Post by Lylah on Oct 26, 2014 22:15:07 GMT -5
So I've written series before, and usually I have a goal with them: in the first one (Hero of Shenkuu, four parts), I kind of wanted to see how far I could push limits and I wanted to do the perspective of a bad guy who doesn't see herself as a bad guy, and in the second one (With Many Faces, five parts) I wanted to play with time travel paradoxes.
I know the stories are super flawed; I've read them over multiple times to edit them and such. I was just wondering if you guys could tear either of them apart and let me know what you don't like about a certain storytelling technique, or my writing style, or anything like that.
So critique is welcome, but I'm literally just asking you to tear them apart here. I want to see what's wrong with them so I can try to avoid those problems in the future.
You don't even have to read them all the way through if you decide they're too much; you can just read the first part if that's all you have time for and I'd be cool with it. Thanks so much in advance!
I know the stories are super flawed; I've read them over multiple times to edit them and such. I was just wondering if you guys could tear either of them apart and let me know what you don't like about a certain storytelling technique, or my writing style, or anything like that.
So critique is welcome, but I'm literally just asking you to tear them apart here. I want to see what's wrong with them so I can try to avoid those problems in the future.
You don't even have to read them all the way through if you decide they're too much; you can just read the first part if that's all you have time for and I'd be cool with it. Thanks so much in advance!