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Post by Jove on Nov 1, 2014 15:25:20 GMT -5
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Post by Kristykimmy on Nov 1, 2014 15:35:10 GMT -5
Corvus knows too much.
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Post by Yoyti on Nov 1, 2014 18:11:04 GMT -5
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Post by Sabre on Nov 1, 2014 18:31:34 GMT -5
In reference to the rebel safe house he just brought her to. It's the most exciting sentence evar, I know.
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Post by Kristykimmy on Nov 1, 2014 19:59:19 GMT -5
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Post by Yoyti on Nov 2, 2014 8:33:43 GMT -5
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Post by ♥ Lulu on Nov 2, 2014 8:38:48 GMT -5
The big bad of this plot is the government - or is it?! *twilight zone music*
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Post by Kristykimmy on Nov 2, 2014 9:08:18 GMT -5
I like writing Cassi. She's so awful and frank and such a good person under her murderous rages.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 2, 2014 19:54:26 GMT -5
Minerva be's cute, and Fia gets testy. Well, she's always testy.
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Post by Shinko on Nov 2, 2014 23:25:07 GMT -5
Excuse me while I die from overcute.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 3, 2014 12:59:08 GMT -5
Contextual note, Bangaa have two sets of long, floppy ears.
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Post by Blu on Nov 3, 2014 13:16:54 GMT -5
This is a fixed up sentence that @surfersquid helped me with by proofreading a story I hope to submit to the NT sometime later tonight. Thanks again for proofreading.
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Post by Kristykimmy on Nov 3, 2014 13:25:56 GMT -5
Corvus is the cheeriest person ever. Totes.
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Post by Breakingchains on Nov 3, 2014 20:50:56 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Nov 3, 2014 23:10:22 GMT -5
It's something of a challenge to write Fia's jealousy-fueled antagonism toward Arin without it coming off as an amateur attempt to aggrandize Arin, by suggesting that she's so super special and perfect that people only hate her because they're jealous. To be fair, Arin's life isn't as rosy as the picture Fia paints--Arin's got plenty of struggles and inner demons of her own to wrestle with, not to mention other outside antagonistic forces that aren't motivated by jealousy. And Fia actually has it really good, she just keeps sabotaging herself because of her own character flaws, and is probably projecting her frustration with herself onto Arin to some degree.
But, you know, having Fia ironically reference said aggrandizement makes it okay, right? <.<
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