimes makes it not as clear in places, but June Scarlet 's suggestion should help with that. I personally prefer the handwritten touch for lettering, and yours is very nice. :3

Also, your punchline is very funny! Haha. xD

[Twillie]

Yeah, like everyone else said, I really enjoy your art in this comic, it's simple but appealing and does everything to sell the punchline :3 I like how there aren't any black lines as well, it adds to the soft and cute designs of the characters, and it matches well with their bold shapes.

I might suggest varying up poses more between panels. While the simplicity works here, as opposed to super exaggerated poses, creating even subtle variations between panels can make it even more appealing, as the eye is given more movement to track, and the energy of the comic can be easier to read.

The writing reads perfectly fine for me, and I love your style of handwriting! Fits right in with the art of the comic, and handwriting in general can make it feel more personal :3

[Christos]

You know I love your art and the handwriting is legible :3
I thought the sketch layer were shadows... xD